Immortal Longevity for My Clan, Starting with Writing the Family Genealogy

The development is natural, without too many formulaic coincidences, and in the family depiction, each character demonstrates their role and value, rather than simply being a name and identity.

The writing is alright, but it requires a focused reading pace. The pacing is slow, mainly because the cultivation aspect feels almost nonexistent. The cheat-like abilities also disappear after the protagonist begins his cultivation.

The pacing is too slow. At first, people can get into it because of the sheer volume of content, but it becomes incredibly frustrating when you start watching for new episodes.

You should write this book well; really; this is called a slow burn; it's definitely a masterpiece with tens of thousands of subscriptions.

It's very comfortable to watch, but the pace is too slow. After practicing Qi cultivation, I feel no different from an ordinary person. I don't have any magic or need spirit stones.

Three monthly tickets are actually the biggest spender this month?

It's pretty good, just the pace is a bit fast. I'm still not fully recovered, so when will I finally be able to take a break?

Since the protagonist officially embarked on his cultivation journey, he hasn't written about his family's cultivation progress, nor has his family mentioned sensing any Qi. It's likely that his family members don't have much aptitude for cultivation. Hopefully, they won't suddenly become geniuses later on! Life really does go by day by day, doesn't it? Isn't the pace a bit too slow?

It's well-written! I have a small suggestion: could you explain where the protagonist's family got their paper? They seem to use it constantly for recording everything, making it seem like they have an endless supply. There's no mention of buying paper, and its origin isn't explained in the text; it feels like it appeared out of nowhere.

This synopsis reads like a wish-fulfillment novel; in reality, it's about life gradually improving, little by little.