Mortal: Feng Shui Evil Cultivator Zhang Tie

Do you really think there is nothing wrong with pretending to be a powerful monk in the spiritual world and asking for the skills of the God Transformation Stage? It's very reasonable to ask for resources, but it's not necessarily a matter of skill, right?

Very good, this entry point is the best among all the time travel novels I have read. Goldfinger is not too strong, but it is more exciting, and the knowledge of Feng Shui is solid. Generally speaking, it is non-toxic, edible, and an excellent food!

Zhang Tie, both parents will be killed by Doctor Mo

My suggestion is, don't do anything that goes too far. For example, if you try to trade with Xiang Zhili in the Bloody Forbidden Land, the whole book you wrote will definitely collapse.

The writing is very good and definitely worth reading. Although the number of words is not many, I can already see the tendency of good books. Good luck to the author.

It's useless for you to flatter Han Paopao.

Usually if the protagonist is Zhang Tie, he will usually rush into the street. Yours should be no exception. I hope you can turn things around.

You're just trying to refine your energy to deceive yourself into becoming a god, aren't you afraid of being searched for your soul?

Come on, I look forward to the author's follow-up performance. The idea of ​​using Feng Shui to change luck is quite interesting. I'm optimistic about you, author.

This extremely dazzling idea of ​​seizing a body is really well written. Is it your original idea? I've never seen it before, so give me a monthly pass.

If you feel happy and run away, Doctor Mo will definitely kill your original parents and do nothing.

It just feels like the pace is not as fast as before You know, it's already 200,000 words, and the protagonist hasn't established a foundation yet The fans either have to break through the realm quickly, or write new ideas. For example, Feng Shui until now has been about binding luck and checking other people's luck. It feels like it's starting to deviate from the topic. Feng Shui's methods of finding dragon acupuncture points, modifying the terrain, creating blessed places, etc. Are not involved. Didn't you create a force? You should speed up the pace and start getting into the theme. Your book should actually develop towards the business level. For example, the pioneering forces develop in the Dao Demon Catastrophe, use the teleportation array to sell resources on both sides, use the combination of Feng Shui and formations to open up a holy land, and then the faction will ascend, etc. Your Feng Shui can completely allow the protagonist to deduce a higher level, similar to the Yuantian Master who covers the sky. After all, the protagonist has this potential. Anyway, don't deviate from the topic. As long as there are new ideas, the results of ordinary people will not be too bad.

Can anyone comment on Shen Nong? Is there any potential?

I've read Mortal twice. It's written by this author so far. It's very well written and easy to read.

I originally thought that the meeting with Xiang Zhili would be embarrassing, so I kept watching it. Today I went to watch it with the mentality of skipping to watch. I found that the meeting with Xiang Zhili was very enjoyable. Xiang Zhili's recognition of the protagonist's many treasures (cheating and abduction) plus the precedent of the Cave Sky Rat King can make it not embarrassing. In addition, it is okay to mention that the mortals at the starting point are really bad.

Moreover, the most important thing about whether the results are good or not is how well the writing is done. If the Panlong fanfic is well written, it can still be ranked on the best-seller list. If you don't persist, the probability of success is basically 0

It's really beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this style of mortal flow. I'll definitely subscribe if there are others of this caliber in the future.

The writing is very good, but the number of words is too few now. Everyone is slow to get started. Come on, author!

It's well written, but the plot is a bit draggy.

What's going on behind Qin Xing and Ye Mie! Oops. The protagonist keeps explaining. There is a lot of news. It's not something ordinary people like the protagonist know at all.

The protagonist's golden finger should be of little use in the world of immortality! Because those are all spells created by mortals! Only useful to mortals

This cultivation of immortality is too low and has no imagination.