Football: I Started Stirring Things Up After Becoming Manchester United's Biggest Liability

Writing novels with AI in between? Who likes to watch your inner drama as a primary school student better than you?

There are 8 chapters in one game and the game is not finished. This rhythm is really a headache. . .

The rhythm is too fast, and the system is the same. If you have such a system and you are already the irreplaceable core of tactics, you have to earn points in a few unimportant games. The last point is the most uncomfortable. 70% Of the chapters are like giving us popular science or mixed with some things that are not the main story. For example, I was originally writing about the protagonist, and then I wrote about what happened to Ferguson and what happened to other people. Then there is no rhythm.

Slow pace, too much inner drama, no highlights, a waste of time, don't watch it

I guess he's another one who doesn't watch football.

Evaluate it, it's too poisonous, I'm asking you to quit. In the beginning, you write two chapters Two chapters don't count. You haven't finished writing yet. You were still confused for 5 minutes, as if you didn't react to anything. This is too poisonous. Brothers, I quit now.

You don't have any knowledge about football. What is Super League? The Golden Boot of the First Division is not valuable. You say yes, the Golden Boot of the First Division can at least help the Premier League team, but it is still looked down upon?

Author, your system has not played any role so far. If you want to slow down the rhythm, you should cancel the system. Don't rewards be settled in every game? I have played several games and I haven't seen the protagonist receiving rewards. Although the writing is good so far, the rewards that the protagonist strives to get are not available at all. It is like a painted pie that cannot be eaten. It feels no good.

He ran away after four chapters and had no sense of immersion. This is a common problem with another first-level basketball novel and two other entertainment articles I have read. I don't know why the current author is getting more and more engrossed in writing. Can you give me a stronger sense of immersion? What are you writing?

The only thing is that the morale of the substitute players will be weakened when the protagonist is included in the roster.