Entering the Tao: Asking God

Let's briefly talk about my work "Entering the Tao: Asking the Gods". The work follows the line of low-level cultivation and inquiry, focusing on the struggle of small characters to grow up, with the core tone of fighting injustice and seeking the avenue. There are currently many shortcomings: the internal disputes in the early stage are complicated, the character portrayal is not three-dimensional enough, the rhythm of the introduction of special abilities is unbalanced, and the development of the grand world view is slow. In the future, irrelevant branch lines will be deleted to enrich the character's mentality, unlock special abilities step by step, and improve the logical foundation. Subsequent plots will gradually expand the stage, uncover the deep secrets of the world, and elevate personal grievances to questioning the rules of heaven and earth. There are still many omissions in the story concept, and the writing rhythm and plot arrangement still need to be polished. I sincerely ask readers to give me your feedback and leave suggestions to optimize subsequent content.