Naruto: Jiraiya, I'm the True Literary Master

The original story of a five-year-old going to the battlefield was already monstrous enough, but I never expected there to be such a master who wrote about a royal uncle at the age of five.

A literary giant? If someone with a passionate heart can be considered a literary giant, wouldn't it be a grotesque act to serialize other novels?

What kind of nonsense is this first chapter? Instead of hiding their talents and finding a way to leave the ninja ranks, they created a genius?

The Literary Master System should grant attributes like [Photographic Memory], [Tentacle Monster], [Flowing Thoughts], [Knowledgeable of Ancient and Modern Times], and [Innate Ox-Horse Sacred Body], right?

After introducing a bunch of characters and laying a lot of groundwork, we finally saw the cheat codes in Chapter 5: the Eye of the Heavenly Emperor and the Literary Master System. The purpose of the Eye of the Heavenly Emperor is still unclear. This fanfiction can't be read without using your brain, it'll be very painful. The author likes to hide things.

Having read up to Chapter 10, I have to say, Conqueror's Haki isn't even that strong! Leaving aside its potential for growth, it's practically a god-tier skill for ordinary ninjas. As we all know, most ninjas are high attack and low defense; being stunned by Conqueror's Haki for less than a second in a battle could decide the outcome. Most importantly, Haki can be released at close range without hand seals; if used at point-blank range, most ninjas won't even have time to react.

I'm unhappy that the author didn't include Chiyo, even though I know it's difficult, but it's an order.

Not bad, it's not the same old formula. The lottery system uses more unconventional skills to counter various ninjutsu; the subversion of formulas makes it more interesting.

I thought this was a literary masterpiece, a story that would make the ninja world reflect on war, the daimyo system, and the one-country-one-village system. Turns out it's just a system novel disguised as a literary masterpiece.

I'd like to discuss a topic. In One Piece, why can't Ace die? Naruto, Rin, Minato, and Kushina cannot die? Why must we make up for these regrets? How did they become regrets in the first place?