The Rise of the Witch

Does the author even know what the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are? Only those who are invincible in heaven and earth are emperors. The battle between Zhuanxu and Shaohao was a struggle between heaven and earth; all other deities are inferior, and even so-called sages are just slightly inferior.

Witches are individuals among humans possessing extraordinary abilities. The so-called Lich War was essentially a battle between human warriors and wild beasts.

Why not publish the original chapters from that Douluo Continent fanfiction book as a separate book? They're really quite profound.

The protagonist feels like a well-trained dog. I don't see any fighting spirit in him. He's either blasting fish in the pond or crushing others with his war-warrior template. He just agrees with whatever others say, without any independent thought, yet he dares to say that cultivation is about gaining choices. With your easygoing nature, do you even need to choose? Isn't your choice inevitable?

The Three Pure Ones, sages, and the so-called Twelve Ancestral Witches—do they even deserve to compare themselves to the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors? Aside from Nuwa, who is indeed a sage, can the rest please stop trying to embarrass themselves by touching the soles of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors' shoes? After all, it's very difficult to clean something stuck to the soles of shoes.

That self-degrading asshole is disgusting to look at.

From the moment the protagonist agrees to the deal to become a bodyguard, he becomes a treasure-giving child. Especially later on, the women, despite being the weaker party and subordinates, show no self-awareness whatsoever, instead displaying a strange sense of superiority.

This book has always been teetering on the edge of being addictive! It's not exactly addictive, but it's always hovering on the edge!

This is a fantasy story that's even written into history. Even with a terrible synopsis, I have no desire to click and read it.

Not enough, please update soon (I've already voted for a monthly pass).