People Are Smiling Proudly, the Sword Comes Out of Huashan

The writing style of this book is good, and the unfolding plot also has new interpretations compared with the original work. However, the moral sense displayed by the protagonist as a time traveler is incompatible with modern people. It may be reasonable for Haoguo to decide that the protagonist is an indigenous person. But as a modern person who travels back and forth, his moral values ​​are not trustworthy. Therefore, as a reader, I find it very inconsistent and untrustworthy. The underlying logic is wrong and everything is wrong. So everyone thinks it is AI. If it is AI, it only means that AI cannot solve the logic of the world view. It is a pity, but the creativity is still good.

What a piece of shit, the time traveler doesn't know the plot and fucks the turtle male protagonist. It's so funny, does anyone see this?

I read the previous chapters in one go. The subject matter is okay, but I feel like I know the plot for a while and not for a while. What was said when the protagonist was not present suddenly became known to the protagonist again. The protagonist hurts Tian Boguang, and his companion Shu's reaction is also wrong. It was strange to meet Tian Boguang, Mu Gaofeng and Sanding there. Then Changbai Mountain felt very chaotic.

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The preface doesn't match the sequel, the characters are confusing, and the plot is a mess. The fighting ability is lost. He can beat Tian Boguang, but cannot beat the four beasts of Qingcheng. It should be that the AI ​​has not been trained well. Book friends, if everyone clicks in to see a piece of shit, then every piece of shit will be shit in the future.

AI writes articles without revising or polishing them. The characters and plot twists are confusing.

🎭 Character design: 0.5 Stars 🎬 Plot: 0.5 Stars ✒️Writing: 0 stars It's so poorly written and has so many problems, too many to count. I always feel that using AI to write books to defraud manuscript fees is illegal, but this is my personal feeling. In short, it is definitely unethical. So it is certain that the author has no morals. To sum up, it is extremely poisonous, logically confusing, and I don't know what to say.

Is this quality still recommended by the editor? How much did the author pay?

The time-traveling characters know a lot of martial arts in the gold system, but they don't know what's around them. The advancement of the plot is purely based on the literary youth, which disgusts the readers. The time-travelers don't know the details of Yue Buqun. I wrote more than a hundred chapters before and didn't put it on the shelves. I thought it was the literary youth's self-interest. However, after it was released, I subscribed and gave up. I can only say that the three-piece set of classic martial arts and literary youth will soon be cuckolded.

How did this mess end up in a potential new book?

This novel is most likely spelled by AI, so on the one hand, the details are very detailed, and on the other hand, it is logically inconsistent and full of errors.

The characters in the book look like lunatics and have no logic at all. One moment he was about to kill someone, the next moment he was talking about brothers, friends and brothers 😰

The article is written by AI, the preface does not match the subtitles, and the identity of the protagonist is inexplicable. Might as well look at tomatoes

The writing is quite good. I'm tired of reading invincible articles. Absolute invincibility does not exist in Jin Yong's world. Government, poisoning, firearms, whoever dares to claim to be invincible can be said to be invincible. In the original text of Swordsman, Fang Zheng and Chongxu prepare to use gunpowder to send Let Me Go to Heaven, so the protagonist should also be dormant. To be honest, it can actually be considered a cool novel. The protagonist already has the top internal and external skills in Jin Yong's world, but the level is relatively low. The protagonist has a bright future, and it follows the original plot, which is pretty good. It's normal to say that the protagonist feels aggrieved, and his background suits most people. Those martial arts people were either rich or noble, and the protagonist, a journeyman and a blacksmith, was no different from a servant in their eyes. Choosing Huashan is also a good move. After all, Xiaoao has the best external skills and Dugu Nine Swords is on Huashan. Other Five Mountains sword techniques and anti-Five Mountains moves are considered superior, and Feng's one-on-one guidance is also a top class in the entire Jin Yong world. As for the suppression of Yue Buqun and other senior brothers, for the powerless protagonist, I believe he will be a marginal figure in any sect. Instead, he learned the Huashan swordsmanship and internal skills in the declining population of Huashan. In Jin Yong's world, any martial arts person who has no sect and works as a gang will definitely have a bad time. Even if Yue Buqun's Huashan Sect has various problems, it can still be considered a shelter from wind and rain.

Pure AI writing. The context is wrong

Both humans and dogs want to bite him twice when they see him, and there is no reasonable reason. If you don't know, you might think that the protagonist is called Zhao Huo.

It's extremely toxic. I can't watch it. It's a waste of my electricity bill.

So the preface written by pure AI doesn't match the postscript, and the plot is like shit, and it can't be continued.

No wonder this book is not popular. Who would read this 🐢male plot?

After carefully reviewing the chapters of this book, let me tell you what I felt when I read it. 1. The author has read the original work and gained a lot of his own understanding. So, the world of Jianghu must be full of glory and joyful grudges? No, in the final analysis, it is a gang of mixed society, and the king who dominates the mountain, how much justice can he have? If you look at the entrance fees for outer disciples, you will know that the sect also depends on your "contribution". Poor people come here to eat and drink for free? Only wealthy people can continue to deliver benefits. So after the protagonist joins the sect, he is looked down upon by others because the leader takes the lead and everyone agrees. 2. Therefore, there will be Yue Lingshan's unruliness, Linghu Chong's good wine and his sister's selfish selfishness. Lin Pingzhi's broken arrogance and jealousy, but so far, there is still a trace of goodwill. 3. Why do Hengshan nuns look down on the protagonist? Because the protagonist's own family is not taken seriously, does he still expect outsiders to be kind? Besides, the outer disciples who were not taken seriously have become famous. Will the competitors from the Five Sacred Mountains be happy? 4. The author filled in some details to reveal the evil of human nature, which I think is acceptable. They all rely on swords to cut their jobs, so why should we expect everyone to be friendly? They will seize the opportunity, make full use of it, and seek personal gain for themselves. 5. Therefore, in martial arts, most people use force to break the ban, and chivalry is just a good-looking window paper. You can read and write as an adult, what are you dreaming about? I just hope that the protagonist can survive well in the sinister old society! Come on! Author, I support you!

It's basically an AI novel, writing people as aboriginals

The writing style is very good, not AI style, but the plot is messy

Inexplicable book, it really looks like it was written by AI

I'm speechless that a protagonist with this kind of character can be written.

I've tried the poison, don't subscribe. It was interesting at first, but then it became cloudy and foggy, and it continued to be tortured repeatedly. My brain was stored in the washing machine, and I was about to vomit. . . . .

What you wrote is messy, you fed it to AI, what you wrote is incomprehensible.

The writing style is not like that written by AI, and it does not have the common writing structure and tone of AI. However, the plot is a piece of shit, the logic is contradictory, and the overall situation is suppressed but not released, which makes people feel like a very aggrieved Tengu.

AI is better written than this one!

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Since the protagonist is not happy staying in Huashan, why doesn't he leave? Why do you have to give up to the junior sister several times in the competition? It's obvious that they don't like you, but they still treat you like a licking dog, letting you be beaten and scolded.