
Simultaneous Time Travel: All Starts Are Dead Ends
同时穿越:开局皆是死局
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- Myriad Worlds
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I was reading the novel, but it felt dry and dry, just like reading an activity log.
Author, in order to help the author, I spent several hours researching information, conceiving, and typing to come up with these nine suggestions. I just want to help the author! Could you please ask the author to answer them one by one?
1. The world of Martial Arts has a special worldview rule, "As long as you kill your opponent, you can absorb his combat energy as your own, thereby greatly improving your combat level and greatly enhancing your own strength." This worldview rule should be shared, so that the protagonists in each world can absorb their combat energy by killing the enemy, thereby greatly improving their combat level and greatly enhancing their own strength. Especially in the future, in worlds with powerful combat capabilities such as Marvel, DC, Dragon Ball, etc., The protagonists can obtain the combat energy of those super powerful characters. Just talking about Dragon Ball, you can get the fighting energy of Frieza, Lightning Cell, Majin Buu, Baby, Super No. 17, Evil Dragon, Golden Frieza, Fusion Zamasu, etc., So can we share this worldview rule of the world of martial arts "As long as the opponent is killed, You can absorb his combat energy as your own, thereby greatly improving your combat level and greatly enhancing your own strength." Each world protagonist can absorb his combat energy by killing the enemy, thus greatly improving his combat level and greatly enhancing his own strength? Can it? 2. Author, can you write the protagonist of Daguba, the King of Grunge in the world of Kamen Rider? Because: 1. Kamen Rider is one of Japan's three major tokusatsu dramas, and Kamen Rider Kuuga is the masterpiece of Heisei Kamen Rider. In the minds of readers, Kamen Rider Kuuga's status in the Kamen Rider series is just like Ultraman Tiga's status in the Ultraman series. Daguaba can be said to be the childhood classic reaction of countless readers. Pai Da BOSS 2. Although the knights in Kamen Rider are powerful, they are still ordinary human beings. Without a transformer to transform into a knight, they can do nothing and achieve nothing, let alone provide sharing to all other worlds. Daguaba is very strong and has many powerful skills and abilities that can be shared with them. Protagonists in all his worlds: Microscopic particle manipulation: Manipulate the basic particles of matter to achieve various goals you want, and you can also shape various weapons or materials you need Supernatural fire making: Use microscopic particle manipulation to accelerate molecular motion to create fire from a distance or ignite the human body. Behavior, so all kinds of substances can be ignited Wind control: Wind is an alternative fluid to a certain extent, so through the manipulation of microscopic particles, various wonders related to wind friends can also be generated, such as tornadoes Water control: Water is also a fluid composed of microscopic particles, so like wind, it can pass through microscopic particles Observe particle manipulation to generate, or control its action trajectory Soil Domination: The earth is also composed of microscopic particles, and the shape or environment of the land can also be changed through microscopic particle manipulation, or attacks can be generated out of thin air Thunder Domination: Use microscopic particle manipulation to generate powerful static electricity, or control the earth The air layer, and then generate thunder and lightning, can also control the direction of natural lightning to attack Super murderous aura: The ability possessed by the brain after being evolved by the Yamadam spirit stone. It can frighten the enemy with its eyes, and can even kill its own enemies directly through the eyes Psychic power: The ability possessed by the brain after being evolved by the Yamadam spirit stone. One of the abilities is that you can control the state of objects through telekinesis, and can also be used to launch attacks Dark Palm Wave: One of the application methods of telekinesis, mixed with the telekinesis of Ultimate Darkness, the power of the shock wave is so high that it can rival or even be stronger than a nuclear bomb Ultimate Darkness: The owner of the Yamadamu Spiritual Stone After evolving into its ultimate form, it has a power that is enough to destroy the world. It can also transform living things. By manipulating microscopic particles, it can control the changes in celestial phenomena such as wind, rain, thunder and lightning, and create supernatural flames. All its abilities are exactly the same as Kamen Rider Kuuga, and the power of the two skills remains equivalent to a certain extent. At the same time, there is no need to worry about Daguaba being too strong, and there is no plot and content to write. Although Daguaba is good in strength, he is nothing in all the worlds. Even in the world of Kamen Rider, there are a lot of existences stronger than Daguaba, such as Touma Tokio, Black God Toshin, Orange God (The Man of Origin), etc., Not to mention that the novel of Dou Chuanliu is an invincible pretentious novel 3. The original Dacuba killed many creatures 1. Humans (the clearest) - Large-scale massacre in the final chapter: 30,000 people (official statistics from the Metropolitan Police) - Early stage + scattered: members of the archaeological team, a few passers-by → dozens of people - Total humans: about 30,000+ people 2. Gurungi (same race, precise number) - Eliminate the lower Gurungi: 162 (mainly Bei Group and Zi Group) - Strong Demon (Bat No. 3): 1 (Recapture the belt fragment) - Total number of Gurungi: 163 Because we share the world view of the martial arts world, the combat energy of so many creatures can be absorbed by the protagonist Daguba, which greatly increases the strength of the protagonist 4. The appearance of Dagububa in human form and ultimate body form are among the best among all the characters in the Kamen Rider series, and they are the most handsome So can we write the protagonist Dagububa, the king of Gurungi in the Kamen Rider world? 3. Can we add a protagonist with black light virus abilities who killed the original world? After sharing, the protagonist of each world can use the black light virus ability to absorb and devour powerful beings, beings with special abilities and other good things in the world, and obtain everything. After all, there are too many powerful beings, too many beings with special abilities and too many good things in the world. 4. Can the Nether Demon Joe from the Armored Warrior World be added to the protagonist? His ability is useful to the entire protagonist's system. As a greedy devil, Qiao Shefei has the ability to break up the molecules of his own energy and fuse them through walls. Later, he learned the art of escape from the earth. The source of negative energy was the fear of the humans who were robbed by him. These are strong auxiliary abilities that can be possessed by the protagonists in other worlds, and the protagonist Qiao Shefei's strength is second only to Lu Fa among all the Nether Demons, and is on par with An Mi Xiu. The reason why he does not become An Mi Xiu is because An Mi Xiu is Lu Fa's biological son. After becoming An Mi Xiu, betraying Lu Fa is tantamount to patricide, so can we write the protagonist Qiao Shefei in the armored warrior world? 5. Can we add the main character Rollermon from the Digimon world and evolve into the ultimate Millenniummon X? Because in the end Millennium Beast For example, the Digital World, the Marvel World, the DC World, the Dragon Ball World, etc., After possessing the ability of time and space, the protagonists of those worlds can freely travel to the parallel time and space parallel world of their own world 6. Can the Dark Lugia protagonist of the Pokémon world be added? Because Lugia is the God of the Sea, Dark Lugia is more handsome and stronger than Lugia. Some Lugia has Dark Lugia, some have Dark Lugia, but not Lugia. The most important thing is that Dark Lugia can communicate with all creatures including humans through telepathy, and after sharing, all other protagonists in the world have Dark Lugia. Everything about the sub-protagonist (including the ability to "communicate and speak with all living things, including humans, through telepathy") is a sea god, which can greatly help the protagonists in anime with a water environment and sea environment as the background, such as the protagonist of the One Piece world 7. Can you add the Holy Lord protagonist of the Jackie Chan Adventures world? The twelve spells of the Holy Lord alone are extremely powerful, not to mention the many powerful magics possessed by the Holy Lord 8. Can we add the evil sword fairy protagonist from the world of Sword and Fairy? The Evil Sword Immortal can absorb evil thoughts, resentment, anger and other negative energy in the world as its source of power. The greater the evil thoughts, the faster its strength will grow. He can also absorb evil spirits and continuously strengthen himself. After sharing, the protagonist of each world has everything the protagonist of the Evil Sword Fairy has. He can absorb evil thoughts, resentment, anger and other negative energies and evil spirits in the world he is in to become stronger. Every world has evil thoughts, resentment, anger and other negative energies and evil spirits, and even evil spirits. In some worlds, there are a lot of negative energies and evil spirits such as evil thoughts, resentment, and anger, such as the Inuyasha world, the Marvel world, the DC world, the Dragon Ball world, etc. 9. Can we add the protagonist Yamata no Orochi from the Inuyasha world? When many novels write about InuYasha's world, they write that the protagonist of InuYasha's world is the son of King Douga, which makes them vomit, so the author can write about InuYasha with an original protagonist: the protagonist of Yamata no Orochi, because Yamata no Orochi accounts for 10% of Japanese monsters. According to Top Status, he is regarded as one of the most representative monsters and is often listed as the strongest or most famous monster in Japanese mythology. Moreover, because all other protagonists share dragon blood and dragon power, the Eight The protagonist of Misaki Orochi evolves into the Yamata Demon Dragon: a super giant demon dragon with eight heads and eight tails, huge limbs each like an Optimus Pillar, and a pair of huge dragon wings that cover the sky and the sun. A legendary sword is contained in its body. Because the Yamata Demon Dragon is too big, there are countless existences in the world that are larger than the Yamata Demon Dragon, such as the Infinite Dragon God Ophis and the True Red Dragon God Emperor from Demon High School, the hundred-body monsters Beludora and Arc Belial in Ultraman, The Emperor of the Universe and Yuanshi Tianzun in Transformers, not to mention their strength, the strength of the Yamata Demonic Dragon is pitifully weak in some powerful worlds in the world. At the same time, there are many powerful beings in Inuyasha's world who are not swallowed by Naraku, such as Dragon Bone Spirit, Oyakata, Ogamaru, etc. The protagonist can use the black light virus ability to absorb and devour them, or after they are defeated by Inuyasha and his group according to the original plot, the protagonist uses the black light virus. The ability absorbed and devoured their corpses, and in the end, after Naraku transformed into a super giant spider, his body was completely eliminated by Inuyasha and his party. The protagonist could use the black light virus ability to absorb and devour Naraku, the super giant spider, and the Shikon Tama.
The logic you wrote is too confusing. You said you can share the awesome things you wrote before, but the newcomers are killed repeatedly as soon as they come in. Obviously, the things you shared before are invincible in the world, but it is so damn contradictory that the newcomers die repeatedly as soon as they come in. So what is the purpose of the sharing you wrote before?
What kind of revolution are you trying to make in the mutant world? You've already been treated like this and you're still trying to change other people's opinions. If you ask me, just kill them until they're scared.
I heard that Chaos is like an AI that crazily gives suggestions to the author. As long as the author follows them and changes them, they will be poisonous. Is it true?
Classic: You are experimented on at the beginning, and then you kill two minions to show that you have taken revenge. The people above you do not dare to kill and do not dare to take revenge. You can only say that you are afraid that the other party has the power after traveling through time. Nine out of ten books on mutants have this routine.
It feels like reading the outline of the original plot, which is dry and tasteless at all. No wonder it's almost 100 chapters and it hasn't been signed yet.
Risk level too high? Don't support investment?
Dry, numb, not mellow at all. There are not many details, the overall quality is just like the outline. The idea is still good, but the content inside is not very good. The writing details are not handled very well either. Generally speaking, you can read it when you are short of books.
It is indeed like other reviews said, it is dry and dry, the protagonist is very capable, but what he does feels uncomfortable. What everyone thinks is that I don't eat beef, but he wants to be a good student.
Just a pure little kid, playing stand-alone games
He is the source of chaos who loves to eat Shi, and also likes to add various seasonings to Shi
It's so boring to write. Not very interesting.
I'm on the street, I can't write, I don't have any ideas, I'm dead.
What's the plot?🤔
Brother, let me give you a suggestion. After you finish writing, read it yourself. Let's put aside the outline, logic and plot, and make sure the sentences are smooth first, okay?
This is the first time I saw that after writing so many words, no one invested in it.
The author can't control it now, and the protagonist's combat power begins to soar crazily🤫
Generally speaking, it has no bad points and no special features. If we have to talk about shortcomings, it just becomes more and more boring as it goes on.
You don't need to read the nanny article, it's just a bunch of s
Xiao Ke uses it too often
This world is not beautiful, come to mysterious recovery
Damn it, I'm the source of chaos again, I can give up.
I've been in that world for too long lately. I've raised so many pictures and I'm still in that world.
Recently, have you been writing too abstractly?