Beast Taming: Raising Pets Through Dreams, So What If They're Invincible?

You are the best author of beast-taming novels I've read in recent years. Your ideas are excellent, from the first book's "Divine Gift" to the later "Pre-emptive Future" and this one's "Path of Dreams." But why do you always have to include some blemishes? From the sister being cursed by the four evil gods in the first book to the impoverished family falling apart in the latter two.

The opening move is awful! It's disgusting.

To be honest, writing novels doesn't necessarily require exceptional writing skills; even lighthearted, easy reads can be very popular. But you can't write in a disjointed, haphazard way! The plot is ridiculously fragmented and cringe-worthy.

Your last book started with messy chapters, then dragged on for a while, and then it was gone.

That's so stupid! They're dirt poor and they don't even charge for training!

This book is dead, it's dead in its premise. Let's start a new one soon!

I recommend this book to the author; it's one of the better slice-of-life stories I've read. Watch closely, this is how you play a mage!

To be honest, it's too similar to the previous book. The homogenization is so severe that it feels like a formulaic story. Only the first two chapters were a pleasant surprise; the author found new material, and the talent is good. But after that, it feels almost the same as the previous book. If you're reading the first book, it's okay, but the second one is very painful.

Another dragon villain?

It's started again, just like the last one.