Beast Taming: Borrowing Against the Future

If you want to read it, you can read Chapter 5. The protagonist was dissatisfied with the free pets provided by the state and planned to buy them by himself. Later, he saw an abandoned low-potential pet on the roadside. The protagonist immediately remembered the white moonlight dog from before and did not despise the lack of potential. The most important thing is that the protagonist has been stressing that his parents are controlled by a dragon standing at the top of time. The protagonist has always wanted to become stronger and save his parents. How do you save them like this? I would rather see a classic plot where the protagonist buys a pet and finds something wrong than a plot like this.

In fact, it doesn't look good. Others simplify the levels and settings, but this book is so full of settings that it slaps it in the face. And if you keep re-reading top-level Order 0 and other Shar-pi words, you can't slowly expand after leveling up? It feels like the outline is being slapped in the face. Moreover, the writing of beast control tends to be Pokémon-style and cute, but can you defeat Pokémon? Just write randomly

I haven't read it yet, but there are typos in the introduction. It's rare. Oh, 99%, it's a rare thing~

How do you think that a senior high school student can be poached from 300 students? You can't write such a plot with your feet. . . . This is no longer a problem for Xiaobaiwen.

The protagonist's parents fell into the water and drowned. The protagonist should fish for his parents first or choose appearance. Author: It must be appearance. Those who agree with this can watch it

Emotional scenes are not very good. In fact, beast-control novels don't really need emotional scenes, and as a reader, I don't feel that the character of Chu Tianling is charming at all.

You already have a plug-in. It's understandable if you use a slot to satisfy your old wish and force the plug-in to fly. If you're not sure about the type of plug-in, just put poison in it.

Picked up a dog contract, poisonous. You haven't confirmed how strong your plug-in is yet. I don't understand why I wrote a dog.

I feel like there are too many settings. The protagonist's skills are so buggy, but he can't defeat Chu Tianling.

If it really doesn't work, just take a day off to sort out your ideas and stock up on manuscripts. Every update is paid in advance, which is very annoying. You can't unsee it after it's updated.