The Light of Gaia, Starting with Ultraman Ace

I'm back to where the dream started. I didn't notice Neptune's new book until now. I was depressed during this period, but now I feel like I can't die before I finish reading it.

When did Neptune resurrect, I thought he was completely gone. Is there any update on the journey of the next part of the Gaia manga? Is it serialized somewhere?

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

It looks good, but it's not good enough!

There's a lot of irrelevant content, but the rest is fine

I think it's well written. Why are there so many blackmailers? As long as it's written well, it's enough for men and women to write it.

The first time I saw an Ultra fan from Qidian, it was Gaia. Click in and take a look. The protagonist is female. Send Goodbye Let me say a few unpleasant things. The unpleasant thing about Ultraman is that it is a male chauvinist theme. Do you write a heroine? If you don't send it, who will? The audience for this thing is basically boys. Even if you create an original Ultraman whose human body is a girl, you can still watch it. But if you write about Gaia and have a heroine, tsk, it's so rubbish And what I'm also curious about is why the heroine doesn't go to the female channel. Why is it on the male channel? Ultra fandom is already a niche. You can create a male channel Ultra fan heroine. Mail it in

Author, I have an idea that I hope to adopt: Wouldn't Gaia's emergence from the earth be greatly restricted? So I have an idea. The earth and ocean have given birth to life and civilization, and people who set foot on the earth have had some kind of longing for the sky (starry sky) since the beginning of civilization. Then the light in the sky represents the symbol that the creatures of the earth are based on the sea of ​​stars and embark on a journey to the sea of ​​stars. Then the light in the sky allows Gaia to receive support from the earth in non-terrestrial environments and exert the same strength as on earth. And in the later period, the three lights of the earth, ocean, and sky merged into one, allowing Lingya to truly become the undefeated guardian of the planet and implement Lingya's dream.

No, why is it a female protagonist? Why are you on a male channel?

In fact, I think the average booking is already very high, and there are even a lot of rewards. However, the number of people on the book friend list has always been small. There are only 20,000 book friends with 1.4 Million words and more than 8,000 collections. I can't find any less than the same period last year. It shows that I have always been in a small circle and have not been able to get out. But such a small circle has actually supported nearly 600 average bookings. Thank you all so much. I don't know what content is unpalatable and cannot attract readers. I really hope there are critics who can know where the shortcomings are. But the book friends are too soft-spoken. Since I opened the book, not a single comment has been deleted, and a book friend has never restricted his comments, but no one has ever scolded me. Some book friends said before that there was something wrong with the title of the book and it was not attractive. I feel nothing. Is it because the introduction is unfocused and people will scratch it off after reading it? I don't know if it's time to revise the introduction.

I have a suggestion that I hope will be greatly adopted: Lingya's identity can change with the changes in Ultraman episodes. From Ace's students, learn what guardianship is and the meaning of Ultraman. The assistants who came to Taylor are immature but have already begun to practice. Then to the companions in Leo, fighting side by side. Then there is the teacher in Eddie, who talks about the Ultra spirit and the meaning of protection, which is passed down to teach successors. The elders in Menbiusri are the ones that the younger generations can rely on.

I really convinced some readers. The protagonist of this work is only 9 years old, and it is obviously written in a bright fairy tale style similar to Cardcaptor Sakura. Isn't it annoying to read everywhere about Marrying Lily, a male version of a female version, just read this book as a fairy tale, just like when you were a child, just sit in front of the TV and watch Tiga and Sakura.

Shouldn't this woman be the protagonist and post a female video? Why did you end up on a male channel~

It feels like the author is too obsessed with the setting of the rich Japanese lady and the god Gaia.

I clicked on the first chapter and found that something was wrong with "her". I clicked on the comment area and read it from top to bottom. There was no flaw in the plot. But from what they said about daily life > battle, the protagonist is in a state of instant kill when facing monsters. Why is the title of the book Gaia? It contradicts the heroine's text. You changed it to a keyword comprehensive comic. In daily life and combat, it is better than Ultra and Gaia.

I am number one. Neptune, when you release a new book, you should also post a post on the previous one. Although there are not many people, it is good for one more people to discover it and to support it.

Author, can Ace's progress be faster? ? ? Although I also like Ace, I have written more than 200 and almost 300 chapters, so it's a bit too long. . .

Ahhhh, it's Neptune! Back then, the manga Gaia was my most popular manga.

It's okay to add Ultraman to anime. I know the female supporting character is from Magical Sakura. Who is the heroine? I searched for Little Devil Detective Loki, which seems to be a bit of a deletion of readers. Obviously I have watched Kamen Rider in lovelive before, although I have never watched lovelive. I'm a little tired of reading Chun'ao, and the rest of what I wrote doesn't really suit my taste.

The author, An Xin, will write this book well and write according to his own ideas, his style, characteristics, and writing style. Then for the next one, try to write it as a male video. After reading Chapter 100, I personally feel that there are three points. First, the emotional drama is beautifully written. There is no love, only various other beautiful emotions. This will attract a lot of middle-aged Ultraman dreamy greasy uncles like me to watch it, because we don't believe in love, we believe in other emotions. Second, the writing style is delicate, and the delicate point is not in the characters, but in the interpersonal relationships. This kind of writing style will attract a special group of people, not the general public, because the sense of immersion in online writing is so important. After all, in this society, Third, the description of daily life is much greater than the description of battle scenes. This is a good thing, but it is not a good thing. The good thing is that readers like me will directly order the whole book, regardless of whether there are any poisonous points in the back. I love it. The disadvantage is that people who don't like it will go directly to watch pirated copies. This will lose a lot of tap water fans' banknotes, monthly passes, and recommendation votes. A good daily routine cannot inspire an ordinary person to spend a lot of money. After all, most readers actually have little money and live a very hard life. If you want to steal money from their pockets, you really need to think about how to arouse their desire to spend money. The audience for online articles is very large, and most of them are ordinary people. To be more specific, it refers to the monthly salary of 3,000, which is the minimum wage level in most third-tier cities. To get out of the circle, this must be considered. But what to consider, the author, you will have your own ideas, come on. To sum up, I personally think that for the next book, you can consider writing a male protagonist and incorporate your own characteristics into it. It can be a male protagonist with a girly personality at most. No matter what happens, the male protagonist has such an opportunity to burn his life and burst out the courage and strength that belong to Ultraman's human body. Come on, come on, don't be angry if the author thinks it's nonsense or anything else, I really love it, so it took me a long time to leave such a comment. My heart is good, my emotions are hot, and my attitude is loving.

Some of the writing is quite good, but there are very few readers. This book is screening readers at all levels. The Owen audience is screened for those who can accept the heroine story (personally, I regret that it is not a transformation story), and then it is screened for the audience that accepts the setting of the comprehensive comic stitching. The introduction does not clearly state the ingredients. The position of the heroine Wen Bai's marriage is not stated clearly. Which animations are stitched are not stated. Whether it is only the characters or the world view is stitched together. Passers-by do not know. The introduction is just a confused look at it, and there is a bit of a literary youth disease. It is really uncomfortable to see this in an online article. The part about Ou is well written, and some of the daily character interactions are good to watch (there are too many daily routines that have nothing to do with Ou, which is annoying. I came to see Ou, and there are not many daily urban and light novels to read?). I really don't like the character settings of the comprehensive comics. I personally don't like the mess of other anime characters in the Ou world, and there are a lot of unknown characters.

What the hell is a character list? Why do magic cards appear? Isn't this an Ultra fan?

This novel describes the world view of the Showa era, and it can be said to be the only one among all Ovens, but for some reason there is no video to promote. There are only a few books that have been recommended over and over again. I have to recommend them every time I see the comment section, hoping to increase the popularity.

I really can't finish my journey of games and comics.

To be honest, now I want to fast forward to go back more than the chapter of Nexus. Compared with this endless battle of more than a hundred years, does the protagonist really remember the ordinary life of the past ten years? I am really looking forward to seeing everyone look strange when I go back.

V3 design drawings of Gaia and Aguru🤓

Someone in the comment section of the Gaia comic told me that the author stopped updating after he injured his hand. I thought the author would never come back. I was a little excited when I saw this book today.

{"NickName":"Aquaman Boston","UserId":18243508} will post a chapter when the new book comes out. It will be out soon. I look forward to it.

It's not very good-looking, too complicated and too childish. If it's really about Magic Cards, I'd support it, but if it's about Ace, I don't agree with it.

Well, I think it's okay, but I skipped it later because Ace was tired of it. I know that the author can write his own creations for each unit drama and add some elements he likes in it. I don't deny that the writing is quite delicate, but what about the comprehensive comics? I haven't read some of them, and I want to read Taro's. I have been writing it for a long time since I was nine years old. And the later comprehensive comics should not write too much. The Gaia written by the author is very powerful and can be defeated with basically no effort. But looking at Ace earlier, some unit dramas really made up for my regrets when I watched them. The author's writing is also commendable, but I still mind the two sentences the author describes about the female figure when writing about Gaia. I know this may be a little selfish on the part of the author, and I understand it, but it has a bit of an impact on my inherent image. Although it is only a few sentences, it has no impact as long as it is not described in large paragraphs, but I think it is still handsome.