Heir to All Humanity

A truly advanced AI should be able to detect the protagonist's presence the moment they arrive via satellite, radar, and the network, and dispatch a drone to pick them up. Even with current technology, let alone future advancements, the protagonist wouldn't be in this predicament, having to constantly deceive these genetically modified humans.

The biggest problem with the author of the previous book is that he tries to portray very awkward and pretentious things as something great. For example, Jiahao spouts a few affected revolutionary platitudes and then thinks he's a revolutionary pioneer, reaping the fruits of victory and being revered.

The premise is good, and the writing is decent. However, the writing style is terrible, and the pacing is too slow. There are too many clichéd moments of showing off and getting slapped down, which slows down the rhythm. As the last pure-blooded human, wouldn't it be better to lead the universe to higher dimensions, whether through mechanical flight or psionic flight?

Good news: Based on writing style analysis, it is not AI. Bad news: It's not even as good as AI.

Having read up to chapter 24, I just wanted to skip through the rest. It was all just the protagonist putting on airs. The protagonist can lack confidence, but if he doesn't act, he'll die. However, as the author, you can't leave the reader feeling insecure. In those 24 chapters, you haven't given the reader a single piece of information about this world. What does 30% over the limit mean?

They look like they were once human. It's very well written. The author must have been a human being to write it. It's incredibly realistic and completely matches my personal experience. My memories used to be hazy and confused, but now, all those long-buried memories are coming back to me, and my heart is filled with countless sorrows and helplessness.

The book review section is now corrupt and full of scoundrels, precisely because of insufficient updates. If authors diligently updated 10,000 words daily, the scoundrels would retreat in fear, and virtuous gentlemen would rejoice. This would be an achievement worthy of praise even from the legendary emperors Yao and Shun!

If you're new here and see all the negative reviews, you should know what's going on with this book.

A first-rate idea, a near-perfect opening rhythm, and an unexpectedly wonderful angle—as a level 5 author, one should have controlled the pace well, but still ended up burning out completely before reaching 500,000 words.

My assessment is that five chapters are worse than condensed into one. I was just disgusted by a rambling, disjointed book tonight, and when I came back and saw these five chapters of yours on my bookshelf, I even regretted subscribing to it and adding it to my bookshelf. 🙂