Zhutian: Starting from the Third Young Master's Sword

It has the flavor of Cologne, where you are both assertive and upright, and you want to change the plot, but you don't dare to go too far, for fear that you won't be able to control the next plot. PS. The protagonist's goal is to change the plot and then get feedback from the system to improve his strength. PS2. When I read the title, it said that it was like a prime minister, and I thought I had met a similar person again, but you just brushed it off and didn't dare to change the plot. I was disappointed.

The protagonist written in the previous chapters is really awesome. He is the most powerful one after the three young masters. And now, he may not even be able to defeat a younger generation. It's too fragmented.

How to say it. . . No imagination at all. Shouldn't the greatest influence be subverting the system? Founded the Tianxiahui, and the horse trampled the world. Have you seen Swordsman in the Snow? Like Xu Fengnian's father, he collects martial arts secrets on the first floor, so you can see whether the good guys and the bad guys will come to beat you. It's really not good for Bai Xiaosheng, he doesn't even know the weapons spectrum. Learn from Thunderbolt and Golden Light, the best fist and sword wielder in the world at every turn, and then see if it has any influence. There are too many starting points for this kind of routine, and your mediocre writing style is really unattractive.

It's both a beginner and an extreme. A stream-of-consciousness martial arts novel is written as a country fantasy. At this level, if you write Zhu Tianzhen, you just want to make some money.

The male protagonist is a eunuch who licks a dog and adds a weak chicken. This style of writing has long been discontinued.

Is Xie Xiaofeng the protagonist's father? Want to emphasize where your last name comes from?

The protagonists like Gu Long are more or less mentally ill, and they won't survive unless they are crazy! Xie Xiaofeng is the best swordsman in the world. He has no wealth, power, sex or fame! He just chose to be the best in the world instead of being the turd-picking Aji! It's really incomprehensible!

What about homework? Absorbing luck, you can't defeat it. Do you need to follow the plot? Defeat all the masters without killing them. If you defeat them, you will get a sword wound on your face. Let them think of you as soon as they see the wounds on their faces, and practice hard with shame and hatred to defeat you. Even if you leave, the younger generation will know that you are powerful and can absorb luck.

The swordsmanship of the Xie family can only shine in the hands of the ancestors of the Xie family and Xie Xiaofeng. Gu Long is strong in people, while Jin Yong is strong in martial arts. Gu Long emphasizes the meaning but not the form, Jin Yong emphasizes the form but not the meaning!

He was a eunuch with a wry smile, always smiling wryly, smiling wryly, and grew up enduring hardship every day. 😓

The protagonist is timid, writing so much about broken shoes, but doesn't dare to do it. You are already so strong, but you still need to join a force, form one or recruit one, and defeat the others. This way the plot will change, and it will be more exciting.

Thanks also to Xiaofeng. Are you Xie Xiaofeng's son?

I finished reading it in one go. It is well written and has the qualifications of Sanjiang. The speed of refueling is updated, and monthly tickets for Chapter 5 are given away.

You are very similar to another author, Xue Shiyilang. I can read half a page in one second with this kind of writing. With this kind of writing, you have to update at least 10,000 words a day.

Bad review. There aren't even the most basic pictures of the characters. She always talks about beautiful women. What you said is so beautiful. You should show me the picture.

One problem is that the information density in one chapter is too little. Also, one of the most attractive aspects of your book in the early stages is the interaction with Murong Qiudi. This should not be discarded later.

How come it's so short? If others see it, they think I'm looking down on me and add it to me.

Hey, you're still writing a book. You don't even know what readers hate, so you just write it. Read more books by other people and know what the poisonous points are How can you avoid them after reflection.

It's nice to watch, and the female characters are well drawn. It's been a long time since I read anything about the third young master's sword. I like the different female characters in Murong Qiudi and Gu Long, and the author captures the characters very well. More farewell eunuchs

You have provoked the protagonist, Murong Qiudi, a yandere, and Xue Keren, a nympho. Both of them are deeply in love with Xie Xiaofeng. The protagonist's surname is Xie, and his temperament and martial arts are almost exactly the same as those of the sword god Xie Xiaofeng. Be careful of being regarded as Xie Xiaofeng's substitute. But when the protagonist leaves Murong Qiudi and Xue Keren, he will pursue his husband in the crematorium! Female channel routine!

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A martial arts fan writes about eunuchs, but I don't know what the author thinks.

The protagonist just relies on leveling up, doesn't he know how to practice by himself? 😅

The protagonist is already creating his own swordsmanship, the Eight Swords of the King of Yue