I Am a Swordsman in Konoha

It looks a lot like the swordsmanship version where teachers from the ninja world can become stronger through teaching. The beginning is too blunt, and the follow-up focuses on daily life, cultivation and politics, which is relatively dull. It is recommended that the author not add alien skills one after another too quickly and blindly pursue the sensory stimulation of well-known skills. Otherwise, you will soon fall into an endless cycle of not being able to do it without adding new skills, and even less being able to do it if you add new skills. After going on a rampage with all his strength, he could barely maintain an invincible flow for a period of time. The political content should also be reduced as much as possible or written to be a little more colorful. It is quite boring to flatter the three generations. Otherwise, if readers have not read the novel, they will praise it, and if they have read it, they will praise it. Wouldn't it be a waste of time to read the novel?

As far as the performance of the first chapter is concerned. One, Hawkeye's apprentice, who has been learning swordsmanship for fifteen years, ran to Konoha and was very panicked. Even with the supreme sword, he was very panicked and didn't know his own strength. The world of pirates is not a peaceful world. Being the apprentice of the future greatest swordsman has a bad mentality. If you have only been learning swordsmanship for fifteen months, it makes sense. This kind of reaction after fifteen years is terrible. It feels like Hawkeye has been protecting you like a baby and doesn't know your specific strength. In other words, for fifteen years, you have been safe in the pirate world. You have lived in the pirate world for fifteen years and have never used a knife. It feels like you have never been killed. Two, system rewards, Luffy's bloodline? What's the use? It's not a Devil Fruit, and it doesn't have Garp or Dragon backing it up. What's so special about Luffy's bloodline? You might as well get a Kaido bloodline, which is from the ghost clan after all. A pirate native wants another pirate native. I don't see any difference in Luffy's physique. They are not both of human origin among pirates. Three-system arrangement, the Kingdom of Iron agrees with you, a samurai, to be a Konoha ninja? ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! First of all, there is no example of a samurai becoming a ninja. Secondly, the control of the Iron Kingdom, or the army, is in the hands of the samurai group. There are no ninjas in the Iron Kingdom. Your behavior amounts to. The Raikage arranges for his own ninja to go to Konoha to become ninjas! ! ! ! Do you know what kind of behavior this is? Do you think it's reasonable? Samurai Mifune, the supreme leader of the Iron Country's army, arranged for his soldier protagonist to go to Konoha to become ninjas! A violent organization in one country arranges for its own people to serve in a violent organization in another country. The top leaders of the two national violence agencies are still very satisfied and harmonious. I'm going to die laughing! !

🤫 Let's get to the blunt point. They are all talking like this: "We can go straight to xx without saying hello, without accompanying anyone"; the action is "three steps and two steps", just like students copying the same set of composition materials. There are too few young authors who are improving their writing skills these days, so let's take a look at the new book list.

When writing about Naruto, the main character doesn't even have chakra. It's so gross.

If the power system is not integrated, fans on both sides will be offended.

😒 The one where Hatake committed suicide, was his idea too extreme? Danzo and the Third Generation killed him. If he didn't kill a Hatake with a samurai spirit and became the Fourth Hokage, he would not have seen the Daimyo kneel down and lick him like 🐶. Kakashi experienced ANBU to change his thoughts, and later the official added a Sixth Hokage to him 😭

I don't know why, but I feel like I haven't watched it...

I feel that I said some very red words in vain, but isn't this a swordsman? What you wrote is not quite right.

As soon as I saw the name of the protagonist, I knew this book was a done deal.

The swordsman of the pirates is quite weak, so when he hits someone, he just poses as a boss and charges up his blows. Especially Liu Suolong, a three-sword man who is a pure mage, beats people and recites poems, then makes a move and is gone.

Not very well written. The writing is poor and the plot is blunt.

Chapter 1 If you don't change and don't leave half of the people, everyone will have high poison resistance.

Saw the beginning. Are you a loser like you? Is there any use in being stubborn? If you don't show any awareness, I'll chop you with a knife, or I'll make you roll your eyes with just a little bit of momentum.

Write the plot well. Why do you always convey the concept? Disgusting to watch

The ID card is just for adding an identity. Changing the name is too rigid.

The protagonist of the Naruto world has no chakra. . . The natives of the original ninja world did not have chakra. Chakra was a product brought by the Otsutsuki clan. The sacred tree Ten-Tails converted the natural energy of the planet into chakra. Then the Sage of Six Paths passed the chakra to the natives of the ninja world. Basically, as long as there are cells, chakra can be extracted from mental energy and physical energy (the difference is only the amount)

This book won't be long. What has changed since you came to Hokage? The Uchiha clan was still exterminated, and the people they wanted to save couldn't be saved! Unfortunately, it still cannot be changed. Mirror Flower, Water Moon is a skill of the God of Death, it is aimed at the soul, but it is so weak! Have fun!

Looking at all the two-dimensional characters, whether they are strong or not is another matter, but I think Hawkeye is the most handsome!

It doesn't look like Naruto or Pirates

As the title says, good books can also contain slander, so hold on and don't be a eunuch 😥

Without the strength of a great swordsman, it is impossible to get along in the later stages of Hokage. Even Hawkeye's strength is only a Kage level (strong shadow) at most. There are also Super Shadow level, Six Paths level, and Otsutsuki God. . .

Kendo also exists in the world of Naruto. Kaguya used to be the world of samurai, but when he met the ultimate BOSS Six Paths Kaguya at the beginning, all the masters were defeated! But the inheritance definitely remains

So boring! The more I look at it, the more out of place I feel

Inexplicably, there was no system when he was a pirate, and then he came to the Naruto system... And then it was like the pirate's body passed through Naruto? Anyway, all kinds of inexplicable things.

Goldfinger has added lol skills, and the novel flavor is no longer pure and feels too messy.