Great Sun Immortal Official

As a time-traveler, your character cannot be written like that of an ignorant young man. Especially the part about rescuing my uncle is extremely toxic. He is in a hurry to seek medical treatment for various illnesses, and he is begging for help everywhere. If you want to write about the growth of the protagonist, you can't treat the protagonist as a 250 person.

What purpose does Ma Dengke have besides driving people away with disgusting words? The pretentious slap in the face at the beginning was acceptable, but when Madenko appeared later, the book became disgusting.

The routines are tacky and the plot is unsatisfactory. The author may have thought that he had already realized that he could write whatever he wanted. The new book issue saved twenty chapters. Uncle, I admire you. Farewell.

I don't want to watch it since I started pretending to be stupid. You are so low-key for such a big show. If you don't stand out, where will the resources fall from the sky? If you weren't the protagonist, you would be dismissed as a loser the next day.

I'm speechless. I press all the way and then show off. This kind of routine is okay once or twice. You do it once every time you get a better idea. Who wants to watch it?

Aren't you just being a disgusting person for cheating and holding on tight?

You have nine talents and plug-ins. You should write more cool articles. Look at the title of your book and don't go off topic. What I wrote before is okay. But the aspect of rescuing my uncle was very difficult to write. It should be that the protagonist got 200 taels of silver to buy the elixir, and found that his cultivation speed had increased, and he quickly penetrated the acupoints, improving his own value. Your own value can leverage the teachers of the Academy to help you. Or the speed of your own improvement, coupled with your own momentum and reputation, have aroused the fear of the other party. Instead, now that you have no value at all, go and seek help from a rich family. Now that you have just embarked on the path to immortality, not a single acupuncture point has been opened, and it is useless. Who do you think will agree to help you? If the other party really agrees, then your book will be over.

Either you don't need resources and are cheating all the way, or you have to manage resources carefully and you can't even spend a tael of money with your magical powers. What do you mean by writing favors? If you need help from others, how can others sincerely help you at a critical moment? If you rely on the conditions you give others, then go gamble when you encounter better conditions? I just fancy it. You don't have to ask for help and you have to beg others. You might as well write a clone and kill them all. In the early stage, you have to look down at others for charity. It's more than just being cool and not talking nonsense.

The plot is frustrating, with a back and forth between hope, disappointment, and hope again. Anyway, something will happen at every critical moment.

Before my uncle's accident, he was okay and ordinary. After the uncle's accident, it made the book even worse. For example, it was originally at the passing line, but after being pulled down like this, it dropped to the level of more than fifty points, and it is still going down. The plot behind it is the same, very...

The routines are common pretense routines, just like those martial arts college entrance examination essays. If you read too much, you won't be able to stand it anymore.

I think the characters are well-written, as good as those of the great masters, but the plot is a little slower and the rhythm is a little tighter. The exciting points are somewhat lacking. For example, the protagonist has been struggling to save his uncle's family for so long. To be honest, the protagonist should be more pretentious and let the readers have a good time. However, the author's writing is a bit flat, but overall I think it is a good book and the author has experience. The characters of the main and supporting characters are quite good, but the pacing is a bit lacking. Overall, it is a good book. Anyway, I like it very much, especially the protagonist who knows that he has a bad background and dares to compete for the first place. Unlike other books, which say that he should be content and afraid to be the first, there are a lot of theories about big trees attracting the wind. In fact, it makes no sense. It is like not going out because there is a chance of being hit by a car and being killed by a car. Isn't it just a coward? I really think the protagonist of this book is good. I hope the author can write the protagonist better.

Why did the name change suddenly? I thought there was a new book on the bookshelf for no reason.

What the hell is written in Chapter 23 and Chapter 24...

I felt relieved when I saw everyone scolding Madengke.

A bunch of rambling nonsense. If you like to pull balls of thread, you can take a look.

Isn't this good? Why are you so depressed?

Indeed, it cannot be said that it is not good, nor is it mindless, but it is white, very white, and a novice, and the routines used are obvious and deliberate. It's so upbeat, it'll be annoying if you read it too much.

Originally, it was not good to write the beginning of parasitism in the uncle's house. In today's money society, the relationship between father and son, mother and son, there are unfilial children and grandchildren. Although the uncle is very close, he is older than the father, son and mother. Later, the protagonist is not yet prosperous and the uncle is imprisoned. It is terrible to watch. The second protagonist should be good at research, discovery and use of cheats, not just one muscle. How to study hard on yourself to be effective, there is a problem with the writing, we live in a fast-paced society now Ordinary people who live in 996 commuting to and from get off work every day want to release their stress and read novels. They are not looking for things that are more depressing and stressful. People who are slightly more successful are very busy. How many people come to read your novels and see why short dramas are so popular now and what are the characteristics of popular novels. Finally, many people who read novels are ordinary 996 working people who have entered the society to work. Some Not talking about 996, can you get rich and have a successful career by being hard on yourself? That is to encourage primary and secondary school students. Hard work is the basic requirement, ability, opportunity, and luck are important. To succeed by working hard, it is more of a disability for yourself. There is a high school student in the village next to my hometown who knows that study is important, but his grades are not very good. There is a problem, just like the CPU that often overloads will cause problems, or the ordinary wires running at home, and a lot of high-power electrical equipment has been used at home for a long time. It is also like the protagonist you wrote has just entered the spiritual practice. He is an ordinary person and needs to lay the foundation. You do not ignore everything by giving the protagonist a golden finger. In the early stage, it depends on the qualifications, diet, high-intensity mental exercise, and long-term nutrition and rest. If you cannot keep up, it will not be like overdraft of physical labor, but it will cause sudden death.

Rambling around, it's all about trivial matters.

Let's cut it. At the beginning, the Immortal Dynasty was turned into a place tens of thousands of miles away. Such a big place is not even called an Immortal. It may not even be able to support a few foundations.

It's like this again. The protagonist can't take the immortal exam, right? 🙂

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