Water Margin: The Dragon Rises at Mount Hua

I came here for Water Margin, and you've gone off to spout pedantry with the county magistrate!

Initially, establishing a small-scale bandit stronghold on Mount Hua might be acceptable. However, it cannot serve as a base, and its development prospects can never compare to Liangshan! Just considering Liangshan's extensive land and water transportation network, Mount Hua simply cannot match it. Mount Hua is renowned for its rugged terrain, making it easy to defend and difficult to attack.

You've written over 200,000 words, but the plot development is too flat and slow! And it lacks excitement; it always feels stuck in a rut. Keep in mind this is fan fiction; the characters and events from the original work don't appear much, resulting in a significant reduction in interesting and exciting moments!

I don't understand the part about taking the birthday gifts. Liang Zhongshu orchestrated this whole thing, making it public knowledge before it even happened?

Just write "accumulating wealth and generals," stop with all this useless stuff.

Well written! A rare gem among Water Margin stories.

The author is so insensitive to numbers; the error could be tens or even hundreds of times...

Novels that pioneered Chinese animation don't necessarily need author explanation; there are countless novels that claim to have started Chinese animation.

Would you consider Qin's Moon and Battle Through the Heavens?

I mean, I didn't quite understand the meaning of the previous answer.