
The Great Ming's First Headmaster
大明第一掌教
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- Completed
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- 994k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6mo ago
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The biggest flaw in this novel lies in its timeline. In the original story, during the conflict between the sword and qi factions at Mount Hua, the Bu generation was at most in their twenties. Yue Buqun and Ning Zhongze were not yet married, and their power had waned. Moreover, how could Zuo Lengchan have known about the sword and qi conflict so quickly and come out to test the waters?
Does the author know how religious sects were defined in ancient times? Do they know what it takes to be called a religion? Go look at ancient history. Apart from Taoism, what were the other religions that were called religions? Basically, any religion without royal approval or official endorsement was a villain or a rebel!
Does the author know why the Huashan Sect isn't called the Huashan Cult?
Linghu Chong? Forget it, he'll just be an ordinary disciple. His nature is hard to change, he's not fit for anything. From ancient times to the present, virtue comes first; talent often brings more harm. In Buddhist and Taoist martial arts, talent is valued first, then character.
What kind of rubbish is this? The background is wrong, the time is wrong, and Linghu Chong is portrayed as only two years younger than Ning Zhongze.
How Yue Buqun became the sect leader
1: Spreading the word that the Huashan School is descended from the Quanzhen School's Hao Datong 2: Incorporate the various Taoist temples and sects on Mount Hua 3: Compiling and integrating the classics and doctrines of various Taoist schools
Someone came to your door and you just let them leave so easily? That's truly gentlemanly conduct.
Upon reaching Chapter 86, the biggest flaw finally appears.
I believe that all transmigrators who travel to the world of Swordsman should know clearly that there are two major bosses in this world: one is called Dongfang Bubai, and the other is called Ren Woxing. During their growth, time travelers should figure out how to deal with these two major bosses.
The beginning was alright, but the end was not. Since the character had already reached 300 inner disciples and 1500 outer disciples in less than ten years, and continued to improve, blindly following the original story, including all the conflicts and contradictions, made it meaningless.
If you transmigrate into Yue Buqun's body, there's almost no path you can take except by using cheat codes to improve your aptitude. That old bastard Feng Qingyang can't do anything but hide. How could he help Yue Buqun? If he wanted to help, he would have done so already. The moves in the secret cave are so powerful that, not to mention the Five Mountains Sword Sects, four of them have declined.