The Mogore Inn in Marvel

Are you really not afraid of others stealing your shamanic heritage by releasing it outright? I'm outta here.

Just one thing, then you can decide whether to watch or not: the protagonist is a suck-up to S. H. I. E. L. D. He starts by fawning over them, revealing his entire background to them on their very first meeting, and before he even fully understands it himself, he's already teaching them.

I can't help but debunk the myth that Marvel magic is all borrowed magic. Marvel magic doesn't always come with a price; spellcasters suffer some backlash when casting spells, but powerful spellcasters have ways to mitigate the cost. Just as Doctor Doom uses farms and robots to bear the costs, Dark Wizards generally sacrifice other creatures to bear the costs.

Good heavens, you haven't even mastered your own survival skills before trying to teach S. H. I. E. L. D.? What's wrong with you? Is this how you fawn over someone? Has the author even read the Marvel series? Do you even know what kind of organization S. H. I. E. L. D. Is?

How can you sleep?! Have you paid off the car loan? Have you paid off the mortgage? Do you still want your wife and child?

Keep it up, try to mature the protagonist's mindset; right now, he just seems like a child.

Women, women, and more women. They're always flirting with this one or getting all excited with that one. My friend, you're writing Marvel, you're writing about Azeroth, not a bunch of women. It's so annoying. Serious plots always have to involve women. Real men should fight men, fist to fist.

This novel is indeed well-written; among many fanfictions, it can be considered top-tier. If you're going to give stars, you can get at least 4 stars. The downsides are that it has a reading threshold and the jokes aren't particularly good. If you're not familiar with American comics, or Marvel in particular, it's hard to get into it. Perhaps that's why this book wasn't very popular.

Putting myself in their shoes, if I were the protagonist in Marvel, I wouldn't share my power-ups with anyone. I'm selfish because I consider myself ordinary, unlike those geniuses. If others knew my secrets, dealing with me would be too easy. The world is already dangerous; I want to live.

At first, I thought it was a decent Marvel story, but then the introduction of the female characters changed everything. It was filled with clumsy fawning and bizarre, clichéd descriptions of women. You'd think it was a wuxia novel written by a novice in the 80s.