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Introduction: It's okay to take advantage of the popularity of immortals. The problem is that it's a bit too much to satirize people's lack of vision in novels after taking advantage of the popularity. And they also used blind sisters to star in those years. Doesn't this mean that blind sisters are more discerning than immortals?
There are too many inner dramas. Don't look at things before 2010 with the mentality of 2026. The situation is different. There are all kinds of belittling. I really can't stand it anymore.
It's funny. I can get through the first few chapters, but then I feel like it's a bit of a stream of consciousness. I'm writing prose.
This is an old preaching article, containing all kinds of obscene preaching. I can't stand even one success.
Abandon the book, the subject matter is very good, but there is too much obscene nonsense
There's too much nonsense, it's all nonsense, there's no character dialogue or emotion at all, it's hard to get involved at all.
✒️Writing: 10% character behavior + 30 character thoughts + 60% author output Each chapter has a plot outline of about a hundred words, and then crazily filled in with character ideas and various author's views on things in the current chapter. It looks like it's watery, but in fact the plot is advancing at a slow pace, because for a plot of about a hundred words, others usually have to write a thousand words. While you are still understanding this short outline, the author suddenly attacks you with a bunch of output, making it painful and divergent to read. 🎬 Plot: The plot is generally old-fashioned, but the wide range of plug-ins makes it unrealistic. This kind of lazy plug-in really doesn't work. 🎭 Character: The protagonist's pure heart is as high as the sky, and the author emphasizes this character many times, which is very unpleasant.
, Talking to oneself, talking to oneself, chattering, boring
It was written by AI. It's embarrassing to read.
It doesn't matter if you don't cast Xiao Liu for the movie, it can even be said to be normal. Her acting skills... Right ಥ_ಥ But I really can't stand it if I cast the blind sister. Whether it's because of the good fit for the role or not, Xiao Liu has some highlight moments, but Xiao Liu Yifei? What can she play? She can act 🐔⑧! ! !
Abandon books
Author, the subject matter you write is quite good, but you can't write the novel as an essay and an inner monologue. It doesn't make people feel involved at all, and it's all here and there. It's boring. Abandon the book, bye
Can Qidian have a function to block authors?
What about writing instructions? A little bit of nonsense should start from the big bang of the universe, and it can't be watered down anymore.
Don't complain if you plagiarize.
The incense belongs to Ning Hao, so at least you can make an original one or an adapted one. While complaining, I copy the answers myself, and I laugh every 100 steps.
Chapter 9: Communicating with foreigners is like translating on a computer
Gone
The author has too many emotions, commenting on every incident and idea. The author steals the show more than the protagonist, so he might as well write it in the first person.
Too much nonsense... This author went off track while writing, and then went on for a long time before turning around... I am speechless. Usually it is a plot formed by dialogue. This author is basically self-indulgent and sincerely has nothing to say.
This is the first time I saw such a bad novel and took a group photo.
I come to read novels to relax, not to listen to your various explanations of big principles. Entertainment texts are just for entertainment, and they are all good. You have to write all kinds of practical meanings into them. Does it make sense? It doesn't make much sense. It's popular to write entertainment-type novels, which are basically all kinds of fun, as long as they're not poisonous.
Not as good as AI
If it is written like this, it is better to let AI do it
Not even as good as AI, this level of writing
What is this thing about? It's all about assembly lines and inner drama. Can anyone really write a book?
Long-winded
Sure enough, there are explanations for the books that are exempt from the upper limit. If nothing else, each chapter is wordy and has not even one-fifth of the effective content.
You, the author, only write erotic and erotic stories, so you can't tell the priorities, right? Can't you just brag honestly to the readers? Look at you! It's a long story, but there's so much drama in my heart! Do you really regard writing online articles as an erotic autobiography?
This book is the first time I feel dyslexic. There are too many inner descriptions, and there are punctuation problems, dialogues are unmarked, and the wording is a bit confusing. Anyway, I feel that reading is very difficult. The typesetting and other things increase the dyslexia. Moreover, the author uses less Internet vocabulary. Not everyone can surf at high speed. When you write about old America, you have to use Shituoling instead... Is old America a banned word? Only by lowering the threshold and making it comfortable for more people can you make money. Only by being suitable for the general public can you expand your fundamentals. Moreover, I can see that many people in the entertainment industry can write their names in other books. I don't know why you don't write them and use abbreviations instead.
You can use as little water as possible. Especially try not to talk to yourself, it will look awkward.
It's too dad-like and too preachy.
It's too dad-like and too preachy.
It is indeed a book with limited exemption, but half of the people are preaching in the first page?
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There seems to be no language, the whole article is just an introduction
It's not good-looking, it's too watery, there's too much inner drama, and a lot of them are introducing this and that!
What makes you think that she can appear in any drama she wants and play any role she wants? Even if your father is a "mountain eagle", he's not that awesome, right?