A Senior in High School: The Growth-Type Male Lead

I saw the latest chapter, and I can write it well. I just feel that the subject matter is wrong. This should not be a rebirth article. It is written like a high school student who has obtained some fragments of the future, rather than the rebirth of a successful person in his decades. The way he handles life is too rough.

I hope the author can write about the true depression and pain of Chinese students in their senior year of high school. That period is a period of despair and pain that everyone will experience. I am currently a sophomore, and looking back on my senior year of high school is still painful😖. My own youth in my senior year of high school was actually okay except for the lack of love. I hope this book can fulfill a perfect youth dream.

I think your part about the class teacher was well written, especially the male protagonist's thinking that truly reflects an adult's ability to deal with problems. He does not just refute blindly, but proposes corresponding solutions. This made me stand out for your previous "objections", especially the perfunctory sovereign response from the class teacher. I think this plot is really well written. But the plot between you and Chu Fan is too much. I feel that your last book had too much influence, but your last book was about the workplace, and this book is about campus. Even though there are vaguely invisible groups and clubbing phenomena among classmates on campus, they are still vague and in an embryonic state. Your way of writing is a bit too much. Another point, this point doesn't matter, I just want to know if people nowadays can't quit smoking but know that they should quit smoking. Why didn't they quit smoking in the past? I can understand if you smoke as a college student. You have grown up to be a male idol, and at this stage of high school, it is better not to smoke. And will the smell of cigarettes really attract Bai Yueguang to youthful campus love?

I said that Tang is the most stern father on campus. Do you feel it? He reveals the underlying logic of some very obscure feelings and behaviors between classmates. I feel so happy to see it 😍

Although the book is a good book, the description of high school campus ecology is simply amazing! But the author said that the results are not good, so it is necessary to change it. Speed ​​up the pace, such as making money on your own as soon as possible, dividing into classes as soon as possible, improving your grades as soon as possible, and entering college as soon as possible in the college entrance examination. The main reason for the poor performance is the influence of shaping the rebirth of elites, but in fact, in a few chapters, I wrote a rumor, who was in conflict with whom, who was not on good terms with whom, and who had detailed emotions with whom. It was too contrasting. Can you write? Yes. But don't let the pace be too slow, and it won't be exciting enough. For example, so far, the only cool thing that I can remember is the fighting. The rest are stories from my mother-in-law and mother that I can't remember. Suggestions: 1. Speed ​​up the pace and use the college entrance examination as a benchmark. At present, I feel that these things can be written for one or two hundred chapters 2. Increase the density. For example, you can write about young women and white-collar workers in the fitness instructor line, and you can also help others solve professional problems at work. Then why are you dragging the pace for a month, right? 3. The image must grow and gain a foothold! Don't always lose energy. The state of your energy will remain the same for a long time, and the state of being a person will remain the same for a long time. For example, when it comes to fighting, it will make people feel that they are just that, not worthy of his status as an elite working emperor at the level of Yu Chengdong. In short, everything has a back-up and can be tied up. Take your time and never be in an embarrassing situation. For example, if Lin Xu was cheated recently and was implicated, he would appear incompetent, embarrassed, and careless about his body. He is a real high school senior, not a reborn working emperor. You must change it as soon as possible, because if you want to achieve good results, you must attract new people. However, the longer the content that is unsatisfactory, the more people will be filtered out and can't stand it.

Chovy，80，，（，），，😎

I feel like you laid the groundwork too long. You could write about having an affair with your female classmates, helping them solve some problems, helping your brothers improve their grades, and getting rid of a few bad classmates. But your class teacher, your family, and the atmosphere of your classmates are too realistic. No one can accept it. They don't understand how the protagonist will come back. You have been repressed since you were the class teacher, and then conflicts came one after another. I don't understand why you keep suppressing it? At least the last thunderstorm point needs to be solved, right? Anyway, if you don't have enough writing skills to write well, you'll have to hit the street. It's so depressing.

It's very satisfying so far. The class teacher conforms to the stereotype (some teachers have average teaching skills and poor education. They have poor character and then use their status as class teachers to criticize and criticize students. This is the cancer of education). The relationship between the characters is clear and logical. The description of the psychology of high school students is also very accurate. The professional analysis is quite in place. For now, it is a fairy seedling. If you keep it up, it will be a fairy grass if the plot does not collapse 😍

I have opened a new book. Please support me.

An essay competition, a love affair between brothers, a class placement, and I wrote dozens of essays slowly and leisurely. Do you feel like a working emperor like a weekly employer, dealing with household chores like a senior high school student every day? The writing is very good. It is a good thing that the writing is delicate, but the pace is too slow. Is it pure love on campus or rebirth and entrepreneurship? What is the long-term plan? What are the short-term cool achievements? Is it really just pure love for campus?