Who Makes Games About Philosophy?

Frankly speaking, the writing is okay, but I hate those who try to sell dogs on their own. Don't come to the game channel for urban writing. Strong negative reviews.

One sentence review: The writing is smooth and it is an urban game article worth reading. Detailed feelings: I personally like Happy Farm, a vegetable-stealing game, so after reading the introduction, my eyes lit up and I became interested in reading this article. I have read Chapter 33 so far, and my feeling is - 1. It is suitable for readers who are patient and like to read urban daily love stories. The game is just an embellishment of this novel. The author devotes more space to describing the daily life of the protagonist and portraying the heroine. The heroine is the hero's wife in his previous life, so in this life he always emphasizes: "Jiang Wan has a certain style and has seen the world. No one is worthy of her. She can only be mine." The description is too much and makes people a little disgusted. 😥 2. It is not suitable for readers who want to see fast-paced release games. I would rather see the protagonist's process of developing a game, focusing on describing the players' cool operations, players' evaluations of the game, the process of the anchor's live broadcast of the game, and the update content of a game... But the content I want to see in this article is very small, so I feel that the progress is a bit slow, and I feel irritated while reading it. This article is suitable for fattening, so I suggest you skip the chapter and read it.

The writing is quite good, why not write about the game 7/3 in the city? Put this on the game channel. The games you wrote about so many cities in the city are just sub-lines. There is no need to change the settings of the previous 7/3.

The previous writing was good, but once the heroine appeared, I felt that the book changed. It was said that it was a game novel and it has been wandering around the farm for dozens of chapters. It was said that the character portrayal in the campus novel was too shallow. As soon as the heroine appeared, the male protagonist's brain was not normal. If the author is not good at writing characters' emotions, I suggest that he just brush it off.

Fair review The farm is too long. Should be less

Why do you write campus at the beginning? Why do you write so many campuses in game articles?

First of all, the writing is really good, but the plot advances too slowly. A QQ farm has written so many chapters but has not yet been finished. . . But the flaws are not hidden, and it is quite to your liking.

After reading about thirty chapters, there is nothing wrong with the storyline, characters, etc., But some basic settings are really confusing. I couldn't help myself, so I ordered it for the first time and posted a comment. Brother, didn't you check the information before writing the book? Go back to 2014 to do Happy Farm? The game was already cold at that time, okay? Also, do you want to check when NetEase will go on the market? These basic settings are really confusing. Of course, if you want to talk about parallel time and space, just think of me as farting...

Stop writing about games and focus on urban romance. This kind of mutual restraint between the two ends will make the rhythm very slow.

This character design is much better than the previous one, Sugar Guy has made great progress!