Douluo Dalu: The Gluttonous Beast Devours the Heavens

I suggest you read the original work a few more times. The setting of the original work is not clear, and the plot is designed to involve the left and right brains competing against each other. Two Wuhun Palace titled Douluo who were not even level 96 dared to come and assassinate Ning Fengzhi openly. The protagonist and Ning Rongrong were so frightened that they ran directly to the Holy Soul Village. This is even more speechless. If you don't go to Tiandou City to find Tang San, what's the point? There is really no rationality at all.

To be honest, the writing is okay, but I just like to watch the torture of Tang San, and the first few chapters are a bit mindless. The martial arts point is full of the robbery and killing of Ning Fengzhi.

There's nothing wrong with it, the writing is acceptable. It's not particularly amazing, but it makes people watch it. Not to mention the new barrage streams and voice streams, which are the same as 💩. Most of the rest are from the studio. The early setting is okay. After more than ten chapters, the plot is watered down. The protagonist and the villain are like mentally retarded.

Level 30 at 9 years old, level 48 at 15 years old, with devouring ability Level 17 in six years, less than level 3 in one year on average. People who don't know better thought you were the ultimate martial spirit, but you turned out to be a waste of leveling up Author, you can't write without leveling up, then you should just stop writing so exaggeratedly earlier, and you end up like this 😅😅😅

The main character's name is so tacky, and the name Xuanzi itself is very classy. You're going to make me laugh out loud when you call me the tacky Xuan Tianji.

Qian Xunji, I have given this a lot, regardless of the environment of Douluo Continent; in the context of Douluo, Qianxunji is not only a rapist but also an incest, and the old era background would have been cut to pieces by a thousand cuts. Sendoriyu, known as the one with the most chivalry, is actually the same as the Third Hokage in being extremely cowardly and indecisive, and he also found out that his son had committed incest and rape without any punishment; it is the same as those weird songs on the Internet. Qian Renxue, in order to win over Tang San, sold out her people with just one sentence. She was a classic example of a superior person. In short, these three people are really no match for angels in a broad sense. They are really just angels doing their best. However, the One Thousand Dao and Ten Thousand Spirit Hall as a whole is much better than the others. As for what Tang San did after that, it is indeed not as good as these three people. If these three people have problems with their private ethics, then Tang San simply lacks public ethics. Just because the evil spirit masters are flying all over the sky and the soldiers don't know about martial arts, we can see how different Tang San is.

The writing is too sparse and there is almost no characterization. The only advantage is not the studio and AI writing. I hope the author will continue to improve.

I don't know if it's the author's poor writing style or something else. Some of the words used are a bit strange, and there are some comparisons, which are very confusing. (I listen to books, I don't know if reading them will be better)

I originally wanted to watch it, but the protagonist you wrote joined the Qibao Glazed Sect, so I didn't want to watch it. I still like to watch the kind where the protagonist is unfettered and carefree. This kind of thing is not suitable for me.

It's well written, it must be a single female protagonist, otherwise the book will be completely useless.