The Bee Immortal

The biggest flaw in this whole "poisonous weeds and provisions" scenario is the insistence on buying an oasis in the desert, supposedly for the sake of undisturbed, quiet cultivation. But isn't traveling that far with such low cultivation the biggest danger? With such a cheat-like advantage, couldn't they have cultivated peacefully first? Earning tens of thousands of spirit stones to buy an oasis?

If you can accept the system allocating points to you and turning you into a powerful inheritor, even if it means being killed by someone else, then you can continue reading. Tell me, is being the world's first spirit bee really that impressive?

Judging from the title, I thought the protagonist turned into a bee and was planning to check it out. But after reading the synopsis, it turns out the protagonist is a beekeeper. I immediately lost interest.

1. There was no necessary reason at all, yet they spent more than ten years going to the desert. 2. Prices have plummeted. Items for the Qi Refining stage cost hundreds or even thousands of spirit stones. A first-tier inheritance costs 60,000 spirit stones, and a second-tier mid-grade pill furnace costs 50,000 spirit stones. That's outrageous!

What was the author thinking? A mere Qi cultivator traveling to other countries—it's utterly ignorant and fearless, lacking even basic logic.

This book is terrible at storytelling, a jumbled mess of system-based and inheritance-based narratives. The only word to describe it is "weird!" I had low expectations for system-based stories to begin with, and it lived up to that. First, system-based stories inherently rely on poor storytelling ability, much like a wheelchair-bound story.

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the source on the panel was listed as a dying gift from a transcendent being. Even a rare and precious treasure would be better than this. And what's currently written is that after Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Purple Mansion, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, and Deity Transformation, one reaches Transcendence. This thing isn't even that high-level; its potential is already locked. It's a total rip-off.

Go to the desert to keep bees 👍

Would it be a little better to write it as an insect nest that can cultivate various spirit insects? There's a saying, "One flower alone does not make a spring, but a hundred flowers blooming make a garden full of spring." Your writing is like a silkworm and a potato—there are too many kinds of things to write about in the magical world.

Why can't we buy other spirit bees and spirit eggs to cultivate? Is this the only type of spirit bee mutation?