Cultivating the Shushan Arts in The Outcast

Author, take a look at what you have written these days? Starting from the Longhu Mountain Quanxing attack on the mountain, there are so many chapters, and the whole article is full of Quanxing's nonsense. No one wants to watch funny, confusing conversations. The plot doesn't advance at all, just nonsense. According to this progress, the entire Longhu Mountain will be over. Don't you have to write a hundred chapters? Or are you talking a lot of nonsense in the beginning and just skimming through the next few chapters? And the prizes in the lottery are also weird this time. Even if you pull out the Guangchengzi Heavenly Book, it will be more useful than Ziqing Tusitahuo. Is this fire something you can use? If you dare to make a move, you lose control and burn Longhu Mountain to the ground in a matter of minutes. But if you can't use it now, then why did you write this? When the owner of Huanzhu Tower was writing the plot of Wen Zhu, he created the Qian Tianhuo Lingzhu, which never appeared later.

The loser practicing Shushan method has a messy mind and is blind.

It's well written and describes your family. The emotional drama is extremely bad, and the description of the opposite sex is also extremely bad. Originally, it was written about a gambler, and then he traveled through time and became a top student. As the story goes, he turned into a yellow-haired character with a wretched character 6

All I can say is that the little Yakuza is also a little Yakuza even if he has a golden finger. Can we have a bit of a swordsman character?

I have thought so much about the introduction, and if I throw a few scrolls at random, Sanqing will always live in the shadows. Whether I can write about it is a question, and it is full of diaosi flavor.

There are many authors who write about system comparison genre, but they don't seem to understand why some people like to read system comparison. What readers want to see is the crushing of systems, the crushing of painting styles, and the advantages of genres, not to see how excellent your boxing and kicking skills are. Evaluate this book. It has a good intention and the rest is finished.

Is the combat power level of one person so high? Lu Jin is equivalent to the Shushan Swordsman's Lian Shen Huanxu, Lao Tianshi is equivalent to the Shushan Swordsman's Lianxu Hedao realm?

There is no chivalrous feeling like Shushan. It's like a reskinned novel, with some settings and then it's gone. I feel that the protagonist is very petty, while talking about his determination to live forever. Then, I was confused with Lu Linglong. It was not that Lu Linglong was bad, but the obstacles in her heart were just as heavy as Lu Jin's.

It feels like the author has a good idea. But I haven't figured out the Shushan sect's cultivation system, and my writing style is just mediocre to be honest. The cultivation system of the Shushan Immortal Sword Sect is quite similar to that of Under One Person, in that it also involves refining qi. But the biggest difference from the one-person system is that Shushan is regarded as the Taoist inheritance (not Taoism) of ancient Qi practitioners. It respects the three emperors (Fuxi, Shennong, and Huangdi) and also recognizes Nuwa as the ancestor of mankind. It is also clear that there is a divine realm and that it has the ability to connect with the divine realm. The way to become an immortal in the Shushan system is to ascend to the divine realm with perfect merit and virtue. Therefore, the most practiced ones are some techniques that focus on the state of mind but focus on killing (to subjugate demons and protect the Tao).

The highest state that has ever appeared in Shushan is to practice the spirit to return to the void Jie Le Zhenren, Changmei Zhenren, Tianmeng Zen Master, and Zunsheng Zen Master are to practice the spirit to return to the void. Why can Lu Jin still be weak even though he is training as a god? Is Lu Jin so awesome?

💩, The latest chapter is that you are deaf and mute. People say that you don't dare to fart for a long time. It's so stained that it makes you sick to your stomach.

The idea is good, and it looks like a mess when I write it down.

What a waste of a good idea. When writing about Shushan, the author should at least write that the protagonist has a good character. The character he wrote is so bad that it really doesn't look good.

I didn't even dare to open the table of contents. What does Chapter 23 mean? Zhang Zhiwei asked for help. What kind of arrogant words are coming out of your mouth, is this directly changing the character of one person? Forget it, let's go

The introduction is pretty good, but the content is rubbish. The protagonist is a loser and has a lot of obscene thoughts.

Under one person, foreign countries are constantly researching different technologies, while domestic companies more often just focus on balancing.

It took 8 chapters to defeat the whole sex, and 6 chapters to defeat the Wang family later. The number of words is not that bad, right?

The creativity is okay, but the beginning is too long-winded, especially the first chapter which makes no sense at all!

I originally wanted to read the introduction. After reading the comments, forget it. It is recommended that the author research AI and then read more physical books. Online writing is not what it was a few decades ago.

Except for the good introduction, the rest is too crotch-heavy

The writing is broken. Do you know what you are writing?

What a damn thing, why did the Slimming Furnace go to the imperial court? Abandon books and waste traffic.

Personally, I feel that Shushan's cultivation system is very reasonable and logically self-consistent. It is much more reasonable than the immortal cultivation system of modern online novels, and this cultivation system is not weak either. The realm systems of most online novels nowadays are essentially about differences in power and are too homogeneous. It's hard to imagine how the owner of Huanzhu Tower built a cultivation system that is more complete than modern online writing.

After it was put on the shelf, the writing became worse and worse, and became more and more sloppy, making people unable to stand it. It was obviously a good idea, but there was not enough writing power.

The author is actually quite good, his writing style is not bad, the book is okay, and the layout is great. But when you look at this book, you can't think of it as a fan of Shushan, you can only think of it as a fan work of the world view of Under One Person. Among the fan works of Under One Person, this book is very well written, and can even be classified into the category of fairy grass, but if you apply it to Shushan, it will look nondescript. Even if you think of Shushan as a world view, just think of Shushan as a plug-in for the protagonist.

I feel like the author has failed in writing, and sometimes I wonder if I have read the original work, as many things are inconsistent with it. The protagonist is an idealist, and he really feels like he can do whatever he wants!

The writing style is just right and the combat power is not equal. Since you want to write about the world of transcendence of the heavens, a novice world, and the ink is still there in more than 200 chapters, doesn't it mean that there is no penis?

Not bad! It's a pity that the overall view is a bit low. When you see yourself, the world, and all living beings, the protagonist is too small! I saw the update. The first stage has not been reached yet, but it's okay! I can only say it's okay! After all, I'm still growing. It's a pity that I thought that I should have a complete life in the first life, and only start to see myself in the second life. What a pity!

You are worthy of being such a cheater as Hongjun. You can laugh to death just by reading the introduction.

In my personal opinion, the writing is quite good In addition, Lu Linglong is also my favorite character in the one-person comic The second is Chen Duo On the other hand, I personally have no feelings for the baby that everyone likes I feel that she really owes the whole world to them in order to find her life No quarrel here, just a personal opinion