Re-Engraving Talents to Cultivate Immortality: Lock the Fairy at the Beginning

I came back to my senses after reading the update today. No matter from the title or introduction, the first reaction of readers is that the fairy bound to the protagonist should be the heroine. But read these chapters. The character design of the heroine is a bit vicious, yes, not sinister, but vicious. One can imagine the fate of Dinglu who became a Nascent Soul monk. He ignored the protagonist's life and let him die for him, only caring about himself. Personality is very important, so important that it can even be written as a core selling point. The male protagonist's character in the first two chapters is already very weak, and the female protagonist's character in the new two chapters is also unlikable. Originally it was supposed to use a good supporting character to support the scene, and then gradually improve the male protagonist's character. A bit broken to be honest. I don't know if you watch anime or not. Let me give you an example. Rem from Zero - Starting Life in Another World. As an important supporting role, in the hearts of quite a few pure animation fans, her status is higher than that of the heroine. Because she loves the male protagonist so much that she would give her life for him. In the early plot, Rem killed the male protagonist many times, but why was she still able to quickly "reverse" the character. It's because she has a sufficient motive for killing the male protagonist that the audience can understand. During the King's Selection, a man who behaved strangely, could not explain his origins and reeked of a witch came to the manor. He bewitched his camp leaders, disrupted the manor owner's plans, and threatened his sister's safety. Under such a premise, she chose to torture and kill the protagonist many times. The audience can accept such a character. And the heroine in this book is now harming the hero entirely because of herself. It's a selfish persona. As a heroine with an important supporting role, the initial impression you leave on readers can be zero points, but not negative points. If you want to "clean up" later, you need to put in a lot of effort. More importantly, how many readers can see the back. I ignored this very important issue yesterday. Lockdown is a major attraction. The relationship between the male and female protagonists should be in the same boat. They love and kill each other, but they don't really want to harm each other. Then they occasionally exchange sweets, with a paper window in between to attract readers' appetite. To be honest, the current plot and characters are very weak. At least I didn't want to continue reading after the third chapter. I guess the author had a general outline, but he didn't break it down into chapters to carefully design the characters and plot. Write 40,000 to 50,000 words and see if there is an editor.

It's just that the multiple fainting spells are a little bit toxic. It's quite interesting to cast the wrong talent and become a cauldron physique.

The author of the male body and female body is so imaginative. It's beautiful and I love watching it. Update soon📖