Nirvana Immortal Clan

It is recommended that the introduction be concise and easy to understand. It is difficult to have the desire to read the introduction if it is vague.

When will the contract be signed 😁 Come on, keep writing 😡

Save more and wait for the contract 😍 When you put it on the shelves, I will be the first one, your book friend 🤓

So what kind of story do you want to write? I don't see it.

My brother who writes well, I suggest you scan the list, open the book and read it

Come on, the world view is a bit broad.

The author can take a look at the plot and writing style of "Red Heart Patrolling the Sky". There are too many words in one paragraph, divide it into more paragraphs

I believe you once, I hope you won't stop updating 😡

You should be a newbie, although I haven't watched it, but come on, give you a monthly vote

I thought about it and will tell you my understanding here Group portraits are divided into two types One; individual Personal has two meanings. The first is personal attraction/charm, that is, you have character, and I admire it; the second is personal character, such as his tough character, not afraid of hardships, and his progress for a certain purpose, and I am attracted by his character, so I will follow him to set out for that purpose (such as overthrowing the old rule, counterattacking the demons, etc.) Two; Goal This group portrait goal is based on the family's goal of cultivating immortals Each member of the family strives for the family to grow and continue to prosper. It is the way that the patriarchs of the past generations have led the people, or it is a method left over from ancient times, allowing the family to develop for maintenance or as a last resort, etc. This is my own understanding, I hope it can help you, come on 😡

I really like farming, especially the family. Come on, author, I hope to write a good novel in the future.

The starting point collection monster is here and has been collected.

I can read it, but I don't have high requirements for new authors.

Why hasn't it been time to sign the contract yet? 😆

Why don't I have the tone of Mr. Storyteller when I listen to a book? .

Why don't you say that you can tell the level of an author just by reading the introduction. The description is not systematic and the language style is inconsistent. It is recommended to study more and study the ones at the top of the monthly vote list.

Although it's not impossible to understand but it takes a lot of concentration to understand It's even harder to understand by listening I tried my best to read less than ten chapters Maybe I couldn't help but rush to leave a message here 🙂 I think There are too many and too complicated things at the beginning When many backgrounds and character descriptions are not understood by the readers The fight is too detailed and the various layers are laid out at once and explanations are mixed in during the fight I think I will make a scene And there is no way Integration and substitution No feeling of hatred or jealousy It was just like seeing two people fighting on the road and I didn't know why 🙂 The state of the practice can be mentioned in the study of life paragraphs The characters should be described separately at least Two or three people should be more clear Otherwise, no one will let me know his background It's very confusing Chitose's eyes suddenly opened Take a step and have arrived outside the Sanheyuan Lying now is the enemy who was trampled to death by Chitose Ayumi just now