The Outcast: I Can Change Careers Without Limits

Is Li Muxuan your father? You write a long, rambling plot and then spend several chapters just spouting nonsense. You should have just gone in and killed the entire Quanxing sect. Speechless.

This was originally supposed to be a fanfiction that confused Qi with the primordial Qi, but overall it's still pretty good.

You've got so many professions. Try to integrate them as soon as possible, otherwise it'll easily fall apart. There are too many random professions. As I wrote, I even lost track of what professions and abilities I had. It'll easily fall apart later. It would be best to have a main profession or a power system that runs throughout the entire novel. Good luck!

He hasn't been training for very long, yet he's already on par with Zhang Zhiwei... Even though there's some kind of cheat involved.

As an unconventional national leader and the protagonist with unparalleled strength among the extraordinary individuals, They went to be protectors of the young Zhang Zhiwei and Wugensheng 🤔 No, they had no respect or reverence for the protagonist; they were more like babysitters. No, that's not quite right either. The protagonist always tries to "inadvertently" reveal his secrets and information, which feels like a child wanting adult approval. 😅

I'm not afraid of authors with bad writing skills, I'm afraid of authors without brains. Dou Ruchang had ill intentions from the beginning and led people to follow the protagonist. When he found that he couldn't beat the protagonist, he started to persuade him with kind words. He managed to win over the protagonist in just a few words and even assigned the protagonist a location. Is his IQ that low?

After it was published, the writing became padded and disgusting, but at least it was still readable. Now, after reading the latest chapter, from chapter 31 down the mountain, what kind of garbage is this? Especially chapter 110, the next few chapters are all disgusting plots.

We must respect the objective facts! If the protagonist is a free spirit, and one of the top few in terms of strength among extraordinary individuals, and then he becomes sworn brothers with "them," it can be said that the protagonist is humble, and they are all people of genuine character. However, the protagonist's strength is currently among the top (a minor issue).

They talked a good game, promising to teach Li Muxuan a lesson about darkness, but after fighting for so long, they didn't kill a single one. What's the point?

It gets worse after the first three chapters. It seems the protagonist will end up just like in other fanfics, fawning over the Tang Clan. Honestly, believing a bunch of ruthless killers who have loved me is less appealing than believing I am Qin Shi Huang.