After I Quit the Game, the Monster Girls Became Yandere

If you want me, just fuck the heroine directly, fuck these heroines directly, if it doesn't work once, just 100 times

After reading it, let me tell you the truth, one good word and one bad word. Good things: The emotions are well written and the yandere is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Bad words: The author has completely corrected his illness. He writes as if he has met someone before. It feels so scary, 😱😱 so gravity.

It's time for my favorite niche twisted yandere article again😋 It's a pity that articles like Qidian are easy to dislike.

There is almost no human power in this book, and writing it like this is quite a tightrope. If you deal with the relationship between monster girls, especially among a bunch of lunatics, I have read yandere-type books before, and the end result is that the writing is very good, but I can't stand it. It's too lunatic and I can't think of the protagonist at all.

The author should probably double-check the male lead's character design. I don't know why, but after reading it, I really feel his character is strange, and it's quite uncomfortable and awkward to read. Because in the main story, I rarely see the male lead try to communicate with the female lead. He only seems to react when she does something wrong, then decides to confront her.

It feels like the bond between the monster girl and the protagonist is deeper than that between the protagonist and the passersby. The passersby feel as thin as NPCs. It feels strange to see the protagonist constantly thinking about how to use the monster girl for the sake of the passersby NPCs. Didn't he have a favorite monster girl when he played the game? He's already transmigrated, so why doesn't he go find her?

So even if the monster girl destroys human society and cuts off civilization, the protagonist will still be followed by a group of things? Also, even if the protagonist learns that these monster girls have done so many crazy things because of him, he doesn't have any mood swings at all. The father-in-law is married to the mother-in-law.

It's so hard to write this kind of story; it's easy to abandon it and leave it unfinished. Good luck, author!

It's very unpleasant. The good things are not thorough enough, and the bad things are not direct enough. The half-good, half-bad and poorly balanced line makes the protagonist very disconnected. He wants to save humanity but doesn't bother to describe it. It's like a background board.

Has the author watched too much AiAng TV? He keeps suppressing the protagonist's fighting power, forcing the male lead to die to gather information and exploit information gaps, then brutally punishes him, letting him experience different ways to die. Is this a mad dash towards AiLi TV? 🙂🙂🙂