After I Quit the Game, the Monster Girls Became Yandere

After reading it, let me tell you the truth, one good word and one bad word. Good things: The emotions are well written and the yandere is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Bad words: The author has completely corrected his illness. He writes as if he has met someone before. It feels so scary, 😱😱 so gravity.

If you want me, just fuck the heroine directly, fuck these heroines directly, if it doesn't work once, just 100 times

It's time for my favorite niche twisted yandere article again😋 It's a pity that articles like Qidian are easy to dislike.

There is almost no human power in this book, and writing it like this is quite a tightrope. If you deal with the relationship between monster girls, especially among a bunch of lunatics, I have read yandere-type books before, and the end result is that the writing is very good, but I can't stand it. It's too lunatic and I can't think of the protagonist at all. How to survive in a situation where everyone is accepted, the writing is too good, and the portrayal of the yandere is too good, but it becomes a restriction, especially when all the members are yandere, so the author must think clearly about how to write several more, and how to write, and to protect the "human forces" that are no longer human at all.

Should the author carefully confirm the character of the male protagonist? I don't know why, but I really feel that the character of the male protagonist is very strange when I look at it. It makes me feel uncomfortable and awkward. Because in the main text, I really rarely see the male protagonist trying to communicate with the female protagonist, and then I always see the female protagonist doing evil, and then he realizes that he wants to break up with the female protagonist. As a result, there will be no communication in the next project, and what will happen next, it is equivalent to a feeling of being incompetent and standing at the same time. Obviously I really like kind male protagonists, but I also feel that the author wants to write a kind and normal male protagonist, but the actual performance of this male protagonist is very awkward! After thinking about it for a while, I felt that maybe the protagonist is like the Riddler (I take back a few curse words here). He is always thinking about this and that in his head, speculating over and over again, and then he defines Monster Girl for himself. The male protagonist's ability to go back and become stronger is already considered a very top level ability, but it's strange that you don't try to educate various female protagonists. Maybe you, the author, think that Monster Girl has developed a certain personality that is difficult to change over the years, but I think you should at least write it so that the male protagonist can try to solve the problem every time he meets Monster Girl, and then think of other solutions after trying to no avail. It's like you have arrested a suspect who is almost confirmed to be a murderer, but you have to hire a defense lawyer to try to exonerate the suspect. Because only after the protagonist tries to persuade and communicate to no avail, what he does next is legitimate. After all, what you want to write is a kind-hearted male protagonist with normal views, right? On the contrary, the description of the monster girl is quite normal.

I feel that the bond between the monster girl and the protagonist is deeper than that between the passerby and the protagonist. The passerby feels as weak as the NPC. It feels strange to see the protagonist thinking about how to use the monster girl for the NPC on the roadside. Didn't he have a favorite monster girl when he played the game? He has obviously traveled through time, why not find it?

Nice! But for this plot and characters, the author should hire Haji Gao. Is the author really a human being?

It's too difficult to write this kind of article. It's easy to end up being unfinished. Please do your best, author.

Author, your writing is so good, I can't stand it, brother running away

Don't worry, you are one of the few people I've ever read who wrote something truly yandere-y.