History Park: Starting with the Wanli Aid to Korea

I personally like this book very much. It hits a few points that I care about right from the beginning. The first is that the protagonist is reliable. This is really important. Many novels nowadays are most afraid that the protagonist is either too stupid or too arrogant, but the protagonist in this book is obviously not. He observes the environment, judges the situation, and takes action at a relatively online time, so readers will not be anxious while reading. The second is the strong advancement of the story. From entering the paradise, to entering the Ming Dynasty, to recruiting and establishing power, the process is one after another, and there is no wasted drama. Thirdly, the historical flavor is very well done, especially the parts about the frontier army, firearms, recruitment, and military discipline. It can be seen that the author did not just check Baidu and start writing by hand, but read the book. Historical writing is most afraid of having a nameless background, and as a result, it ends up being the same old empty book, but at least the beginning of this book is not like that. So my evaluation is: the subject matter is innovative, the writing has pictures, and the characters have supporting points. It is a type that can make people want to read more after reading a few chapters. Also, I know you are not a newbie. Have you considered writing a historical article specifically? It's a pity that such good writing is written in the heavens.

I came across your book from the great master's chapter recommendation. I just finished reading Chapter 23, and I can write it well. After reading Infinite Streaming for many years, I now cherish this kind of book even more, which did not start as a fan. I know that the original copy is extremely difficult, and it is also the most difficult test for the author. Your book showed me your sincerity, not to borrow other people's world to get started, but to seriously build your own world. Of course, the early data will definitely be slow to come up, but this is the right path. I hope you can keep writing, and I hope there will be more authors like you in the future.

After reading it, I found that it is a completely original book, the plot is smooth and tense, and the characters are logically online. It's not a mindless crushing game. It has intelligence and cooperation. The battle is exciting. Thumbs up. Being willing to spend time writing characters is also rare. There are also problems. The settings can be more natural and the information does not need to be too full. Of course, these are details and do not affect the overall situation. I personally like your way of writing, a typical long-term setting. The three views are very upright and there is a sense of chivalry. This should be maintained. Original work will definitely suffer in the early stage. Fans can take advantage of it, but you cannot. There are many things, you have to spread them slowly. If you have the strength, your results will come later. You can easily write 3 million words using this framework. Send you a message. A good book is not afraid of being slow, but it is afraid of being lost halfway.

I haven't watched it yet, but I know it's clear that the old Zhu family's rebellion is against them. The gentry group along the coast was killed, the bandits who collaborated with the enemy on all sides were killed, the red-haired barbarian missionaries were killed, and the roots of the old Zhu family were dug into their graves, and the family of Lao Zhu was killed all over the world. Kill these in turn, and then open up the people's wisdom. At least it can prevent the annihilation of civilization.

I felt a little aggrieved when I saw 25. I don't understand why you, a person from the Chinese faction in the plot, feel like you are being suppressed all the time.

To be honest, recruiting soldiers cannot recruit refugees. Firstly, they lack physical strength. Secondly, their origins are unknown. Thirdly, they are illiterate and cannot teach military discipline and military formations. Even civilians are embarrassed.

The quality of the book is very high, the writing style and settings are very good. It can be said that it is better than most books on the market, but I feel that the shortcomings are also obvious: 1. It describes too many things and is too professional. For example, take Ming Jun. In essence, readers only want to read cool stories, but you use a lot of pen and ink to describe the scene environment, background world view, and character construction. I feel it is not necessary. 2 The main line is very clear, it is the characters that drive the plot, which is good. 3 There are not many cool points, and I am very dissatisfied. Since the world is infinite, it should be given a few cool golden fingers. 4 In fact, the pace of this book is relatively slow, focusing too much on foreshadowing and the rationality of the story. To be fair, I think your writing skills are good, but it is too traditional. Your writing style is more traditional literature, focusing more on the description of characters and scenes, and the storytelling and excitement are weak. I said, you have already written about the infinite flow of the world, why not enjoy it all in one breath, even if it is no brainer. The book is good, that's all. I wish you success.

Cool, the author is so strong! I have read hundreds of books, but few can write war scenes well. Either the protagonist is showing off, cheating and crushing him. If it's time to fight, do a stream of consciousness and pass it by in one go. But your dialogue before the battle, the atmosphere and the details of the battle are all very professional, and the more you watch, the more interesting it becomes. Although it is written in a traditional book style and is not refreshing, the quality is really high. Just maintain this level and keep going!

Pig's Knuckle: I am the Overlord of the Ming Dynasty.

I like this title the best, but what we wrote is really good. I also saw a chapter recommendation from a certain master. Come on!