I Can Equip the Uncanny

There are emotional scenes in the supernatural novel, but the writing is not very good, and it is a bit unnatural.

For the first equipment, find a cat cafe. For a few dozen yuan, just pet the cat twice. The cat will shed enough hair for you to complete the mission dozens of times.

It's okay, but the emotional line is too stretched. I suggest the author write less about this part, or go to further study.

The subsequent plot becomes more and more complicated as the protagonist woman progresses easily, and the efforts of the protagonist and others become a joke.

Does the author lack common sense? Don't know how far 20 kilometers is? Before writing, could you check whether it is 20 kilometers from your home to the other side of the city? The protagonist wants to run in a park 20 kilometers away from home, that's right! It's a straight line distance! ! ! Straight line distance! ! ! Straight line distance! ! ! 20,000 Meters! Or walk slowly, it will take 3 to 4 hours! ! ! That's all. It can also explain that the protagonist is afraid of being seen by people he knows. It turns out that a person who lives near his home is also walking his dog in this park. Are you sure he is not following you? Walk the dog and run 20 kilometers! ! ! ! Running from one end of the city to the other. Think about it before writing and understand the concept of distance before writing.

It can be seen that the author is obviously a novice in writing, and the plot twists are not only blunt, but completely forced. Take two plots as an example: two public officials wearing black trench coats walking on the street are particularly eye-catching in themselves, and it is normal for passers-by to cast strange glances at them. But one of them had no basis and just relied on intuition to determine that there was something wrong with the protagonist. It was clear that he deliberately created conflicts, and the subsequent related affairs were all made up. Looking at the main task part, the protagonist needs to complete three thefts by using a golden finger to solidify the entries. He had already done this to stray dogs twice, and the last time he had to find the woman holding the dog, and pretended to attack the dog in the name of filming a show. What's outrageous is that the other party agreed easily, and even took the initiative to add WeChat afterwards. Anyone with a discerning eye can see that an ambiguous line will be arranged later. The overall plot is like being forcibly bound and spliced ​​with high-strength ropes. The logic is full of loopholes and completely ignores common sense.

The economic system is broken. Weird items only sell for 10,000, and ordinary handicraft knives sell for 40,000. It's outrageous.

I usually read novels that are full of criticism, so I kind of want to taste it 🪖 But! ! ! After reading about ten chapters, I just can't bear it anymore! 💀 The protagonist's more obvious personality is: [Retard], [Diaosi] I won't go into details! Brothers, you can try it yourself! 👍

It's quite outrageous. It's forced to cheat and cheat into the devouring mechanism. What kind of god would be so surprised by watching a movie?

It was over. I was still interested at first, but when I saw the second picture, I was persuaded to give up. There is a reason why the results are so poor and there are so few comments 🙂