Shrouding the Heavens: Joining the Yaoguang Holy Land from the Start

As soon as the ancient tribe was born, the protagonist's actions were really mutually beneficial. On the one hand, you say that he is the kind of person who puts interests first and is self-centered, but he is not. Classic fights life and death for the human race. He faces a bunch of opponents alone, and it doesn't matter if other Yakuza forces watch the show behind his back. But on the other hand, if you want to say that he cares about the world and does not care about personal gains and losses, he first made crazy excuses, saying that it was useless to ask Gai Jiuyou, and it would not work to give him the magic medicine - to be reasonable, I was convinced at first, but in the end he said, "Although there are all the above reasons, in the final analysis it is because I don't want to, I don't know why I just don't want to". Le, if you didn't say this, I pretended to be a rational analysis. If you added this sentence, it would seem to be a defense, but it doesn't work. I will stick to my image of the stubborn kid on the page, and slap him in the face with his position. If you don't want to do that, why would you come to Yaochi to participate in a conference just to kill a few ancestor kings just to show off, right? Then you have indeed succeeded 😊

I have said that only the ordinary body and cheats can slowly catch up with the special physique. After a lot of effort, I can finally overtake it with the help of cheats and opportunities to change my destiny. Obviously, with these cheats and opportunities and the special physique, I can enjoy it from beginning to end. It will continue to be sweet. I have to start with a waste and not have to eat hard. Don't use ruthless people as examples. Don't people want special physiques? No one has that kind of top-notch understanding for cheating, enough luck, and a deep background. Whether they have a special physique or not does not affect the final achievement. It is best if you have a special physique. You can be sweet all the way to the end without beginning. It is not like the original book that starts with bitterness and then sweetness. These people who reject special physiques are speechless. They mean the same thing inside and out. If they don't endure hardship, their final achievements will be affected. If they are not abused, their hips will definitely stretch in the later stages. They always feel that having a chaotic body is frightening and there is no hope for the future. They must have suffered enough in the beginning of the mortal body to achieve the achievements that were originally easily available, so they don't feel inexplicable guilt.

There is a big gap between him and Qin Sheng next door.

This author is poisonous, and the books are good-looking. However, this author always likes to write something poisonous and disgusting to the readers. After reading more than ten chapters and getting better, he will arrange a little poisonous point to distract you. Like today's latest chapter of refining the seventh-level evolutionary liquid, he arranged for a great sage to invade by force, forcing the protagonist not to You have to waste a lot of energy to forcibly refine it. If you don't practice in the fluctuating light, if you don't put it in the imperial formation, if you don't wear the imperial weapon, it will forcefully disgust you. Don't read this advice for newbies. There are many poisonous spots like this later. They are all small poisonous spots. You can accept them, but you will be nauseated frequently.

Conflict is not hard-written, it must be caused by cause and effect, naturally. I won't say it before, but the leak of the magical medicine in your tenth level is really a revelation. The people who have experienced here are at least one level higher than the protagonist, let alone two or more levels behind in combat power. If there are people around, it is impossible that the protagonist's spiritual consciousness cannot detect it... What you write like this is like saying that a radar that can detect eight hundred light-years cannot detect an eight-light-year ranging radar that is close to you. Not only is the book unreasonable, but the character is also intellectually unreasonable. The most important thing is that it makes people feel that the author is not writing seriously and is just perfunctory, which will greatly reduce the interest of readers 😅. Also, the plot feels like there is no main theme and goal. Next, you should carefully think about determining the future path of transcendence for the protagonist, and write around the center to make it uncluttered and eye-catching. Good words of advice are all here 🙏

Don't write your original work. What the heck, just any passer-by is bound by the Eight Forbiddens, and even the Saint King cannot break through it. If you want to rely on the Divine Forbidden City to break through, you might think that the Great Sage has broken through the Quasi-Emperor, and then the protagonist inspires the Great Emperor Formation in the Furnace and is run away by him. He honestly goes to the Earth to get a wave of resources, then goes back to Beidou to suppress the ancient tribe, and finally sets foot on the ancient road in the starry sky.

It's a pity. It's a pretty good book among Zhetian fandoms. The latest chapter suddenly made me unable to accept it. Dark matter has come out, and Emperor Huangtian has become a clown.

It's so rubbish. He has the fighting power of the fifth emperor of heaven and can still be broken by a few sublimated supreme beings.

Do you think you have no time to write? There is something called Dark Matter that is not present in the original novel. If there is Dark Matter in the Golden Crow, do you think the protagonist can beat him? Dark matter is something created by the priest.

The writing is okay, but there is one point that I must complain about. What is the significance of the Holy Land of Shaking Light to the protagonist? The protagonist picks up the divine soldiers by himself, and cuts a lot of the resources needed for practice by himself. There are no guardians when he goes out to travel. Of course, the protagonist did not regard the Shaking Light Holy Land as one of his own. When he explored the Ten Thousand Dragons Nest, he knew that there was danger, but he did not tell his own holy land to bring the imperial soldiers with him. Only a few people died, and the imperial soldiers were beautifully invisible. Of course, this is all the author's fault. The protagonist who comes from a powerful background is written like a casual cultivator.