This Brave Man Is Even More Despicable in the World

First of all, it is a purely subjective evaluation and has no reference value. This book is well written. It has two flaws, but they are minor flaws. The plot design and character creation are both very good. The characters of several main characters are well established, and even the supporting characters with little description are very eye-catching. The main plot + the male protagonist are very Japanese comics, similar to the combination of a black-hearted enterprise + a cautious and courageous person. The male protagonist has a very charming personality. Although it is not as disdainful as the male protagonist of a black enterprise, it can be said to be unique. This alone has surpassed 90% of the books in this category. Now that the prologue "rebirth" is probably over, the first chapter "Goblin Farmhouse" has reached the later stage. Although it seems a bit too big, I don't know if the author will involve x. It depends on his performance. I will not comment casually on the content that is not written. I will just complain about two minor flaws. One more nonsense, it's not about promoting first and then suppressing, it's really well written. The following complaints are based on the fact that this is a good book. Then the following is "suppression" (funny), two small problems that affect the perception. Simply put, they are "snapshot" and "chaotic narration" "Snapshot" is quite straightforward. Don't always write parts of the plot and characters that are missing. "Snapshot" is a good way of writing, but it doesn't let you know everything. It's all written in one stroke, the end of the past life is written in one stroke, the beginning of this life is written in one stroke, familiarity with old people is written in one stroke, strategy and planning is written in one stroke, ability description is written in one stroke, and the core settings are written, you give me a single stroke and write a little bit to prepare for the future. This writing method is for you to use it once or twice to increase the interest, not for you to write a book in fragments. Then based on "one stroke" and God knows what the author's outline is (most likely there is none), the worst situation that occurs is "chaotic narration", which can also be called "sleepwalking writing". There will often be a plot that I am happy to watch at the beginning, and then suddenly jump to another character to do another unrelated thing like sleepwalking, and it is not starting from the beginning. Writing, it's like deleting the tail of one and the beginning of the other and forcing them together. It doesn't matter if the plot is skipped. Can you at least provide a dividing line? Can you stop half of the sentence "The male protagonist feels so and so when he does thing a", and give me the next sentence "The supporting character is thinking about something, and he feels so and so about thing b". How can you put the two contents together without the slightest relationship. . . Although I can understand it after just thinking about it, can you please don't let me read a book and worry about how the male protagonist dealt with it in the end, and who suddenly did this next. . . How about giving the plot a beginning and an end? Actually, these two writing methods are normal writing methods for novels. They are very common brush strokes, interludes, flashbacks, and random narration. But don't use this writing method for the entire book. There is a word I used earlier that is quite accurate, which is to write the book in fragments. The look and feel of this book is a bit like breaking a top-quality novel and then putting it together blindfolded, and many of the fragments were lost. . . It's actually a bit outrageous. That's it, it's a book worth reading. It's a wonder to be able to combine such good characters and plot like this 233

It looks good, why isn't it popular? But Let's talk about the highlights: The author is a veteran at playing jokes, and there are so many flaws and jokes that I can't finish them. I laughed to death, but the author will be held legally responsible. For those who are hesitant to read it, you can first read the title of each chapter to know how viable this book is The plot is reasonable and coherent The characters have a bit of a Japanese comic drama, which is somewhat different from the style of Qidian literature (it is 2022, and Tsundere is more cute The emotional drama has a single heroine, and the author personally certifies that there is no harem In addition to the protagonist CP, there are also lilies in the hometown, the orthopedics of the young master and the sworn sister ( The girls around the protagonist in this book will not mindlessly criticize the protagonist. I like it The shortcomings are also obvious: First of all, the author is married to his husband, and there are a lot of typos Secondly, some of the subtle plots are too coincidental and deliberate, as if to cater to the protagonist. Fortunately, the poison is not too dense Finally, the author is a newbie, and it is normal to have no experience, but his flaws are not concealed. This book is definitely worth reading, so come and read it

Brothers, all I can say is that it looks really good! And it gets more exciting as you go to the back. You will get to know a brave man who is different from the past, cunning and cunning but truly just. Eluma is so gentle, I really want an Eluma! ! ! The Brave Warriors may be scornful in the early stage, but not in the later stage, but the characters are more full-bodied and interesting.

It has a good look and feel, with a single female protagonist, each team has its own highlights and weaknesses, the hostile forces are not weak-minded, and the confrontational scenes have a twist. Although his name is Chu Yong, he is not completely Chu. The protagonist is not only weak in means, but has clear goals and strong execution, so he can only be regarded as a neutral hero (I call Kazuma a chaotic hero, who relies 70% on luck and 20% on improvisation) As for the protagonist's team, I can only say that they are too reliable, but not powerful enough. Moreover, there are two girls who use the memories of the protagonist to expand the depth when they first meet. It's not bad, but I personally don't think it's interesting. But after all, the people in the protagonist's team will have many opportunities to expand in the future. In comparison, I think the most three-dimensional character is the old emperor. He has the limitations of being a native, but also has the possibility of achieving self-breakthrough. When you are young, you have dreams, and when you are old, you have persistence. Facing two generations of brave men, he is powerless but not humble. I have a plan, but I don't know if it's just a moth attracted to a flame. Even when he doesn't like the protagonist, he will say "Ah, yes, yes, yes", and he can deal with it. What can I say about the new main line? It's too serious (it's a good idea), but the author did a good job with the foreshadowing and reversal of the previous plot, so it's worth watching in addition to the funny parts. It's hard to say how to adjust it specifically. I personally have a high degree of acceptance, so I feel like I can accept it as long as it doesn't collapse. The author should be an old surfer. He has a lot of jokes and funny jokes. People who like it find it very interesting. I give you a thumbs up. Anyway, come on

Very interesting, really interesting

I like watching crumbs. How crumby is the brave man? How good is dio and crumbling boss?

Together, these two are not half as disdainful as the male protagonist.

It was very interesting to watch at first, and the writing is also very good. After watching it, I suddenly became impatient and spent my time. I kept analyzing this and explaining that. In fact, very little of the plot was advanced by describing the actions of the protagonist. Most of them were forced. Who would have the patience to watch this?

You have to read this book with your brain. At first, I thought it was the kind of movie where the main character is not a real brave man and "he can replace him". But it turned out to be a Guy Ritchie movie, with multiple narratives, and finally closed, with the hero fighting the bad god.

Why? Why is it that every time I find a good book, it's like a seedling🤔🤔🤔

After reading a few chapters, I would like to express my thoughts. It is really unreliable to establish an initial base through goblins and slimes. A certain cute slime king can do this because he is awesome enough to destroy a country by himself. He has ghosts, demons, and pig kings under his command. The protagonist is now really poor and powerless, and he does not have the capital at all. What are humans talking about? People who are not our species must have different hearts. Countries can fight each other, not to mention even the species are different. Now the protagonist does not have any defense force, and even the forest is not unified. He has contacted the human country so early. No matter how harmless you package it, you can't change the essence of this matter: you controlled a large group of goblins and slimes through unknown methods. What is your purpose? How to control it? Why should we control them to run a so-called farmhouse? In addition to goblins and slimes, can I control other stronger monsters? If you just spread these words casually, you will become more and more outrageous and easily trigger panic. It is impossible for those in power to believe whatever you say. You said that you gathered so many monsters to serve the people. How the hell are you lying? If you don't make it clear, you will either accept control or be eliminated. No one in power will leave such a huge unstable factor beside him. By then, you won't even have the power to resist, and you will be waiting to die.

It looks very messy, always pretending, and has no clear goals. It seems that everything is in place, but in fact, the author is cheating. He often thinks that he thinks that others think,

It's fun to be funny, and occasionally a sentence is really interesting, But what kind of bullshit plot is this? Looking from one end to the other, the buddy who is watching has a question mark in his mind? There seems to be no plot at all, and I can't understand it at all... When I read the first two chapters, I felt that this book should not be a blockbuster, it is not even a high-quality book. After reading more than 20 chapters, I found that there is a reason to rush to the street...

Great

The author is really great👏. Zhou Li's seemingly heaven-defying actions are actually under the control of the gods. This is a normal situation. How could a brave man who was summoned and reincarnated many times get rid of the control of the gods all of a sudden? To be honest, I saw Death Ghost being killed before, and it was really a bit regretful. I secretly thought that this book was a bit broken. I didn't expect that the author had completed the settings here. It was really detailed! It can be seen that the author has an extremely detailed outline. Although Zhou Li is the biggest variable, he also abides by the biggest fixed number. He has been reincarnated several times, accepting the arrangements of the gods, and shouldering an inescapable fate. The stronger he is and the more he pursues the realization of his own path, the more he cannot escape from this established fate. It is really a balance! The weaker the person, the more likely he is to get rid of his fate, but when he is weak, he has no strength to get rid of it. The stronger the person, the more strength he has to get rid of the shackles, but it is precisely his own strength that restrains him and cannot get rid of the shackles of fate. No matter how Zhou Li felt that he was carefully planning to get rid of the gods, only now did he realize that what he wanted to do was destined, and this was the "main line" of his destiny that he could not refuse. At the same time, the arrival of the plot at this moment also means that it has officially reached its climax, the world view has been completely laid out, the main line has become clear, and the story will usher in a summary stage of the first half. I am looking forward to the story that the author will write next.

Author, do you know why so few people read your book? Can you add a protagonist in the character column? Just put a female protagonist. People think you are writing a male-oriented novel and a female-oriented novel.

I feel like Eluma is a combination of these two😏

On a 10-point scale, this book can be rated a 7. There is imagination and innovation, the scraps are real scraps, there are emotional lines, and there are also logical foreshadowings. However, there is a catch. The author tmd does not need to talk about settings. When he talks about settings, there is no foreshadowing. It is a slap in the face. Changing the map is like going to a different world. Settings must be added, and he will only talk about it when tmd needs to use it, and he will talk about it once. I'm convinced, I've never read such a tiring book. Goodbye (ー_ー)!!

To sum up, the story of the book is roughly: I was lucky enough to upgrade from level 1 to level 3 in the early stage, but finally I got a task at level 3, which cost me 999. If this was made into a game, it would definitely receive rave reviews. Of course the funny side can be adjusted at will, but if you want to go serious, I hope the author can focus the story frame smaller and start from a smaller place, so that it can be detailed and touching The following are the details: The first fifty chapters are particularly interesting whether they are jokes or tricks, and they often make me laugh. But after chapter 50, that is, after the appearance of the Black Emperor, the author's writing style suddenly began to change, transforming from a light comedy to a serious and serious aspect. This idea is actually very good. It can not only attract the reader's attention, but also truly express something. It is somewhat similar to the story line of "Towards Klimasa". However, the author has shown obvious deficiencies in the handling of details. Compared with "Toward Krimatha", the transformation in the middle period did not make people gradually immersed, gradually brought in, and gradually moved. On the contrary, it showed a sense of absurdity. The author spent a lot of effort to set up many skills and tricks that destroy the balance, such as the Black Emperor, Fair Judgment, etc., But he kept silent about the loopholes or loopholes in the rules and just brushed them off. Through a series of newly added and complex settings, the protagonist is allowed to reverse the enemy's conspiracy, but it does not explain why others obediently fall into the trap. It feels like it is giving the NPC an intelligence. Of course, it doesn't mean that the author's writing is not good, but it's just that funny and serious works have completely different logical requirements for the plot. In the first fifty chapters, the tone of the work is that of a heroic adventure, so the supporting characters can naturally be more monotonous. The heroine can always be stupid, cute and ignorant of the world. Azi and Linghai have no special experiences but they have a very close relationship. But after the serious confrontation, the nobles were said to have rebelled by the protagonist in a few words. In one chapter, the gods lost all their scheming. Even if we skip the logic, simply excessive expansion of combat power will make people feel very twisted. In the early stage, I was lucky enough to upgrade from level 1 to level 3. As a result, I did a task at level 3 and it cost me 999. If this was made into a game, it would definitely get bad reviews. Hey, if you want to go in a serious direction, I hope the author can focus the story frame smaller and start from a smaller place, so that it can be detailed and touching

The comment is don't take it seriously🧠Look, the author's own academic qualifications are not good, the protagonist pretends to be highly educated, and the unique feeling of a middle school student that if I work hard, I will be a genius

I touched a Linghai, and my hairstyle is based on the prototype Nanami Although it is just a bad graffiti, I beg the author to change the brand

The book is okay, but it's uncomfortable to read The protagonists of several major events seem to have done a lot, but the output of scraping depends entirely on the life output of teammates, and the boss relies on gambling or deus ex machina.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Pop off out were a thread was an eye-catcher was was the story was about Jianguo. Now, we readers have such conjectures, and then you tell us how it is, because of what skills or settings, but! We have no feeling at all that this is indeed the case or that it is the case! ! ! Because you only talked about this setting after it was over! It's like a game. If you fail in the end, you tell me that so-and-so is a bad guy, you trusted him so much that you failed, and he rebelled because of something. But in your entire plot, there are no clues about his rebellion or there is only one sentence with unclear meaning and no clear direction. A hundred people will not be able to guess it. This does not mean that the plot is clever, but that the planning is playing tricks on people! Not to mention, facing the nobles twice was not an incitement at all, it was just a matter of wisdom.

Fake Dakong, I've read Chapter 20, and I don't see where he is disdainful. But I can see that the aboriginal people in this world are more disdainful than the others. Also, he is so confident.

See the latest chapter. All I can say is that the author is awesome. Unexpectedly, even the details of the common language, why time travel, and architectural style can be filled in. The world view is huge. Why do gods want to destroy the world? The origin of the world. Later logic is self-consistent. Completely fill most of the holes in front and develop to new heights. What makes me even more pleased is the characters. Many early characters often appear even in the middle and late stages. This is better than most novels I have read. This is the only book that I can still find unexpectedly shocking even when the story line is shortened in the later period. The heroes and villains have superior IQs. Even with character flaws. In the later stage, readers can see that this is not a flaw, but that everyone is trying their best to fulfill their wishes and has no choice. To be honest, even the ending of "Weather Forecast" in which the old world is destroyed and a new world is born is not as good as this book in my opinion (only the later ending). The only pity is that the author's thinking is a little out of the box, which makes the viewing experience a bit messy. Cool writing, love, friendship, sense of mission. You can see it all in this book. In my opinion, this could have been called a masterpiece. It's just that the author may be even more immobile now. . Ps: I always think the author should change his name when naming it. This book could be phenomenal.

It's broken. The god-given pope who is the god of literature has taken action. He's a eunuch.

In the early stage, I could catch some brainwaves, and it was very interesting. In the middle stage, the shortcomings are not concealed, but I can still read it even though there is a shortage of books. In the later stage, I would like to call this book a revenge against society, and all negative comments can be used. The lack of logic, the irrationality of the plot, and the intelligent and insane setting make all the characters become clowns.

Don't finish it! I really think it looks good. Yanzi, don't go, please promise me not to be a eunuch in the future.

This novel is really great, but it's a pity that it's not very popular.

Is this the end of the book? ? Is this a mess? ?