There Is No Bottleneck in Cultivating the Title of Immortal

Don't write about losers, it will be annoying to read. Direction is more important than hard work. Don't follow the crowd. Only with novel angles will you be liked.

It's not cool enough, this thing means nothing

There is no priority in the narrative content, it is all in one stroke, and there is not enough detail. It feels like the author is writing a running account. There are very few historical backgrounds, character expressions and movements.

The relationship between the characters seems to follow the template of Luan Wu starting from joining the martial arts gym.

Wall breaker, the highest usage: generalize something to become a wall of something,

I don't really want to watch the plot after arriving at Yaowang Valley. The feeling of routine becomes heavier as you get to the end, such as the part about breaking the formation, so don't be too deliberate. In addition, if you want to cultivate your immortality properly and do some physical cultivation, it won't make you a good martial artist...

It's very appetizing, come on

Why did you get married out of nowhere?