Dream of the Red Chamber: Building a Child Prodigy Persona from the Start

The writing does have the flavor of Red Mansion, and the words and sentences are also very particular. The author's own understanding is also added to it, and the plot adaptation is okay. At least the character creation is reasonable and does not conflict much with the characters in the original book. Among Red Mansion fans, I think it's considered fairy grass

It would be more comfortable to become a Taoist priest than to be a child prodigy.

If this aspect of the problem can be solved, it would be quite exciting.

I can even imagine the use of this kind of golden finger to cultivate immortality 🙂 When the time comes, the value in the left hand will be higher, and the value in the right hand will be higher Become the Immortal Lord and Holy Emperor, and push everything.

This cheat, any normal person would do some pretense😥

I feel that Jia She's cleansing is a bit too much. Jia She's impression of Red Mansions is really bad. It is reasonable for Jia Jing to defile himself to avoid disaster. However, Jia She's depravity and corruption don't seem to be staged. Even if there is an element of self-defilation, it feels like it is at most 10%.

Just use physicalization to pretend to be an immortal 🙂

A good source of food in Red Mansions. Advantages: The golden finger is pretty good, and it is written smoothly as a cool point in the early stage. At the same time, it does not dominate the game so far. The rhythm of the plot is natural and smooth. Although there are not many words at present, it is basically detailed and appropriate. These seemingly simple two points are not something that ordinary newcomers can do. Of course, it may also be due to the author's extraordinary talent. Then the language is basically in line with the tone of the article, and does not use modern slang that is full of drama, or ancient sayings that are too formal. There is also a classic poem copying section, which is basically treated as a normal plot and used for writing entries. In short, it is not awkward and the poems copied are not the kind of poems that are hardest hit by copying, so it is okay. As for the main characters, the current portrayal is basically good, at least not OOC. Of course, I can accept Daiyu acting coquettishly to her parents. After all, she has both parents now, and she is a child + not dependent on anyone else. But some of the words are a bit difficult to express, and it may be my personal reasons. For example, Yanzheng is Lin Ruhai's reverse scale, the dragon's reverse scale, and you will die if you touch it, and Daiyu screams when she wakes up. It gives me a sense of déjà vu in the fantasy novels of the 10s. Maybe I can change it? Of course it's just a suggestion. As for shortcomings, there are currently no obvious negative points, but the number of words is too few, many characters have not yet appeared, and there is no big plot, so it is not easy to evaluate.

In ancient times, big families had their own seniority, and the protagonist was an inexplicable mysterious character who didn't have any typesetting.

In this article, the couple Jia Min and Lin Ruhai must die well, otherwise there will be no point in the protagonist's apprenticeship. The eldest daughter of the Lin family, Lin Daiyu, who has both parents, and the orphaned daughter Lin Daiyu are not the same person.

I would like to ask if the author will really write a single female protagonist in Dream of Red Mansions?

The best way to create a golden finger like entry is to engage in religion. You can quickly create an entry of omniscience and omnipotence.

Obviously the great sage or Zuo Ci. This route is so cool.

If you have this skill, you can become a god directly. What kind of books should you read?

If you have this thing, you can go to the countryside and pretend to be a fairy.

The author's IQ determines the IQ of the smartest person in the book

Ancient times? It's still a cognitive system, so forget it and rebel. Model worker White Lotus needs you.

I feel like it's a little too harsh on the protagonist. A six-year-old child can have such virtue, foresight, and extraordinary knowledge reserves. It is no exaggeration to say that there is no one like a child prodigy. But in the plot, except for the teacher who was shocked, everyone else had a good attitude. Furthermore, the five-year-old Lin Daiyu writes in such a dignified manner, with the dignified and meticulous attitude of a young lady, it doesn't feel like she is five years old. Summary: The content is good, but a little flawed.

Although I haven't read it yet, those of you who talk about cultivating immortals are putting the cart before the horse. If the people of Liuyuanji really think that he is Wenquxing who descended to earth, then it depends on the author whether his Wenquxing entry will really turn him into Wenquxing. In the same way, the same is true for force. Engaging in religion is a detour.

Start contacting directly, mythical abilities, such as walking fast, shrinking to an inch, entries do not require magic power to support Buddhists have psychic powers, it is easy to find someone to sing the double act Tian Er Tong, find people to spread it Build incense, let people worship your image, such as Guanyin There are many entries

The release of the fifth server means that the protagonist's great-grandfather and Daiyu's great-grandmother are brothers.

Master? You want to become an immortal, right? You don't even know how to address yourself. What can you write?

We don't talk about child prodigies, we talk about the reincarnation of Wenquxing 🙂

Damn it, the author should write classics. There is no future in writing novels. Classical Chinese, my head hurts when I listen to it, and I have to translate it in my head, which is completely incomprehensible. 😅

The protagonist, even the direct son of the Lin family, cannot hold the title of marquis. After all, Lin Ruhai's father does not have the title. Otherwise, Lin Ruhai would not need to take the imperial examination and would directly become an official. If he is able, he should probably participate in the center of the court. The emperor and the Supreme Emperor were competing for power, but the seventh-rank salt inspector and the seventh-rank Lantai Temple doctor had not moved in their positions for several years; even Lin Ruhai's legitimate son had just come out of a poor family. If there was a son to inherit, it would be a scholarly family.

The author's writing is good, it can be regarded as food and fodder, but I found a problem. When writing about Red Mansions, you can't leave the garden for too long. The feeling will fade after being away for a long time. This is my personal feeling.

Is learning calculus at the age of fourteen considered a prodigy?

One look at this introduction and you can tell that it is for Lin Daiyu.

The emperor has nothing to do to the protagonist, so why is he always thinking about rebellion?

Will the protagonist become an emperor, rule the world, and invade all realms?