Keeping a Low Profile as the Void Market Master in an Immortal Sect

Ten million spirit stones... And the protagonist is only at the first level of Qi Refining... That's far too much of a burden... Awkward.

Putting aside other issues, let's look at three major flaws. First, the biggest flaw is that the protagonist spends tens of millions of spirit stones just to advance from level one to level two, and at least hundreds of millions of spirit stones to reach level ten. This is just one major stage; there are several more stages to come, which would require billions of spirit stones!

The cheat system only appeared in Chapter Six; after throwing in 500,000 spirit stones, I'd only progressed one-fifth of the first level of Qi Refining. 😰

Were these spirit stones bought with Zimbabwean dollars? This is ridiculous. This isn't about skill; it's about intelligence.

Advancing from the first to the second level of Qi Refining requires consuming ten million spirit stones. That's pure idiocy. He should just die already.

The protagonist is hunted down within the sect, and the entire sect knows, yet no one cares. If I were in a sect like that, once I become invincible within it, all the sect's resources would be mine. The sect would be sold off like a package deal, and its members would be sold off as mere talent. All I can say is that the protagonist is a complete jerk. The kind of utter jerk.

In the third chapter, the author slapped himself in the face. Anyone with the five spiritual roots is only fit to be a menial servant. Inner sect peaks that do not accept menial servants can only accept those with five spiritual roots. Then the protagonist entered this. They don't accept five spiritual roots at all But it can only have five spiritual roots. The Five Elements Peaks.

First of all, how terrible is this aptitude? It takes 10 million spirit stones to break through from the first level of Qi Refining to the second. Secondly, it's too rushed. The development is too fast; there's no sense of building from scratch, and no protagonist connecting the world.

Can't you see where he's hiding? The whole world knows.

In short, the cultivation realm system is strange, lacking a coherent structure, and the plot offers no exciting moments, making it utterly unappealing.