
Immortal After Retirement, Starting with a Pension
从领退休金开始长生不死
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 176k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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85Chapters
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3.8kRecs
7.5kFans
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Have you ever been an old man and just write?
After reading a few chapters, the concept is quite good, but the excitement is not strong. After defeating monsters, the rewards are not introduced. The logic that drives the protagonist's actions is far-fetched. It feels like any protagonist will have to run up and lead the way.
When writing about Lao Deng, it is best to write down your own characteristics, such as being disrespectful to an old man, a sixteen-year-old bride and a sixty-year-old man, a thief, etc. Make sure someone will read it. After all, sex is the primary productive force.
The author is too young to write about the feelings of the elderly, and he must arrange a female protagonist.
What about the tusk pig? Just kill the big tusked pig that you just said didn't have much money and throw it there?
Adorable and new to collect! Please read it! (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)
This introduction is familiar, I have seen a person receiving subsistence allowance.
Author, you can't just grab a word and use it to death.
The character setting is okay, but it would be boring if the main subject of the confrontation is monsters. It's endless fun to fight monsters and compete with talents.