Immortal After Retirement, Starting with a Pension

Have you ever been an old man? That's why you're writing this.

After reading a few chapters, the concept seemed good, but the sense of exhilaration wasn't strong. After defeating monsters, there was no explanation of the rewards, and the logic that drove the protagonist's actions was very far-fetched. It felt like the protagonist would just run up to any random person and lead the way.

When writing about older men, it's best to develop your own unique style, such as disrespect for elders, a sixteen-year-old bride and a sixty-year-old groom, or a traitor like Cao Cao. That's guaranteed to attract readers, since lust is a primary driving force in the world of literature.

The authors are all young and can't capture the feeling of older people, so we had to include a female lead, hehe.

What about the tusked boar? Did you just say you didn't have much money and killed such a big tusked boar and left it there?

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This synopsis sounds familiar; I've read a book about people receiving welfare.

Author, you can't just overuse a single word.

The character design is fine, but the main enemies are demons, which makes it boring. Constantly fighting monsters and battling other players is much more fun.