Xuanjian: I Have a Property Panel

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I feel like Goldfinger is a bit out of control, but everything else is okay.

The idea is good, but some details are not good, such as the contribution points (this did not appear in the original text, right), the elders of Qingchi Sect (this is also the case, Qingchi Foundation Establishment is called Taoist, and there are other titles such as Peak Master, Ke Qing, etc. But there is no elder), and the name of Peng Zhe is wrong, I marked it.

I will support every Xuanjian fan, come on

It feels like the quality is very high, worth looking forward to!

I'm very sorry😭😭I just found out that the writer's assistant couldn't adjust the order of the chapters, and then the comments were gone after rearrangement.

The author just invited a friend to review the manuscript and found that the design of the emotional connection between the first chapter and the subsequent chapters is incoherent, and the settings of the characters and reincarnation cannot be established, so I decided to overhaul the first chapter tonight.

I feel that the plot can be accelerated. There is no need to grind for too long in the early stage. After practicing Qi for a few tens of thousands of words, you can write the content of foundation building. I personally don't think the plot before foundation building is very attractive. What do other Taoists think?

Some Taoist friends may feel that it is a bit awkward to read the first chapter suddenly, so they re-added a prologue that had been conceived long ago. In this way, the characters and plot should be more coherent.

Yesterday I watched Elbow Da Da's live broadcast and learned some writing skills. I tried my best to show them later. The first chapter was expanded to 4,000 words. The background of the protagonist and the reason for the time travel were also written. It is related to the protagonist's golden finger in the later chapters. You can read it again. Thank you.