Immortal in the Stone!

Within 10 chapters, there is not even a rough world view! The readers don't know which direction the protagonist will develop, what big things he will accomplish, and what kind of big shot he will become. The readers have no idea and basically have no sense of expectation! The protagonist has already experienced the death of his master and senior brother. After reading so many scriptures, he still only roughly understands the emotion of sadness. There is very little description in his heart. Then he suddenly wants to leave the scene and doesn't know what to do. Writing like this is not leaving a blank space, but not clearly connecting the previous and the following! This one lacks appeal again Finally, he comes out to experience the mortal world, but the protagonist is dragged along by the story instead of creating a story that belongs to the protagonist! The protagonist's perception, experience and growth are the key points. Those unpredictable things about human nature are auxiliary, and the main thing must be written well!

Not bad, come on