Jinghong's Son

I hope you guys can give me some more specific opinions, and I will definitely try my best to make changes.

The writing is good and the plot is okay! Recommend!

The writing is good, but forgive me for not really understanding it. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I became more and more confused. The perspective is too confusing. Sometimes it is a supporting role, sometimes it is the protagonist, sometimes it is a dream, and sometimes it is reality. The time is different. Go on, I really can't tell which one is real, who killed the tiger, why did they say that the master is dead and then alive? I guess it's because the protagonist couldn't bear the blow and forgot about that memory? But I really think it's a little obscure, and the rest is even more confusing. I don't know whether the protagonist is crazy now or before. It's too profound and not suitable for me.

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