Legend of Fish and Dragon in Red Mansion

Personally, I suggest that the author read the cool articles. It is normal for the male protagonist to be overpowered by the Red Mansion, but as long as there are achievements, there must be something cool about it. What is the cool thing about this book written by the author in the early stage? Abstract revenge on Wang Xifeng? ? ? Not a buddy, if you don't want to go to the Jia Mansion, you don't have to go. On the one hand, you have to rely on the Jia Mansion to make a living, and on the other hand, you feel that it is a shame to be a slave. Of course there is no conflict between these two points, but what is outrageous is that the protagonist is scolding and doing things at the same time and wants revenge at the same time, isn't it a buddy? There are not many male protagonists who are such a bitch... The male protagonist can be decent or villainous, but who of the male protagonists you write here is disgusting? It's so unbearable, so why is it that while going to Jia's house, I feel very resistant at the same time? The author also specifically writes that Wang Xifeng hates the protagonist. Please, I really hate it and I want you to wash the toilet for the rest of your life. Isn't it good? I'm putting this in front of you. The author wants both and wants it, but I don't know what you want to express... I personally recommend a book called The Emperor in Red Mansions to the author. It's not a hit, but it's quite enjoyable. In this book, the starting point of the male protagonist in the early stage is too high, so I don't know how to write in the later stage, but others at least have a middle to late stage. How about your book? Can I finish writing the eunuch in the early stage? Why don't you understand that the protagonist is lonely, silent, and doesn't speak? When it comes time to take revenge on Wang Xifeng, he will become the big brother again? ? No, buddy, the more I look at it, the more I can't stand it. Ping'er's appearance was quite good. Ping'er's kindness and the male protagonist's misery made the plot very reasonable and flawless. Later, it was clear that he entered Jia's house safely, and then the plot unfolded, which was a good start. It happened that there was a scene where Wang Xifeng tormented the protagonist, and the protagonist took revenge on Wang Xifeng. I didn't look back and wondered if the author wanted Wang Xifeng and Jia Lian to have a fake marriage and have an affair with the protagonist. If so, then I can only say that it was a bit whimsical. This opening is very unreasonable. I really want Wang Xifeng to be the first heroine. This opening is too unreasonable. Too unbearable

As the title says, 20,000 updates per day is pure strength, not a single word is high-tech. Welcome to check it out. One of the sentences I identified was written by AI and I closed the account. I always believe that AI can only be used to facilitate information checking. Any sentence written by AI is for paying readers. The humiliation is also a kneel to the serious colleagues There are a few more points. The first one is the main plot. I will simply say it directly, which is the process of servants to guards to soldiers to generals, and then jump out of the Jia family's independent branch. With the rise of the protagonist, it may be Readers who have read the latest chapter have also discovered that the world line is gradually collapsing, because what I am writing is the process of the gradual collapse of a dynasty. With the rise of the protagonist and the collapse of the dynasty, I have mentioned this main line at least five times in the book and once in the introduction. , I really don't want to tell you that I don't have a main plot until now. Brother, I have been writing the main plot of the garden drama. Maybe there are too many plots, but it definitely does not slow down the progress of the main plot. The slow pace is because the number of words is small. Don't ask me, brother. I'm almost done with it and I'm still asking. I really don't understand what else is going on. Clearly expressed The second one is to have multiple female leads. There is no doubt about this. The currently decided number of female leads with higher roles is three. We may add more in the future depending on the situation. The number of female harem partners will be more, but the roles will definitely not be able to take care of it. If you have favorite characters, I might add them to the role. Also, I don't want to be the same as Qian Long in this book, so there is no original heroine, and it won't be included in all the supplements and supplements of Twelve Hairpins. There are some controversial ones such as the second sister You and the third sister, and Coco Lee who has no sense of existence. Li Qi will not accept it this time The third one is that the protagonist is helping the Jia family now because he works for the Jia family, but readers who have read carefully may have discovered that the protagonist is not a nanny and has never done anything good for the Jia family, so you may have guessed, no I will save the Jia family And one last point, I will update it to 20,000 a day for a month. If something happens next month, the daily 10,000 will be slightly slowed down. I won't cut it just because my grades are not good. I cut it for the last two books because of physical reasons That's all for now, sincerely, Erlang

😂😂😂 This age is a bit unacceptable. Wang Xifeng is one or two years older than Jia Baoyu. In the early ten years before and after the Red Mansion, there were a bunch of older men and women in their twenties hanging out in the Grand View Garden. It was a bit unconventional in ancient times.

The book is a good book. But the pace is really too slow. You now have more than 100 photos, but there is no progress at all. The pace is always slowed down by trivial matters. Even if you want to win over and help someone who works under you, even if a person who works under you does not obey you, it is not worth spending a few chapters to talk about this person alone. If you write like this, you won't be able to finish the book if you don't have two or three thousand chapters. And looking at Red Mansions, it's normal for you to have a poetry club, or you can add separate content, but you can't affect the progress of the main plot because of this. You wrote the layout of more than 100 chapters, even though you said in the book that the status of the protagonist is different from that of the slaves in Linglong Second Mansion, that he is a bit more advanced and that he is a hired man. Relationship, but to be honest, I take it for granted. Isn't it still a dog? He is just a squad leader, what status does he have? Don't overwhelm yourself by writing about it. This kind of position is not important. To be honest, some people can be replaced. Don't take yourself too seriously. It's actually very difficult for you to write more than 100 chapters of "Red Mansions", which is either enjoyable or not.

Both books are eunuchs, how dare I read them?

You write well! You are the material to write this! You must write me five million words!

Based on the introduction, I can bend and stretch. After reading it for a while, I felt that the protagonist has no ambition at all and is still very high-spirited. It is normal to feel humiliated and uncomfortable, but there is no need to show it to the public. Without any plan or action, he just thinks that I will have xxx in the future. He is on the same level as ordinary people. When it is put into the protagonist, it is very humorous. He is not the dark and tolerant man I imagined.

1. The writing is really realistic. If you want to really read a fan fiction, you must combine the current situation with the background of the novel and rely on the characters to analyze it. Don't be careless, otherwise you will get bored after reading it for a while. I believe everyone who has read fan fiction here knows that it is fun. The first part was quite enjoyable to read, but if the chapters are a little longer, or if you read a little longer, you will get bored, and you will abandon the book halfway, or even before the halfway point, you will abandon the book. 2. The pace is indeed quite slow, but the protagonist is indeed steady and steady. This is interesting and understandable. You really need to start a career in the early stage. Otherwise, how could he appear in the Yuanzi play with a foreign name? 3. I don't really agree with some comments in the comments that the Red Mansion contains more court halls. I think the purpose of writing the court halls in Red Mansions fanfiction is to enhance the identity and status of the protagonist. With my identity and status, I came into contact with characters like Jin Chai. If I really wanted to watch court battles or military themes, I would not read Red Mansions fan fiction. The fanfics of Red Mansion are mainly garden dramas, and the romance between children is nothing more than male fanfics and female fanfics. Due to the difference in writing methods, once you have a certain level of strength, you will still have to focus on Yuanzi opera. 4 It is recommended that the author add heteroatom systems later if the status is almost raised in the early stage. Just intersperse the promotion of identity and status, otherwise your writing of Red Mansions fan fiction will deviate from the theme. 5. Those who suggest that authors write fan fiction about Red Mansions and continue writing about the military and politics of the court are either bad or stupid. I am really a fan of Red Mansions. I don't think it's very interesting to write about a military court. If you have to find fault with it, the author shouldn't be led astray. The Red Mansion is originally a novel about love, hate and hatred. The purpose of military affairs in the court is to enhance status and get in touch with Jin Chai. Don't sacrifice the good for the weak, otherwise. To be honest, if you describe Red Mansions as about the political struggles in the court, I might as well read novels that specifically focus on the political struggles in the courts. Why should I read the Red Mansions fan fiction? Don't be led astray.

I saw Chapter 93 and I can't stand it any longer. There are too many mindless plots.

Reminder, the author has a tendency to write group portrait articles, so he wasted a few chapters to write a branch plot based on a situation of more than ten chapters.

There is really nothing good to read, I hope it doesn't end badly...

Is it because the number of words in each chapter is too small, so there are now more than a hundred chapters and there are still not enough words to put it on the shelves?

The front is quite creative, but the more I write, the more clumsy it is. The more than 90 pictures are still not even formal soldiers. Also, the Water Margin and the red-maned horse are well written, but the one with the head raised is really fucking disgusting. The shaping of the previous words is not as good as this sentence, 🤮, you can read it but it's slow.

I stopped reading after seeing Chapter 200 before. I want to ask those who are reading, have you left the Jia family and established your own business in the latest chapter? I want to start by starting my own business😂

Daiyu, Baochai, Qin Keqing, Qingwen, Xiangling, Sichun, these are collected, the others don't really matter.

I haven't read it yet. Please write it carefully. I read it from Jia Jing to now. I am very happy to read the book of Beijing King. You just need to write this book and I will read it. I am optimistic about you

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Let's read a few chapters first. I read the one with the most likes saying that Wang Xifeng has a grudge and takes revenge on Wang Xifeng. You can go in and read it yourself. The person who commented on this may not understand it. In fact, it is just some small changes by the author. In fact, it is a bit like the ancient master and follower. Servants like enemies, it's still feasible to take a look, don't read it with emotions, otherwise you won't be able to read it. Now that I've seen it, I think it's still very good. The author sometimes has to explain it. To be honest, a bad review may persuade many people to reject it.

Two chapters a day is too few 🤐🤐🤐🤐

Because some people think that it is inconsistent for Jiang Lin to be withdrawn before but have a good relationship with Jiang Xian, so I temporarily sorted out the settings and posted them for everyone to check Jiangjiazhuang is a village where families live together. The current tentative permanent population is one hundred to two hundred people. The four major families of Jiang Bu and Jinling, the ancestors, have a close relationship and have an extraordinary status Jiang Buyu There are four sons, so there are a total of five ancestors of the second generation of the Jiang family who settled in Shenjing. The eldest son of the fifth house, Jiang Ying, gave birth to three sons, and the second son, Jiang Zhihe, gave birth to Jiang Lin. The details are as follows (currently only the heads of each house and some Jiang family characters who have appeared or are about to appear are shown, not all of them have been written, and may be added in the future)

It is finally time to fight in the court. The Red Mansion written by Jin Ge and Iron Horse is refreshing to start from the Ning family. It is no longer just Jia Yi Jia Er and the Jia family's descendants. The parents are filthy. It is a garden drama. The author should not write Lin Daiyu's line anymore. We want to see decisive killings, heads wrapped up, changing the world, and women will only affect the speed of Brother Jiang's drawing of the sword.