Hidden Dragon in Red Mansions

Vomiting blood! It's rare that I have the money to subscribe to the original version next year, but I ended up subscribing to this thing. Since I wrote that Yuanchun was my first love, why did I write about being married to Li Gu by the emperor? This is not a question of whether the subsequent plot is reasonable or not. It is a matter of this book. The book was written by the author and the plot was conceived by the author. Why was this kind of plot written? If readers don't like it, the author may not like it either.

To be honest, there are flaws but they are acceptable. The writing is good. The main thing is to give Chai Dai a good ending.

The author's writing skills improved significantly in the later period, and the conception of the story frame became more mature. The only two places that I find more embarrassing are the Tiandihui and Qingfeng. The Tiandihui is always a bit like the setting in The Deer and the Cauldron, but it is actually dispensable for this novel. It is far less influential than other Jianghu forces on the protagonist, but it has a lot of descriptions, and even makes people feel like there is a second male protagonist; Qingfeng has a description that looks like a Dongchang eunuch, and the sudden change in style is very embarrassing, which lasts about two chapters, and most of the time Qingfeng actually looks like a capable warrior, without the taste of a eunuch. I think the author wanted to draw lessons from history and stories from classics to make his story more flesh-and-blood. In fact, sometimes I did read the feeling of a son-in-law. This is not a YY sketch but an independent world. However, the author lacks coherence when integrating the stories of different forces. For example, the White Lotus Sect of the Yang Family in Southwest China is written in the style of a group drama like A Song of Ice and Fire. Although it can be connected in the end, it is easy to interrupt the imagination when watching the series. However, generally speaking, the author's pattern is stable until Chapter 600, and there are at least more than three lines of rebellion. In the early days, when controlling multiple lines, the author deliberately lowered the protagonist's intelligence to reflect the profundity of other lines. However, in the later period, the intelligence of the protagonist group returned, making the hidden lines more tense. The harem mode is not bad at the moment. I hope not to include all of it. The plot of Yuanchun is already a bit embarrassing. If Yingchun Tanchun is also included, it will be a bit inconsistent with the general tone of the work. Of course, the author's historical writing method can be considered to be a low word count, and it is not impossible to include all the endings... Try to include high-quality and sufficient emotional scenes. If the ending of this book is handled well, it should be unique among Red Mansions fans.

The protagonist of this book seems to be Huo Qubing, who is alive and raised by the emperor as his own son, which will be of great use.

The description of Jin Chai in the later period is exquisite, and it is as delicate as the conferring of gods, especially when it comes to Daiyu. The improvement in writing power is so obvious, it's like changing someone to write, it makes me laugh and cry. I have gone through most of the Red Mansions in a few strokes, but the difference is still obvious after reading more.

This is a rare masterpiece of Red Mansions. Of course, there are many unreasonable things or things that I can't understand. 1. In the beginning, the protagonist even kills his own guardian at will, and keeps saying that he wants to seek the throne. He is a proper hero, but after only a few dozen chapters, he says that the Jia family is his weak point, so forget it. He also takes in Bai Xijun, the mother of the White Lotus Sect, and gives her his own python robe. Bai Xijun is still walking around in the python robe. Do you really think that the emperor's blood is a vegetarian? Even after Bai Xijun knew the secret of the protagonist's life experience, the protagonist actually said that she didn't need to worry about it. She didn't have a few days to live anyway. It was not the style of a superior to leave her wealth and life to others. 2. The timeline is confusing. The protagonist was fifteen or sixteen years old when he first took charge of the Yulin Army. During this period, he was training soldiers and fighting rebellions. Finally, he went to guard Sanshan Fort for more than two years, and he was still sixteen or seventeen years old when he came back. 3. The protagonist is two or three years older than Baochai, so he must be at least four or five years older than Jia Huan. Jia Huan won the imperial examination at the age of eleven or twelve, and even the child prodigy Zhang Juzheng did not win the imperial examination until he was sixteen. Just like Jia Huan, how many times did he have to be lectured by the protagonist before he was completely transformed? 4. In order to provide disaster relief, the protagonist, the dignified Grand Governor of the Fifth Army Governor's Mansion, actually took a civil servant to personally enter the underground corridor where the situation was unknown and full of dangers, and he almost confessed inside. Don't you know the reason why the son of a rich man will not sit in court? You also asked your soldiers to provide disaster relief. You, a noble man with a heavy army, still have a high reputation among the people. Do you really have no idea about becoming an emperor? 5. The protagonist looks down on the princes. You can keep a distance from the princes, but there is no need to show it. This is considered contempt for the imperial power. The protagonist doesn't even understand this? 6. The protagonist wants to train Jia Huan to be a civil servant and Xue Biao to be a military general. One of them is a civil servant whose family is very prestigious among military generals, and the other is a military general whose family is rich and powerful. Can the protagonist feel at ease after boarding the plane? After Jia Huan won the election, he was asked to enter the Fifth Army Governor's Mansion to study with the protagonist. Are you really afraid of raising a Huo Guang? 7. It describes too many Jianghu plots and a large number of self-created characters. However, the original characters such as Xing Xiuyan and Li Wen were understated and passed over in one stroke. Also, as a powerful marquis, don't you think it's outrageous that he was taken away from the heavily guarded Duke Ning's mansion by a gangster kid? 8. And there is Yuanchun...

What should I call him Qianlong? The most appropriate name is the reckless man in the Red Mansion. He does things just like Fool Xue. He does what he says.

After watching Wan Tian Qing, I can no longer watch other Red Mansions fans. The descriptions of the female characters are so profound. How can Yuan Chun, Qin Keqing and others be able to impress people again? How can I still marry someone else? It would be better if all the male members of the Jia family are gone. Don't let Qin Keqing marry Jia Rong again.

Is Jia Jing your adoptive father? Or was it your savior that you killed him based on your guesses! It's so heartless and unjust. While saying that he is a modern man who despises imperial power, he also wants to be the emperor! It's really both upright and upright.

This book will definitely have multiple heroines, because when I wanted to add the multi-heroine tag, I found that I could only change it once a month! I always write books with ancient backgrounds that have multiple female protagonists. Besides, why should I wear a red mansion if I don't have a harem?

The emperor proposed marriage to Yuanchun and King Gu just to protect King Gu. The question is, Yuanchun is the protagonist's first love, and was given away by the emperor. Would the emperor be so stupid? If the protagonist is really bloody, he should not kill the King of Gu and the Emperor... I know that the King of Gu did not touch Yuanchun, but what manly man would not touch a woman, so he deliberately left Yuanchun a happy ending that is rare in Red Mansions.

There is no one who doesn't have a harem when writing about Red Mansions. It's not a story about a certain Jiang Danmei and a rotten girl. Besides, hasn't the author laid the "foundation" of a harem? If you don't open a harem, I'll draw circles and hit villains every day to curse you! You say no, Erlang?

Hundreds of chapters and a million words. Sister Lin and the male protagonist are still so salty and salty, it is not easy to keep them in a boudoir and make appearances. . I originally wanted to see her love, but I decided not to wait.

It's getting worse and worse. I saw the protagonist being dragged away by a kid from some gang and then gave up. Damn it, big brother, are you a prince in the capital city, or are you a powerful prince with a lot of troops, being dragged away by a gangster kid? Don't you think it's absurd?

The protagonist of this book is really disgusting. In the first part, he exaggerates how ambitious he is to want the throne and will not abandon everything for a woman. Later, he causes some bullshit fantasy to argue with the emperor for Daiyu. His emotional line is just a mess. He has provoked so many people even if he has no ability.

This absurd situation of usurping the throne is like Liu Fengqing's side, driving out Liu Chan and Zhuge Liang, and no one objects. Cao Pi was confirmed as the successor by Cao Cao before his death, and he was in control of the military and political power. As a result, Cao Zhi, together with the eunuchs and the inner palace, changed the imperial edict. Cao Pi knelt down to accept it, and Cao Zhi became the emperor. The mouse ate the cat and went crazy

It's a bit disgusting, you are really doting on Jia Baoyu, what about Jia Baoyu and the nun, are you the head of the family who is just a mess? Just wipe your butt? He even claims that it's not his father who can't hit him, but you are the head of the family! ! ! His father beat him, his father beat him, what did you fart? And Lin Daiyu pretended to be sick and asked the protagonist to come back to save Baoyu. Damn it, you really have no temper, so you just lick the dog? There is also the problem of Rongguo Mansion. Every time something happens, the old lady just cries with you and then gets over it? ? ? How many times has Mrs. Wang been a demon? Why is Red Mansion successful? Although he is also a cool character, at least he knows who can and cannot be kept. People like Mrs. Wang will kill him if they have the chance, and create opportunities to kill him if they don't have the chance. This is seriously inconsistent with the previous characters! ! Indecisive, how will you fight the emperor in the future?

If I write this kind of indecisive plot twice more, the protagonist can be renamed Baoyu! Hesitant to seize the throne, hesitant to fall in love, even if he cannot be given the position of his wife, he does not even dare to express his feelings, he is not as good as Jia Baoyu! Did the author forget that the protagonist is a time traveler?

There is water in the back. The protagonist is different from Jiajing. The protagonist's father is the prince, so it is not impossible to pursue the title of emperor. Jiajing's father is a serious vassal king and has nothing to do with the throne. This is very difficult. And what are you writing about? Why does the protagonist's IQ drop so much when he becomes emperor? You don't need to be so anxious about pursuing your father as the emperor. You need to establish a firm foothold and you can do it easily in the future. You don't need to establish any authority. A young man from Jiajing came alone. You need people, soldiers, and prestige. Do you need great etiquette to confirm your authority? Don't tell me that you want to write about a dutiful son, no one will believe it.

Killing Jia Jing at the beginning is really disgusting. Even if you have a dog, it will have feelings, right? I've raised you for seven or eight years, so I'm going to kill you right now? He and Lin Daiyu's childhood sweethearts fell in love at first sight when they met the little palace maid? Another Miss Ren comes out and wants to talk about marriage? It's completely out of character; the prince Li Qin's rebellion and border war are just like playing house, just to facilitate the arrangement of the male protagonist's meritorious service and awards. There is no logic at all. How can a recruit who has been trained for several months move forward bravely without fear of death? An anti-Japanese drama would not dare to make up such nonsense.

When I look at it, I feel like the main character is mentally ill and can't control his emotions.

This is a good book. I read it in one go. The author writes it very well. I have already voted for the monthly vote and recommendation vote. I hope the author will make more updates. If the plot doesn't work, please subscribe and support it.

A Dream of Red Mansions is different from other books in that the silver taels are clearly defined. The monthly income of several ladies and the annual income of Grandma Liu's family all set the tone for the price of goods and the purchasing power of money in the Red Mansion. What are you thinking about, author? Inflation is everywhere. During the disaster relief in Shenjing, one person was charged 3 taels of silver for a bed, but it was still too little. Is this reasonable? Is it reasonable to write about a Yangzhou salt merchant who sells hundreds of thousands of taels of water a day? Since you have set the national treasury revenue at 4-10 million taels, what do you think is an appropriate proportion of salt tax for salt merchants? In the middle of the Qing Dynasty, salt tax accounted for about 6.5%-8% Of the entire national treasury revenue. It looks very bad if you write such a random picture. Also, the branch plot is too abrupt and wordy.

Is Qingwen the modern author's parents? Everyone rushed to lick it. Even if I show off my face every day and scold pig's feet, I won't get angry. Pampered as always. I really don't understand modern people's tastes. The maid is not a maid, she is more awesome than the future wife every day. He also said that Daiyu was jealous of Xue Baochai, which made me laugh to death. Have you seen Dream of Red Mansions? Everyone looks down on Xue Baochai, but they still have a good relationship? Tanchun, who has a good relationship, can tell that none of his relatives live there forever!

Baochai is relatively weakened, but the description of Sister Lin is really great. The author's writing skills are not like those of a new author 😁❤️❤️❤️

Political struggle is like child's play, too much language is disrespectful, Chapter 58 is poisonous

The writing is so embarrassing, it gives off a slow and middle-class vibe

The part about reversing the imperial edict is too childish. It's reversal for the sake of reversal. It's retweeted without any logic and bottom line. It makes people want to vomit.

The first is the name of the protagonist, Jia Jing, Jia Jing, you really don't shy away from it at all. Second, as a member of the family, you can be bad or a scumbag. The family that commits murder and arson will help you to get peace if you can. The only thing you can't do is lose your manners and demeanor outside. If you lose your manners and demeanor, I will be the first to beat you to death.

The description of Lin Daiyu in this book is the best. Among all the Red Mansions fan works, the emotional growth of the characters is very well written. The protagonist=Emperor Jiajing was introduced in the later period. This is also the best Lin Daiyu I have ever seen. After the 100th chapter of this article, the progress is rapid. The garden drama is very good, and the character of Tanchun is also well written. However, I suspect that this book is not Photoshopped by the author (it is not at the same level as the author's other two books). I can only say that I don't regret reading it, although the plot is a bit old-fashioned. Lin Daiyu was initially uneasy, cautious, and concerned about the words around her. Lin Daiyu was insecure and arrogant. She then took the initiative for love, rebelled for love, took on the role of Ning Guo's mistress, and became non-dispute after the overall situation was settled. This is the heroine! This is also Lin Daiyu in my heart.