Honglouyuan

The more I write about Daiyu, the more she starts to look like a princess. Although I don't write much about it, it is exciting and lovely. I feel like the author could make this character more attractive to readers. Compared with the big-name male protagonist, Shui Rong's writing is a bit ordinary, and there is nothing particularly exciting about it. It makes me very anxious to watch it. Where is the strategy? What about courage? What about the pattern? Now that the male protagonist is an adult, he doesn't need to be too forbearing. He can either have a bright and bold personality, be resourceful, coquettish and dark, or be steady, mature and decisive in killing, or he can be versatile! In short, it should be exciting to attract discerning readers, rather than attracting a bunch of little girls in the article.

So far, the writing style is still remarkable, and the story of the entanglement between past and present lives also has the charm of Red Mansions. But one problem is that the male protagonist lacks some temperament or dominance. Compared with the gradual growth of the male protagonist in this book, the male protagonist in this book should be a relatively mature character. However, since the beginning of the book, the male protagonist's way of thinking is neither precocious enough in ancient times nor breakthrough enough in modern times. It doesn't look like two fused minds, but rather like a schizophrenia. Another problem is that neither Shuixun nor Chiyuan has a clear goal. As an ancient prince, and a prince who had helped the emperor do many things, it was unlikely that he would have such an ignorant and confused image. As a modern person, it is impossible to enter an environment like the Red Mansion without having your own thoughts or desires. Judging from the original work, the character Shui Rong is either gay or a hypocrite. You might as well try to use the negative perspective of a hypocrite to supplement Chi Yuan's modern principles and more out-of-the-box thinking. Starting from the perspective of the pull between good and evil, the character may be more three-dimensional and distinctive.

Study the plot carefully, it's very different from the previous version.

Why has the level dropped? It's not as stunning as Qianlong, and there are still many dramas, especially the magical change of the status of King Beijing, the relationship with the Tian family, the daily address is not "Ge Ying", and the empress Ding Daiyu, Mrs. Jia can also say that she may not like King Beijing. Isn't this the most ridiculous thing in the world? All in all, compared to the previous book, this manuscript is a bit unreadable

I feel like the author has some kind of hobby. In the last Qianlong, he fell in love with Yuanchun at first sight for no reason and then let him marry someone else. Another woman named Liu is also an unwanted woman, and the protagonist takes her home as a treasure. This book also clearly states at the beginning that Daiyu has not yet had feelings for Baoyu and now she is on the verge of death. Both protagonists are very sharp. Either make the protagonist a ruthless and unjust person, and make the heroine dark so that it can be watched. Or just write about feelings directly. It's very divisive to watch a movie where a great prince does this and that for a little girl all the time.

It's another cliche opening of saving lives, and the introduction is not as attractive as The Hidden Dragon in Red Mansions.

Okay, okay, writing about The Red Mansion is about the transition of joy and sorrow. The love affair between Fairy Jiangzhu and Baoyu turned into a love triangle because of the emperor's gift of marriage. It was interesting and interesting. Daiyu was separated and she shed tears of lovesickness to repay the favor. She spent her whole life just being a wife and spending her life with the male protagonist. , This not only repays the kindness of watering the flowers, but also repays the life, and the male protagonist broke the stamens and was destined to have no love with Daiyu, but Qing had a bad relationship with the male protagonist because of his sister's betrothal, which can be said to be the end of love in the world. This is a masterpiece, and it is also the Red Mansion!

I bet this book won't be a hit. The setting is not good😥

The author seems to like the idea of ​​having equal wives. It is really lacking in novelty to write like this in every book. Daiyu is Daiyu, Baochai is Baochai, and they also euphemistically say that Baochai is Daiyu, and Daiyu is Baochai. The author has come up with such a rational thing, where is the logic? What about human nature? What about creativity? What are you thinking about? Since Baochai wants everything from his deep love for the male protagonist to his status as a princess, and loves the male protagonist so much that he doesn't want to be subordinate to his wife. Since the male protagonist also loves Baochai very much, and is caught in a dilemma between two women, then you might as well write off Daiyu to death early like the previous Qianlong! ! ! ! ! Daiyu only deserves to be owned by someone who has an absolutely pure mind towards her, otherwise it would be blasphemy. Baochai is different. As long as he is a young man with ability, status and noble status, anyone can do it.

I just saw Daiyu being chased. Isn't this a bit brainless? Neither the salt merchant nor anyone else had a reason to kill Daiyu. They even used a crossbow. Did Daiyu have any evidence of rebellion?

Dai Fen is different from other Red Mansion fans, Dai Fen is very pure. I don't know what the author is thinking about recently. The beauty of Lin Daiyu in Dream of Red Mansions never lies in her appearance and figure, but in her unique spirituality, temperament, talent, and rich inner world. She is a completely different and highly recognizable woman. Since this book is not a male protagonist, a stallion, and since Daiyu is the female protagonist, I hope the author can grasp the most basic standards and not compare Daiyu with other women at will, especially with a girl, even Qiao Qingwen. Comparing his wife with other women will make such a man as annoying as possible. It doesn't matter how many women the male protagonist marries, how many he likes, and how many women he loves (multiple female protagonists have already destined that the male protagonist will not be single-minded in love). What is important is to give Daiyu enough respect, love, care and trust. !

Brother, author, your writing style is really good, and the last book is also very interesting, otherwise I would have deleted it long ago and wouldn't be able to type these words. At the moment, I have a doubt, that is, did you label the protagonist as a licker? And Lin Daiyu, please don't let her die. It looks so disgusting.

Personally, I think some plots are too deliberate, such as the bridal chamber and the concubine's court. Lin Daiyu's performance is a big demerit. If you think about the feudal dynasty, a princess could not fulfill her obligations. This nature cannot be covered up as easily as in the article. On a small scale, I'm afraid it will be difficult for her to manage the palace in the future. On a big scale, she will offend the royal family and hold her husband back... And to be honest, since the heroine is Daiyu, the previous involvement between her and Baoyu is unnecessary. It can be briefly mentioned. It will dissuade many readers 😥

It feels like the protagonist is Lin Daiyu, and the male protagonist is the same as the female protagonist. I saw other readers saying that the author should go to female channels, and now I understand what they mean.

To be honest, the last one was very sweet to read, but the results of this one are so bad for no reason. According to Sister Lin's character, if he really liked Jia Baoyu, he would not agree to marry her. So why don't you like your description of this thing? Isn't it disgusting? In the original novel, Sister Lin died on Jia Baoyu's wedding night. Why didn't she ask Jia Baoyu if he liked it. Because I can't resist. How can she make her own decision when marrying a princess? It's disgusting to describe it like this. It's fine to make a date first and wait a year before getting married. Getting married also makes me sick of the whole thing. Isn't it true that women in ancient times married people they had never seen before? If I don't write about it, your psychological activities will be fine. The more you write about it, the more you feel disconnected.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​       The entire imperial court and the emperor knew that Qiu Changsheng was a parallel importer, they still let him lead an army of hundreds of thousands, hoping that he would perform exceptionally well. Instead of replacing him, just to protect the face of the emperor and the court, it's really funny, aren't there many examples in history of hundreds of thousands of armies being defeated in one fell swoop? Aren't they afraid that Qiu Changsheng will suffer a huge defeat and trap hundreds of thousands of troops? Will there be another battle to defend Yanjing later? Aren't you afraid that Wa Ci will capture Yanjing? If the capital is captured, half of the country can be declared disbanded. Taking such a big risk just for the sake of face? To sum up, this emperor is a loser. If he can't do anything, he will lose face.

Why can two people assassinate the emperor quietly? Are all the guards blind?

Absolutely, I can't understand the plot behind it. It's too poisonous. Judging from the time period when Lin Daiyu's father died, how old was Lin at this time? In ancient times, men and women did not sit at the same table at the age of seven, and they still stayed with Baoyu every day. Secondly, no matter how many connections the Lin family has, Lin's health is not good. Wouldn't marrying her make water dissolve the veins? In the first few chapters, Lin likes Jia Baoyu and doesn't want to marry. Secondly, no matter how talented the Jia family is, the Jia family has long been reduced to the third-class general. No matter how awesome the connections and incestuous love are, the protagonist will probably help the Jia family wipe the butt in the later period. Lin is not in good health. Secondly, Gao Jie, the palace's people and sophistication may not be able to handle it easily. To put it bluntly, it is better to marry Xue Baochai. Secondly, she is good at people and sophistication.

Without reading the book, just reading the introduction and calling him "Emperor Brother" is unreasonable.

I feel like this book is getting more and more uncomfortable to read. The male protagonist of the previous book "Hidden Dragon in Red Mansions" suddenly turned into a philandering carrot from the middle, attracting bees and butterflies everywhere (although passively), which is very different from the previous gentleman's character. Fortunately, the story of the road to the emperor is still wonderful. In this book, the male protagonist's love-minded nature has started again. He and the female protagonist haven't really become a couple yet, so it feels like an old married couple is no longer fresh. I'd better change the female protagonist when I write in the future, and don't ruin Lin Daiyu's character again and again. The author must have his own opinions and opinions, and the protagonist's character design must be consistent. There is no need to go left and right in order to cater to certain reader groups. It is really awkward to stick to the top when it is clearly not a stallion novel. There are many factors that make a good article truly attractive to readers, but there are only a few important ones. I hope the author can pay attention to them.

You can watch it, but it's not worth the money.

Why did the emperor call him Brother Wang with a different surname? Does he want to give in?

The main reason was that the readers criticized me. The man broke his guard. He wanted to write about some emotional changes, suppressing them first and then elevating them. But everyone has come to read online articles, just to gain some understanding. The result is always to give yourself a false green head before turning back, but today's readers will leave when they see this. Unless they are really short of books, they will not be able to wait for you to turn around. NTR writing is not so neat. What a pity

If my surname is Wang, will I be called "Emperor Brother" by the emperor? Does anyone have any knowledge?

Daiyu is really uninteresting, she just looks soft and weak without big ideas or opinions. With the male, she just hugs, kisses and talks about love. She is just a spoiled wife and has no sense of existence. (I only know about love and love, which is unattractive. All her scenes are skipped) Of course the male protagonist wants to have a harem, but he is afraid of it and pretends to be affectionate. Chai Dai wants it but worries too much. Isn't it normal for a prince to marry a concubine? Is that so difficult to say? If you have great merit, you can apply to the emperor to have a equal wife. (There is no need to grind on this point) Every aspect of Baochai is more attractive to me. Although I cried several times during the appearance (the first meeting with the male protagonist, the dispute in the palace, and the crying scenes are very impressive), but I don't have that kind of weakness, but I feel strong. The period when they shared adversities in the palace was enough for them to remember for a lifetime, but I feel that the relationship between the three of them cannot be equal. (Daiyu arrived first, Baochai has his own pride, and the male protagonist is passionate but dare not balance it out) The three protagonists seem to have entanglements in their past lives. Did they come here to experience the tribulation? First he scolded the male protagonist for being a prostitute, and then Tanchun felt like he was seducing him, which was quite cheap.