Zheng Dao Yu Yi: the First Civilian to Overthrow the Upper World

The following is the beginning of an article that has similar questions to your article. The dawn light is as thin as silk, drifting along the sea into the fog of dreams, gently caressing the young man's face. The young man's eyes are sleepy and the corners of his mouth are slightly raised. He must have had a good dream. He is sitting lazily at the desk, recording scattered and Fuzzy dream: "You are so unreasonable! Why can't a restaurant sell your wine? Is this wine expensive? Could it be that you look at the dishes and decide that the Sa family can't afford it?" The strong man pointed one hand directly at the center of the man's eyebrows and touched his back with the other. The man's brows were slightly knitted, his facial features were delicate, he was dressed in plain clothes, he was as gentle as jade, and there was no trace of the fireworks of the world. How could he be from this tavern? Look at the strong man again, with thick eyebrows and big eyes, his eyebrows were twisted into a straight line, his face was red and his ears were red, and he kept burping from wine. I don't know what I'm carrying behind me. Its outline looks like a monk's staff, but it's covered with white cloth. The man ignored the strong man, picked up the wine can, and threw it back into the cabinet. It is when you are emboldened after drinking that your temper becomes explosive. Seeing that the man was ignoring him, the strong man took a step back for no reason, regardless of whether there was anyone around him. With the strength of his drink, he picked up the weapon and saw the white cloth flew away, revealing his true appearance. A simple sword as high as a person stood at his side. The long handle was white like Han Palace jade, and the long blade had an arc shape. Without waiting for the others to react, the strong man blew out his breath and slashed at the opponent. The latter seemed to have expected it, turned around and drew his sword to parry. At the same time, the simple sword struck down. In an instant, the two weapons collided with bright fire, and the man actually withstood the strong man's slash. The sword body was shiny and emitted a cold light, and there were faint golden seal characters engraved on the ring of the hilt. The strong man's expression changed, and he immediately retreated and twisted his steps. He shouted "" and used his remaining energy to grab the knife from the upper left side, and lifted it up from below. The man took half a step back, and the blade passed across his chest and to the left. He saw the right moment, stepped forward with his right foot, twisted his waist and hips, and turned the sword with him, hitting the back of the knife. The blow was sent out with the remaining force of the knife. The strong man suddenly found it difficult to stop his attack. The knife was knocked away by force, and the middle line of the strong man's chest was wide open. Seeing the right opportunity, the man stepped forward and sealed his throat, stabbing a line of blood on the strong man's neck. At this moment, the strong man's drunkenness dissipated, the weapon flew out, and the man was completely awake, but his limbs were weak and his legs were weak. Even if the man sheathed his sword, he still did not dare to move. The man exhaled a breath, took out a small celadon bottle from his waist and handed it to the strong man, "The wine, the store... Asked me to see... See... I... Can't do it. Master... Master, the store is coming soon, you can ask him then. This medicine... Can sober up." After speaking, he turned to leave. After hearing this, the strong man's eyes became brighter. When he saw someone about to leave, he walked quickly to the other person, clasped his fists in his hands and said, "I was reckless. This is a little bit of money. If you don't mind it, please accept it." The man waved and refused, "I don't need to... Thank you. See you later." The man waved and refused. His expression kept changing, sometimes calm, sometimes reserved. It was so confusing to watch. Unknowingly, most of the broken silver was taken away from his hand. He didn't come back to his senses until he felt a cramp in his stomach. He quickly took the elixir and said, "Thank you brother. The restaurant's surname is Lin, and my given name is Qingci. I also want to ask my brother's name." "My surname is Li." My name is Chen, I am a native of Taoyuan, Dingzhou. I was born on the twenty-fifth day of the first lunar month. Now my master has asked me to go down the mountain to practice martial arts, but he has not told me when I will return to the mountain. Alas, I have never married. " "Brother Ziqing is not from this net. What do you plan to do? I want to go to the capital to find my relatives. If you can come along, why don't we go together? There will be someone to take care of me on the way, and I will be my host. Brother Xiang Ziqing is not my friend. " You are really amazing at the end. Did you read carefully every word, or skipped most of them before you saw this? Is the writing style of this article particularly good? But you have to answer my next question sincerely. Do you really like reading this article? If there are 100,000 words left behind this article, can you finish it?

The writing in this book is so difficult to understand! The words are too condensed and refined, and there are no connecting words between each small paragraph of text, which slows down my reading speed. I can only read word by word to understand it. There is no more colloquial style, which is not suitable for mass readers. Your writing style is too concise, which is a major shortcoming. I give it 5 out of 10 points.