Surviving in a Qi Cultivation World to Become a Righteous Path

You are reborn again, you are an old man again, you are wearing a book again. Can you bear it?

It's so strange, why the protagonist keeps hiding his cultivation and combat power there. The sect you belong to is not the kind to suppress geniuses, so what is there to hide?

Can another one be put on the shelves to change the world line?

The sect aspect is well written, but you, the time traveler, the old man, the person who travels through books, the person who is reborn, the one who seizes his body and travels through books, can you really grasp this?

As the title says, the pace is too slow, especially when the protagonist is hiding in the sect and calculating his contribution. Resources are important, but there is no need to write about the protagonist calculating resources all the time, right? Speed ​​it up appropriately, and keep it simple for the more repetitive and boring things like having a meal in seclusion and talking about other people with cheats... 😒 Moreover, such a bland and slow pace really conflicts with your introduction and a bunch of cheating characters in the plot. It doesn't have the writing skills to write well, and it really doesn't look good.

The author writes about the daily life of the Zhengdao Sect and is still online, but the problems of the previous book are still vaguely there. It was too thoughtful and I don't know if it can be controlled. First, the protagonist is a time-traveler, then he is going to the end of the Dharma era, and then he is the little brother of Grandpa Ring. He still practices Qi that is different from the mainstream. Then there is the Small Immortal World (a small world where immortal cultivators get angry in the Dharma Age, which is very common) Then there are some book piercers in the sect (who have been taken away) and reborn people, and they pick up an immortal king to play big chess. The stall is a bit too big. To be honest, given the situation of the last book on the shelves, people have doubts about the author.

Will the author stop messing around with his life? What did I think, it was so bad? . . I only made an initial reservation and regretted it to death.

The protagonist pretends to be awesome, but unfortunately he pretends to be stupid✗

It's a bit old-fashioned now, it's tasteless to eat and it's a pity to throw it away.

I feel like you are very good at defeating your own luck. The last book had such a good opportunity.