
Mortal: Settlement at the Beginning, Win the Fairy Wangyou
凡人:开局结算,拿下忘忧仙子
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- Ongoing
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- 995k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 13h ago
- Source
- Qidian
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16.1kFans
342Chapters
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Now the wind direction has changed, and they all want Nangong Wan. They know you are going to give it away at a glance. Nowadays, many guys have read too much and know what Han Li is. They no longer want to read books about licking Han Li. They just want to be taken away. They know that Han Li will not care, so if you lick Han Li, they will sneer at you. Nowadays, it is very rare to find a book that can lick Han Li well. It is not interesting. Everyone is afraid of being criticized by readers. In fact, it is not necessary at all. Just write, and don't care too much whether you read it or not.
Why don't you accept Nangong Wan to go to the Bloody Forbidden Land?
If you don't accept Nangong Wan, don't write so many related plots. It took me a long time to write it and then sent it to Han Li. Isn't it disgusting? It's really tricking people into killing them.
The author personally recommends accepting Nangong Wan. 😁
I think it's better to accept Nangong Wan. In fact, I don't care whether I accept Nangong Wan or not, but I am disgusted by those who like to lick Han Li's 🐶. They are not good people and must be 🐶. And no matter what you do, Licking Han Li, Han Li will not lead you to ascend. To be honest, I have read a lot of books. To put it bluntly, you say you are friends with this kind of book, but in fact, you are biased towards licking🐶, or pure licking🐶, and in the early stage, you are biased towards licking🐶 , the later stage must be licking 🐶, in short, it is better than licking 🐶, because it is difficult for the author to grasp this. Even if you prefer to lick Han Li in the early stage and hide Han Li in the later stage, it does not mean that it is not possible. It is because you prefer to lick Han Li in the early stage or just lick Han Li, which has made many people leave. The rest in the later stage are those who like to read Han Li. If you dare to hide Han Li, your book will be bad. If you don't hide Han Li, you will definitely lick Han Li in the later stage of the book.
It seemed obvious that he was going to give his daughter away, but he only said that he was not interested in Nangong Wan. Isn't your golden finger similar to the original character? A Han Li kid wanted to lick him right there and then, just to get a little closer to him. Why don't you plan for the heroine Nangong Wan?
Among the batch of people who took Nangong Wandu's poison, there were two Han Lis on the same timeline. Not counting the future time Dao Ancestor, there was also a reincarnation hall master - Han Li. He had proved the Dao Ancestor realm with the law of reincarnation, that is, the Han Li in the human world was the reincarnation Han Li and his "himself". Otherwise, there is no way to touch Nangong Wan. How about a system? Samsara Han Li wants you to die, it's just a thought
The technique is too weak and relies solely on external objects. If you encounter someone who is restrained, you will be beaten into a bastard! Han Li practiced physical training, escape techniques, thunder techniques, and sword cultivation to use a foreign object puppet to clear out the soldiers, and his techniques were even more comprehensive. The protagonist's pure fw skills can't increase the probability of breaking through. There is no effect of pure mana, and there is no weapon of great destruction. Crossing the border mainly relies on foreign objects. All the foundation-building skills have only one shield. It's so funny. I don't know why the author made the protagonist so weak that he relies on foreign objects, talismans and pure fw? With the so-called system, it is also a fw. Mortals are the weak and the strong. For a pure FW protagonist, the author made the mortals look like a nursery for babies. Han Li was so strong that he almost died several times. Logically speaking, it would be a miracle for such a FW protagonist to break through the golden elixir! The protagonist of Bastard Shell
There are so many gods and men, but Nangong Wanwan refuses to accept this dispute, and even talks about blocking the spring water, and Han Li will take revenge in reincarnation. I wonder if you just don't let Nangong Wan ascend, or why not ascend tens of thousands of years later? Let the protagonist live in the immortal world and be more awesome than Han Li in the reincarnation, and then let Nangong Wan ascend. Wouldn't this solve the problem? The author has to write a book, because all the readers who want to read Nangong Wan now are the readers who did not want to read Nangong Wan. That's how I am. I haven't read a few fanfics at the beginning and I think it's not good if you accept this. The more I read it, the more I feel like, you're just here to read fan fiction, why do you still care so much about logic? I just want to be happy!
In fact, whether or not to accept Nangong Wan is the same as whether to accept Xun'er at the beginning of the fight against the Xiao family. If you don't accept it, you must be intending to interact with the original owner. To put it bluntly, it is either a nanny or a dog licker, because it is difficult to grasp the middle point. Maybe the author thinks that a normal transaction is like a prostitute for free in the eyes of the readers. If you want to write the spiritual world, the minimum guarantee is about 2 million words. There will always be several dog licking behaviors in the middle. Some readers will definitely leave because of these. If you have more than three heroines, it's better to accept them, even if you want to make her invisible. If you only accept two or three who focus on the heroine design, then don't accept them.
There is no shortage of resources, so Zhao has no choice but to go to the Bloody Forbidden Land, which is speechless.
The male protagonist established the foundation and wrote Chen Qiaoqian as a failure to establish the foundation, and then forcibly added a scene to enter the bloody forbidden land, 6
Author, you need to figure it out. Even if the Yuan Yin of the Dan Jie female cultivator is not assisted by other secret techniques. That would also be of great benefit to the foundation-building monks. Don't always think about setting up some private devices to make things easier. Let the reader accept it. This is just what you take for granted. The one who reads Mortal Fans has not read the original work. Even if you haven't read the original work. I've also watched anime. They all know the settings inside mortals very clearly. So you have to be more rigorous with yourself. Instead of adding random private settings. Then tell me why this is happening. To get readers to buy in. You do this. Not to mention rushing to the street. The score must be at least half as bad 🔨
The protagonist insists on downloading the dungeon, he is so awesome, but he is chased like a dog!
Even with the system, he still feels so frustrated, with two knotted pills lying on his head, especially Hong Fu, who is not like a master at all, he is very calculating and poisonous.
What do you mean by not being confrontational, licking Han Li?
Your settlement has the meaning of getting what you need, but you didn't follow it, or you didn't think well, which resulted in a forced plot, which is unacceptable.
Forehead! The plot setting of this book is really good. The male protagonist is so capable of causing trouble. One plot after another seems too impatient.
Trivia: This book was written by a human
Why does the author have to call her Yan Yan'er? Isn't it Yan Ruyan?
After a lot of fighting, a talisman in the late stage of pill formation and two in the foundation stage can block it. The high-level talismans rewarded in the life-and-death battle can no longer be carried without use.
So far, I think the highlight of this book is that the emotional scenes are better written, not abrupt, with plot transitions, not the fall-in-love-at-first-sight or stud-style type.
Meet one and receive a protagonist and a teddy dog
I always like multi-heroine harem books. I don't even bother reading if there aren't more than 4 harems. This one seems to have more than 4, so I must give it a good taste.
The plot is pretty good, the ideas are clear, and it's not just about cultivating immortals.
Why haven't the recent golden fingers appeared?
After returning to Tiannan after Nascent Soul, it was so frustrating to watch. It didn't feel like the tape period at all.
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It's pretty good, but it's a bit difficult to conceive a baby. I don't have the chance.
I would like to promote the new book of Mortal on the basis of my treasure, and wish the author better and better!
All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!
He ran away without even reading a single page. At first glance, it was just nonsense. It was nonsense that he couldn't reach the God's Hand Valley on the sixth level of Qi training. Mo Caihuan, a mortal, could run to the palace and the Yan family's violent fort. You just looked at it and said nonsense.
To be honest, this book feels very logical among the fans. If you don't agree with me, I'd like to find a better book. I've read all the fans one after another in the past few days.