
The Future Blue Star Who Cultivates Immortality as a Respected Person, I Will Become an Immortal with My Martial Arts
修仙为尊的未来蓝星,我武道登仙
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 107k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Your setting is actually quite interesting (future world of immortality + martial arts ascension to immortality), but the rhythm could be adjusted a bit. For example, in the first sentence, there is no need to introduce "New Kyoto" first, just let the protagonist appear directly, and readers will get involved faster. The golden finger can also be revealed earlier to let readers know "what exactly this book is going to be about." Some seniors told me that Qidian readers lack patience and editors may only read the first few hundred words, while newcomers need to feel comfortable beforehand. I am also a newbie, still learning. The above is for reference only.