The Quanzhen Cult Leader of Rebirth of the Condor Shooting

I suggest that the author systematically revise the first twenty chapters. In fact, your later writing is quite good, but the first part is too slow and it is easy to persuade everyone to quit. After all, fast food literature is mostly popular these days!

If you write about Quanzhen Taoism, then I hope there won't be a female protagonist. Quanzhen Taoism is about lust and caution, so just write scholarly articles. When you are a leader, you can't make mistakes on women's issues.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and I'm speechless. The author has deliberately set up his characters, especially Zhao Zhijing. He wants to be described as a heinous person. He is always jealous of talents, narrow-minded and intolerant of others. Has the author ever thought about the reason why Zhao Zhijing's status in the Quanzhen Sect before he was exposed was only lower than the Seven Quanzhen disciples, Yi Zhiping, and Zhen Zhibing? Is it just because of his kung fu?

Why are so many people yearning for the world of martial arts? In addition to all kinds of magical martial arts secrets, there are also unique female warriors who have various grievances and hatreds with the protagonist. As a result, it is your turn to travel through time and become a Taoist priest who cannot get close to women. It is a bit speechless?

Just read Chapter 3, it's this kind of shrew quarrel again, classmates are tearing each other up, it smells like a female pornographic doll

There are no plug-ins. It is said to be integrated with the memory of the original person. The original person is just a teenager. He has a sufficient understanding of martial arts. You, a modern person, cannot understand the secret manuals given to you.

I have been reading martial arts since I was a child, and I have always longed for that misty world, and I have always had the idea of ​​writing, but I was always inert. With the encouragement of my family, I finally started writing this Condor Shooting fan work. Although my writing skills are average, I wrote every chapter with great effort and care. In this fast-paced era, many people feel that there is no market for slow-paced and low-level martial arts novels. I was also very nervous when I started the book. Fortunately, there are sunying1984, Bitcoin rises to 1 million US dollars, and Book Friends 202603 The support of many book friends such as 15132824473 and liwufeng1111 not only gave me recommendation votes all the way, but also continued to read and gave me many good suggestions for revision. It was your enthusiasm that kept me going. Today I have successfully signed a contract with the Qidian editorial team. I will write more carefully in the future, live up to everyone's love, and strive to create a poetic world of classical fantasy, chivalrous tenderness, and my gratitude to the editor Qing Huda who discovered me. In addition, the author is currently preparing to revise the published chapters to improve the quality of the manuscript. After all, you have to do better after signing a contract, so the update speed may slow down slightly in the near future, but the minimum limit will be at least 5,000 words per day. Thank you all, I really appreciate it!

Li Zhiyuan's martial arts skills are only a few years old, can his martial arts be so high? The author can't just use golden fingers just for fun 🪖

It is recommended to revise chapters 789. The plot is too deliberate and bloody.

Quanzhen sect cannot get married, so there should be no heroine

Editor's notice: It will be released on the 1st. I will add another chapter tonight. Thank you all! There are too many things to say, so I'll talk to you in detail in my acceptance speech. I'm going to type and save the manuscript first.

Let's go quickly, this time it's Li Mochou

Is Calling Shennong another book about martial arts?

It's like a running account, what's the highlight? Primary school students' composition

Since the Quanzhen Sect is a gimmick, we must abide by the rules.

Do you want to clear up Li Mochou? So perverted

Are you trying to persuade me, who likes serious Taoist literature, to quit, are you still trying to fight for hegemony? The era of peace is no longer popular, and the population has paid for it, but you are still involved in involution?

I feel that after chapter 80, both plot advancement and character imitation are getting better and better, and the martial arts scenes are also very exciting 😎

Although the plot of the original work was borrowed from the starting point of not wanting Huang Yaoshi to take action, it was still a bit awkward. Huang Yaoshi's "Nine Yin Manual" was originally obtained from the old naughty boy Zhou Botong. In other words, he got it from the Quanzhen Sect. The old naughty boy even went to the island to ask for it. The return of the scripture by the protagonist is, in the eyes of outsiders, equivalent to the Quanzhen Sect recognizing Huang Yaoshi's ownership of the Nine Yin Manual. So what does the other four people's recognition of Wang Chongyang (including the ownership of the "Nine Yin Manual") count in the first Huashan sword debate? What's the point of Zhou Botong looking for Huang Yaoshi? In short, it doesn't matter who gave the "Nine Yin Manual" to Huang Yaoshi, only Quanzhen's teachings were inappropriate.

Quanzhen disciples don't abide by the sect's rules and precepts? They traveled through the past and created tombs of the living dead to learn the Nine Yin Scriptures. This is a direct taste of the two precepts.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

Hey, don't buy a ticket when you get on the bus. Be brave and learn from Zhou Botong.

It would be nice if there were more emotional scenes😄

The author's writing style is quite like Jin Yong's. Come on, write faster. There are only thirty chapters!