One Person's End of the World

It feels very good. It maintains the sense of déjà vu in describing horror and big scenes in the past, and also adds some humorous content. It is not as serious as in the past. The overall feeling is that it can be read. It is a big improvement compared to the previous one 😄 The monthly vote and recommendation vote have been voted, and I hope to speed up the update progress 🔪

On the contrary, if you keep cutting books because the initial reading is not ideal, you will only end up losing all the readership you have accumulated.

Cola, let me give you a suggestion. What you wrote in your last book was too extreme, and the timeline was too rushed. Your life was hanging by a thread every time. Who would like to read it? I am tired of aesthetics. It takes a period of time to develop after passing the limit of life and death, and the time is more relaxed. Who can bear it? The last book was just a few months away from irreversibility. I hope your book will slow down

Traveling between two worlds, it feels a bit like having a suite in the apocalypse, and it's a time-travel for all mankind. It's quite exciting.

This book took a long time to be conceived, and the pace is relatively slow. It is not the kind of book that will hit the spot immediately at the beginning. I hope all the bosses will support me with monthly tickets and follow up. Bosses who support it can join the group. Bosses who support books can read the previous book, but remember to swipe to follow up. Thank you very much.

F*ck, other authors and eunuchs would at least say it's okay, you have no news at all.

Don't try any other timeline tricks. It's boring. Science fiction novels that use time travel, timelines, and parallel worlds are pseudo-science. But there are still some people who like it. I don't think it's attractive. It's better to tell the story in a down-to-earth manner. The other world is just another world, and it has to be said to be the earth where civilization has stopped after the catastrophe. Human arrogance is arrogance.

Can't you even say a word? You have ruined your character like this and people are just trying to read you.

The first book is really good, and the exciting group portraits are also well written. Although it is unfinished at the end, I still have expectations for the author. I didn't expect that it will be endless after cutting it. Can I improve the outline and write it?

The author is eager for success and has a broken mentality

The first is that the protagonist was severely abused in the early stage, and various crises hit the protagonist seamlessly, which gave a bad impression. The second is that the rhythm is seriously out of balance. The rhythm in the early stage is very tense, and various monsters are killed without stopping. It is very tiring to watch. In the later stage, I was not sure again. I suddenly raised the tone too high and got myself into trouble. I hope I can take my time this time

Cut it off and at least say it, your character is completely ruined if you act like this.

My grades in the previous one were very good, but my grades in this one were poor. I gave up because of the big gap in my heart, right?

The author's big scenes are pretty good, and they're god-level

At first glance, this profile looks like a 300-pound two-thorned ape fat house.

The case was solved. The author played Genshin Impact and went to the second dimension.

The logic is very confusing The golden finger of the protagonist in Chapter 5 explains it. But I didn't see the actual effect later. Chapter 7 Everyone else has traveled through time again, and the end has truly begun! But the protagonist went to his own sanctuary in the apocalyptic world he traveled through in Chapter 1? So the question is, does the protagonist stay in this world or travel through time? Then you go to the dark world again after three years? Ah! That's right? I read the article back and forth over and over again, but I still don't understand the logic. . . It is inevitable for the author to cut off the book. He still has some money left to eat. It is estimated that after eating up the money, he will write a book well. . .

Xiaomi Li's death was too hasty. If a relatively important supporting character in the early stage was offline like this, I think many readers would find it difficult to accept it.

Is the author a professional eunuch?

Is gold always shining, or is it a sudden flash of inspiration from the previous book? 🙂 The big scenes, sense of urgency, and crisis in the previous book are quite good and very immersive. I have only experienced this sense of immersion in the big-eyed "Embers of the Deep" by the second author. Just calm down and polish it carefully. In fact, many authors are not as good as the books they wrote before.

Compared with the apocalypse on the road or the apocalypse on the ship, the setting of the apocalypse on the train is much better.

The last book on Civilization was really good, but I don't know why I cut it.

What's wrong? I stopped writing or asked for leave.

Another arrogant little loli, looking ex

I was the last one to get into Civilization. This book really touched me, but it's a pity that the author cut it. I recently searched for books and saw that the author has opened a new one. I was very happy. When I saw the update three months ago, more than 40 chapters were cut again... If the results are not good, update it. Gold will shine wherever it is.

The investment in the new book is gone, which is good. It made me at least 9 points.

It's really amazing. Why did the introduction change again? I changed the introduction at least three times, and each time the content was different. The second time I added a system, and the third time I added a lolita. The co-author had no idea how to write it.

This is my second book again

It's pretty good-looking, but I don't want to be a eunuch.