Doomsday: I Build an Infinite Train

,, Most of the time when the protagonist is in danger, he seems to have lost his mind. He is reckless and does not consider the consequences of his actions at all. The plan for each action is extremely hasty. If you were not the protagonist, your teammates and yourself would have died long ago. From the author's point of view, it is to create a sense of crisis, but your crisis is based on the protagonist's logically confusing actions, which makes people very uncomfortable. Many readers have problems with spending in this chapter, but you never change it. You still write in the same way of sacrificing logic. It has been like this many times. I thought it would get better and better, but the result is still the same... I feel this way until Chapter 233. If there is any improvement later, I hope readers will give me a kick. I am very grateful.

I think the most outrageous thing is that this thing of rape exists in a setting where the end of the world, order collapse, civilization is about to be destroyed... And there are still people! Able! Running around in this dangerous world? ! How can it withstand the dual pressure of the end of the world and the human government? ! How can you stay organized under such pressure? ! Can we conduct cutting-edge TMD research under such extreme conditions that even the strongest research team in mankind cannot reach? ! If a traitor has this ability, why not let this traitor organization be a beacon of human civilization? Except for the shortcoming of having a slightly crooked butt, I feel that the beliefs, perseverance, organization, execution, technological level, employee protection, knowledge of the world, and research on darkness of this traitorous organization are all far superior to those of the Phoenix Society and the Old Federation. There is a future for following them.

I've caught up to the latest one now, so I'll probably give it a review. Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Quite beautiful. There are two biggest features. One is that the climax of each chapter is great. The scene is macroscopic and smooth, making people want to watch it more and more; The picture is strong, the author seems to be describing a movie, and has divided the lenses. When watching, there is a picture in the mind, like watching a blockbuster, which is very refreshing. Another feature is that the setting is sufficient, and the plot lines can be extended very far and are very complicated. Big brain and plenty of knowledge. It can be seen from this that the author has worked hard. I believe that the author has written more than 30 meters of outlines. I feel that there may be tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of set outlines. This kind of richness is impossible if the author does not pay attention (because I have also been an author, and I can see at a glance that this is completely different from the kind of popular and refreshing articles, which can usually be completed in one day. The rough chapters and outlines are enough for this book. It takes a long, long time to think about it, and I guess I have to look up information while writing, and it also needs a lot of inspiration.) The remaining small advantages are that the group of characters are quite exciting. They can't be said to be lifelike, but at least they can be said to stand up. There are so many real people, and characters appear in every big chapter, so that many of us readers can't remember the characters who appear at the beginning. In short, the advantages of this book are the climaxes, ups and downs of the plot, wonderful settings, rich illustrations, and substantial content. It is really a good article. But it also has the following disadvantages: Disadvantages: The stakes are not big enough, the combat power is suppressed and the doomsday is too tragic, making it difficult for readers to survive. The other one is that there are too many battles and it is always tense (especially in the early stages of this book, which is basically the same as not developing, and constantly searching and fighting). Critical review: Good writing, but there are also some problems, which prevent it from reaching a higher level overall. The problems are mainly concentrated in the first half, and there are two big problems. One is, of course, that the author's quality was a little low in the early stage, the rhythm was a little wrong, and it was always tight. The second is also bigger: what the author wants to write is different from what many readers who click on the title of the book want to see. To put it simply, what readers want to see is a post-apocalyptic farming and development flow that is cool and cool, and what the author writes is an ultimate difficulty mode apocalyptic flow. You see, those who clicked in and read the title of the book thought that you were one of those doomsday farming and development streamers, just like the heavy card in the apocalypse a long time ago, cool transformation and development, others are desperate and the protagonist is very rich. Conquer a few more guys and women and then go out and show off. The core strength feature is the expansion of mechanical abilities and the development of imagination. The core cool thing is that although it is a stormy and desperate doomsday outside, inside it is a down-to-earth farming life with sunny wind and sunshine. It is such a refreshing feeling of contrast. (Most of the apocalyptic books may be like this now, but to be honest, although the background is the apocalypse, the essence of this is the upgrade flow of superpowers and monsters. It is just that the background is set in modern times and has a more sense of substitution.) But this is not the case. The author's book features an extremely, extremely, extremely desperate apocalypse! What this author wants to write is an absolute apocalyptic novel. It is an apocalypse where the protagonist has to keep running even if he opens such a big laurel. This is a story about the end of the world where everyone in the world is always making progress but is in despair, and the protagonist acts as the savior again and again, gathering the power of the masses to break through the desperate situation and rush towards the dawn. Below this, there are many high-octane scenes (the following contains light spoilers, newcomers can avoid them): the high-altitude climb in the first chapter, the huge war in the second chapter, and the turning of the tide in the third chapter. (Trying to be as vague as possible, there should be no spoilers 🙂) In short, the core and exciting point of this book is the hope in despair, the united struggle against the doomsday, and the protagonist who saves the day from danger time and time again and acts as the savior. It's quite nice to watch, but it must also be quite difficult. This makes the protagonist very frustrated and difficult in the early stage. As a result, readers are easily "poisoned to death" at the beginning and cannot see the excitement behind it. Think about it, when they see this book that guarantees good grades and look at the title, they must be full of expectations that they have found a treasure. But who knows when they come in and see that WC is fighting and running all the time, with no time to develop their roots, of course they feel uncomfortable and want to spray. Before this book was released, the plot was mainly about "search, fight and withdraw", and the frequency of fighting was quite high, leaving very little time for development, and there was no time for crazy development. This is also concise and makes readers a little unhappy, because the protagonist in the reader's book is the protagonist. After experiencing a war, the protagonist has no gains, or the gains are not big enough, so he feels unhappy and feels that his combat power is deliberately suppressed. Therefore, it is easy to abandon the book in the early stage and cannot see the exciting parts later. Those readers who can hold on until it is released are quite capable. They must be old bookworms with a high level of appreciation. Above, the core of the author's main plot is not the post-apocalyptic farming, development and invincibility pretense style that everyone thought at first. That's good, I also liked watching it before. But the style and core of this book are also good. Let's not talk about whether it is superior or inferior. If the style is different, you can also try something new and fresh. My suggestions to the author are, one is to pay attention to the rhythm, don't fight intensely all the time, there must be meat and vegetables, and balance. I'm doing pretty well now, and I can see that I've made a lot of progress. Another point is to add more excitement. To put it simply, after the protagonist takes the adventure, the harvest must be big enough, and cannot get nothing, otherwise the readers will feel aggrieved and uncomfortable. The bigger the harvest, the better it is. Of course, if there are too many, it will become a cool article, and it may not be the author's original intention. You can make up your own mind. When you have time in the future, you can revise the previous ones a little bit, and your results should be much better. Or the next book will serve as a warning, and the results should be even better. (Of course, everything is just a personal opinion, the author can completely ignore it. Now your rhythm is right, just stick to it, don't care too much about other people's opinions to affect yourself 🌹🌹🌹) In summary: Writing power: 85 Outline: 90 Tension: 88 Overall review: 88 Above the masterpieces, below the masterpieces 🌹🌹🌹

There was a big problem in the early stage. Originally, I came to see the doomsday upgrade train to create a mobile fortress, as well as the emotional bonus of Snowpiercer. However, after reaching chapter 30, the upgrade progress of the train was still 0. On the contrary, more than ten of the thirty chapters are all about women, or the protagonist goes out to fight with a short knife. The talent of the Heart of Machines only has a sense of existence when it provides skills, and there is absolutely no content I want to see.

The author has not grown up at all. How many chapters have it been? The protagonist is also intermittently intellectual. He is deliberately creating danger for the sake of danger. It can obviously be prevented, but he just doesn't prevent it. Hey, it's just for fun. Fuck it.

1. Miscellaneous The biggest feeling after following it so far is that the elements are mixed. The key is that it is not spread out. It feels like there are a lot of lumps. The characters are also produced a bit too fast, resulting in less descriptions for each person. Then the characters cannot be established, and it looks a bit messy when put together. The plot is also a bit messy. You can probably understand it at the beginning. It is just a line, save the female teacher, and then drive around. Later, the elements become more complicated, and the plot becomes a traditional apocalyptic adventure. 2. Writing Power The biggest problem is writing power. Some details are not described in depth. How to understand it? There are more introductory sentences and less descriptive ones. It should be the other way around. If you think the plot is not important, give an introductory introduction and describe the important ones in detail. This way, a detailed rhythm can be formed. Describe more and introduce less, and a clear plot will be formed. At present, it feels like it is stuck together. 3. Theme Always write with your theme in mind. I saw that the author introduced a lot of things about the worldview in the introduction, but most of the authors who clicked in didn't care about that. They should just read the word "train". Because you are a road writer with a very clear purpose, to escape from the eternal night, then this is your main line, and the most important thing is the Infinity Number. You can't write ten short plots as well as write one daily life on the Infinity. For example, how do people survive on the Infinity, what is the scenery outside from the Infinity, the psychological state of daily life, how to arm the Infinity, what problems are encountered in the process, you can go deeper and write more, because this is your topic, no matter how you write, it will not be wordy, no matter how you write, you will not go off track. 4. Poisonous Points Last point, readers who read about shelters or RVs like the flood outside, and I enjoy the security of shelter in a small safe zone. If you write that the protagonist always runs out, it is equivalent to crawling out of bed in a ghost movie... Although no one says it, this is actually destroying the sense of security for your readers. Assuming that the description totals 100 points, then the distribution should be Infinity>Protagonist>Team>Individuals in the team>Survivors outside Infinity. Infinite accounts account for 45, the protagonist accounts for 25, the team accounts for 10, other individuals account for 5, and outsiders + side plots account for 15. It's not the people outside who take up 15, it's the people and things outside who take up 15.

Seeing 288, it is all about counter-logical survival methods from beginning to end. We know that development is very important after playing a game. This novel uses many inexplicable plots of counter-logical survival methods to force the pig's feet to reduce the development time, and also makes the pig's feet look stupid to reduce the development time again. If you put it into normal people's thinking, just like the comment said, picking up big items during the day and small items at night is developing all the time.

What I want to see when reading this book is that the protagonist gradually upgrades the train, recruits various talents, and picks up garbage and hamsters. The theme can be wandering and escaping, or fighting against darkness; the content should be about meeting all kinds of interesting people or things, not all kinds of intrigues! Judging from the intrigue in this question, there shouldn't be many people involved. Wouldn't it be nice to just wander around, pick up trash and fight monsters to upgrade? Can't you write about some interesting experiences?

This book can also reach LV3... Is the threshold for reaching LV3 from the starting point so low now...

In the early days, the Infinity had a hot moment at the airport, and there were a lot of descriptions and pictures of train modifications and upgrades. But when it came to Dawn City, it stopped completely. It was all a mecha melee. The Infinity was too low-level and useless. Then the train to the Ocean Railroad had to be upgraded. Good guy, I just connected the Queen Mo to the Infinity locomotive and fooled it. It turned into the Infinity Queen. I don't understand where the "Building an Infinity Train" in the title of the book is reflected. I like grand narratives, but in the end it only arouses emotions. The thunder is loud and the raindrops are small, and I can understand it even if I don't have enough writing skills. But at least the content and title of the book cannot deviate too far. The author probably never thought about how to upgrade the train. He just wanted to build a spaceship and put a locomotive in front of it. My suggestion is that it is better to change the title of the book, otherwise the title will be more confusing.