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It's so long-winded and there's so much nonsense. Can you please delete it?

A question comes to mind. If the heart can be cloned, wouldn't Linglong Heart be mass-produced?

It's not that you are a new book. How can you attract people with so few new books? Not to mention ten thousand words, at least five updates. Since you write well, forget it this time. Remember to update five tomorrow.

If you can understand the Tianjie Kung Fu, why don't you report it to the school to attract investment and solve the debt problem quickly? You have to wait until someone comes to find you.

The writing isn't bad, but it's just hard to remember. Neither the plot nor the characters are outstanding 🙂

Is it that simple to ask before? The protagonist didn't even say his guess. And the level of their professional staff makes me wonder how humans survive.

No, buddy, if I pay for books at Qidian. Com, I'll just have to

I ordered a few photos, and everything else was fine, but that Jiang Xincheng just appeared, and to be honest, it was a bit disgusting to directly release the information and then condition it on others to post photos of their abdominal muscles. I don't think this is fun, I just feel a bit disgusting. To be honest, if a man goes around asking for photos of women's abdomen, many people will say it. I think the same thing is true for women. Isn't this behavior different if it cannot be a woman? Moreover, this is an important female supporting role. She asks everyone for photos of their abs when she appears. In the end, the male protagonist strips off his upper body and sends them to her. So there must be a lot of photos of half-naked or fully naked men sent privately? This kind of behavior can only make me think of xxn. It feels like an important female supporting role or one of the female protagonists has created such a plot, which ruins the perception. I hope it can be changed or at least patched, right? Otherwise, I just feel that this role is inferior. I think everything else is fine. I hope this point can be changed, otherwise I'm really worried about the bad work that will happen in the future.

It seems that the author likes to be passive rather than active. He should be tied to a small dark room, holding a small leather whip, and updated severely!

At the level of food and grass, the writing is okay, but I feel that the focus is too much on cultivating immortals, and the "weird" parts are much less. Originally, I wanted to see the combination of weirdness and suppression, or what kind of wonderful reactions it would have with cultivating immortals, such as learning the corresponding skills to refine the negative emotions caused by weirdness and using it as a source of power to suppress the revival of weirdness. However, at present, it feels like it is just a modern fairy tale with a weird flavor. I only saw the free chapter, and I don't know what will happen next. Maybe it will be better when I save a million words.

The writing is good, but the updates are too slow!

Come on, author, what you wrote has exceeded 90%, Xiaoqing, novice, but the updates are too few and too slow.

It's wonderful. In the early stage when there was no weirdness, it looked normal. But after adding the weirdness, it became wonderful. It's quite exciting to use exercises to offset the side effects of entries, and to use the effects of entries to control weirdness.

The biggest advantage of this book is that it uses several relatively good settings, such as weirdness, cost, and modern cultivation of immortality. Moreover, the plot doesn't drag on. If you don't expect the transitional plot, you can just skip the useless daily life. It's good to catch up in one go. But the author didn't write it in depth at every point. The entries obtained have no sense of existence. They are published in one breath. The protagonist is not developed much, and the side effects are relatively empty. They only play the role of grading the protagonist. Every weird thing can be expanded and written, but in the end, the second dungeon went on a business trip for seven or eight times in a row, and then it was easy to get through it after the appearance, which seemed a bit cheap. If this continues, I feel like there is a little less content to write about.

People with exquisite hearts are too playful and attract many women. The desire became stronger and stronger, and Linglongxin decided to become one with them. I eat, eat, eat, and you all come to my belly.

Update it quickly, can't you do two updates a day? Are you raising fish?

What kind of novel is this? If it's a light novel, I won't read it. If it's a fantasy, why would you post it here?

The upgrade flow was well written, but in the end it turned into a harem flow.

No, I'm not a buddy. You should write it diligently for three months after all.

The pace is a bit too fast. I can't write about running at the speed of light less than one million times.

At least the amount of updates must be full!

When will this competition end?

That's it, buddy, just update this little.

Why is it so slow🔥😡

Why is the update so slow! 😡😡😡